Date: 01/19/09 11:57 am Title: Chapter Two
GASP!...i wonder what bill can keep from happening??hmm..lolz=)
cant wait for the next chappie!!
Author's Response: ponder, ponder.
Updating as soon as possible. ;)
Date: 01/19/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh fuck! It a long time since I last read something so fucking great about drugs! I really love it and I seriously think you should conrinue and update very soon! Thank you for making my heart beat faster!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will update as soon as I can. :D<3
Date: 01/19/09 11:17 am Title: Chapter Two
So sad but I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks. (:
Date: 01/18/09 06:55 am Title: Chapter One
Why did it cut my review? o.ò
Okay, I was saying...
Simone is a weird woman, her place is with Bill and with Tom. But it's still chapter number one, :)
And... ehm. Ah, I didn't catch even one mistake; maybe it's because English isn't my first language but to me it's written brilliantly and originally as always. So, I hope you do go on soon. :)
I really hope, lol.
Take care and don't make me suffer too much, XD.
Kiss kiss, love you (L)
Author's Response: Hon, I love your reviews. They make me smile. They're so helpful, and I just love them. And you. :D
I especially love your deep insightful analyzing of my characters. It's amazing. Thank you so much for the review, and I hope you like the rest of the story as it progresses. (:
Date: 01/18/09 06:51 am Title: Chapter One
Robbie...
I think I've always let you know how I love your stories and the way you write them... and of course I already know I won't surely be disappointed by this one. Indeed, this is promising me to be one of the greatest stories I've ever read.
Oh my God, I don't know how you can do this to me, but I felt this endless sadness from the very beginning. I liked that you began to write about Tom's addiction right in the first sentence, you already got me totally hooked then.
And it was so heartbreaking. The anxiety was there for me to feel all over the chapter, and the pain as well. I usually love happy endings... but I can't beg you to write a story with flowers and roses and romantic kisses and to put a "and they lived happily forever" at the very end, it wouldn't be fair of me, even though happy endings are my favorites. I think this won't ever be any more intense than it already is even if they "will live happily forever"; I do trust you, and I know this is gonna be great, that's for sure. :)
I'm not too fussed over Drugs Use, this is not one of my favorites, but what you write, that is one of my favorites, and as I earier said, I know I'm gonna love it. And, why not?, maybe I'm even gonna cry over it, :)
Can't definitely wait to see where this goes. And you're right, Tom seems a kid. I can't wait to see Bill's behaviour and how he wil react in the future, how long he will resist or I don't know, how longer it will take him to handle before he collapses... not that I don't like Tom, but seeing a drug addicted from another point of view is turning out to be very interesting.
I don't know if I like Simone. What is she doing at work? His son is addicted and she's at work? :O
Weird woman.
Date: 01/18/09 01:10 am Title: Chapter One
wow way different from the stories I have been reading lately.
like the whole troubled tom that needs help before it's too late.
I even like your bill character eventhough I shouldn't because of the way he handles the situation but it's understandable when you love someone you do everything you can to help them be happy even if its killing him and yourself.
Date: 01/18/09 12:44 am Title: Chapter One
WOW!! I'm hooked. Brilliantly written. Seriously!! I'm eager to see what happens. I hope Tom recovers from this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! (: