Date: 05/18/09 07:00 pm Title: Chapter Four
Aww...this is a good story and you really have done well with writing about a heroin addict, quite accurate.
Date: 01/23/09 08:29 am Title: Chapter Four
Tom put an arm around Bill and pulled him close. “I want you back for good.”
That line made my heart burst open and start to cry! I still love this story so much! I never thought that it could be so addicting to read it! Lol.
"Hello, I'm Cigimuz."
"Hi Cigimuz."
"I'm here because I'm an addict to This Beating Heart, a story that an amazing author has written and four chapters of it and I was addicted."
Lol, had to do that! It's so fantastic!
Author's Response: Awh. Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it. :D
Date: 01/23/09 01:49 am Title: Chapter Four
ok wow wow let me start with that was a beautiful confession tom made to bill it was so heartbreakingly truthful and I like that tom finally says what drugs did to his life and how they made him feel also what he realized what drugs did to his relationship with bill. this was the most insightful chapter into tom's character mind. I love that tom's communicating with bill now. it makes them more connected and understanding of eachothers situation.
so in this chapter about tom's recovery program it made me realize I was right but hopefully I read into these quotes too much.
“I’m addicted to heroin. Uhm, I want to be clean,” he laughed lightly. “well, I don’t really.”
“I need to be clean, however,” “so I don’t ruin my life, and cause my family anymore heartache.”
at least tom's being truthful about his intentions for recovery. but since he doesn't want to give up drugs I so see relapse in future but maybe not wanting to lose bill and his life is enough to keep him on the straight and narrow road to recovery and stability in his life.
oh and your chapter made me sad for tom and I wanted to cry with everything he said. write more things like this wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. :)
Date: 01/22/09 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Four
You can do it Tomi. You can do it. :D
Author's Response: :'D
Date: 01/22/09 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Four
omg i fucking LOOOVE THIS U GOTTA UPDATE
Author's Response: Thank you. I will update as soon as I can. (:
Date: 01/22/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Four
its adorable!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/22/09 06:29 pm Title: Chapter Four
plz update soon.thx=] i luvz u
Date: 01/22/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter Four
I really love this story. You depict addiciton and its consequences in a very realistic and honest manner. Such a great fic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. (:
Date: 01/22/09 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Four
Ooh this is interesting. I can't wait for more :P Good emotional content.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. (:
Date: 01/20/09 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Three
Okay, seriously, I don't know how you do it. You manage to glue my eyes to the screen everytime a new chapter pops up. And everytime I feel my heart breaking in two. This is always so sensitive, it pays so much attention on introspective details, especially Bill's. I'm so glad you put more of Bill than Tom here. I'm perfectly aware how difficult it must be to go through such a surreal experience like heroine addiction, though I'd never read about it from another point of view, not even when this point of view belongs to someone who loves the addicted. This is very interesting to read, not to mention how delicate the whole situation is.
Plus, I'm loving the way you're writing it, it sounds like a progression, a fiction that's having a look into through Tom's recuperation; oh my God I'm so in love with it, I fell for it at once.
And as I said, but I don't mind repeating myself, I love that it's all from Bill's POV. Not that he's the narrator, but the readers see Tom as he sees him; that's what makes this story so heartbreaking.
But still. There's this little hope that the last sentence left in my chest, lol. And now that I think of it, there's no Character Death is the warnings, so, can I beg for a happy ending? Pretty, pretty please? But it's up to you, I know I will be okay with anything you'll decide to write.
Kisses to you Robbie, and keep me dreaming. :)
Author's Response: :D
I kind of figured had I written it through Tom's point of view, it would have been a little too repetative and just... not strong enough of a story. Seeing it through Bill's eyes gives you honest details, while also leaving some things a mystery.
I'm so glad you like it. (:
And I can't tell you about the ending, happy or not, but if you like the story so far, I'm sure you'll like the ending. Kisses. <3
Date: 01/20/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter Two
LOVE THIS!! MORE!!!!!!
Author's Response: :'D
Date: 01/20/09 07:58 am Title: Chapter Three
Yay!! He's going to get some help!!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/20/09 12:47 am Title: Chapter Three
I surprised it took all of that for bill to just breakdown infront of tom. finally bill's seeing clearly how the situation with tom is he's was encouraging the drug addiction by his actions.
I see your right I see glimpse of their bond strenthening and weakening as well but we'll see if the program works for tom.
Author's Response: Sometimes it takes people a while to realize the true potential of a drug addiction, as far as the lives of loved ones and so forth.
Date: 01/19/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Three
sad but good
Author's Response: Thanks. (:
Date: 01/19/09 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Three
interesting.... i like it!
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
Date: 01/19/09 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
plz update soon..i luvz u=] thx3
Author's Response: Will do. And thank you. (:
Date: 01/19/09 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
Yes! Get tom some help to get better! i loved when Bill was getting snappy with the doctor. more please, and i hope Tom accept the help from the rehab center. and i hope the parents show up in the story soon...good job
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :D
Date: 01/19/09 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Two
withdrawal is hard for addicts to go through. I'm glad tom's trying to get help but I think he's doing it to humor bill. I see a relapse happening in tom's future. I hope it can kick his addiction before it to late. poor bill is trying so hard to get his brother back and it must be hard to have to witness all this and have people blame you for it.
Author's Response: I just thought that the issues of drug addiction and trying to get through it all would be a great way to portray the whole, 'I need you, and you need me' kind of deal between Tom and Bill that they could certainly have. It brings them closer together and farther apart all at the same time. (:
Thanks for the interest in the story. Keep an eye out for chapter three.
Date: 01/19/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Two
When I saw the e-mail update, I suddenly thought of one thing. Look at this sentence:
"...anonymous service where you can talk about your problems with others, and maybe meet some people who are in a similar situation..."
Ehm... Tom isn't going to meet someone in his same situation and then something will blossom between them, right? Okay, silly thoughts aside, lol. Whatever you'll do, I know you'll write it brilliantly as usual, so I'm fine with everything you decide for them.
I like that Tom accepted to go to the clinic - it will only be for his own good. And Bill's closeness makes anyone's heart melt. Seriously, I can't help but wonder what will happen next, what they're gonna do, if Tom's gonna get better, as I previously said, this is promising so much. :) It's all up to you, ;)
And Bill being the protective brother, this is such a great changing to read. I don't mind Tom being the big brother and consequent strong brother, too, but this confident Bill, yet fragile Bill, is really someone original, I'm very interested in seeing how he will act from now on.
And, oh. See, you're such an amazing writer, today I was thinking about Radiant Eclipse, and you know, you really space your stories between different genres and atmospheres, writing some of the most breathtaking twincests I've ever read. Really. I do hope you're planning to go on with both this one and Radiant Eclipse, I can't really wait.
And yet again, I didn't find mistakes. And even if there are some, the intensity of the twins' relationship makes them unimportant, lol.
I love you too, Robbie, keep making me dream with your stories, :)
Author's Response: haha. No. I will tell you that Tom is not going to end up with someone else. So, don't worry.
Thanks for the review, again, as usual. <3<3
Date: 01/19/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter Two
Omg more please! I was surprised when tom just went to rehab without a fight. I thought that he would put up a fight more more more!
Ps
Don't let him die!
Author's Response: I figured a fight would be a little much at this point for Tom. Didn't want to make him too prissy.
Thanks for the review. More very soon. (: