Date: 03/03/09 08:05 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
awwww, is it gonna end? :(. aw well, this was the most action packed, wonderfully written fanfic i ever read. u have a magical mind.
Author's Response: I'm afraid it is nearing it's end, as much as I love to write it. Thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoy my story :)
Date: 03/03/09 06:41 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
*sniffles*
Awwww...Rebecca :(
I'm sad about what happened to Alex, but Bill had no other choice -_-
Great chapter, hun! I love how detailed the fight was ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, the fight was so hard to write and I didn't want to make it predtictable by making it so the good guys won easily. There had to be some sacrifices. I'm glad you liked it! :)
Date: 03/03/09 06:37 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
Wait, is it over?
I absolutely LOVED the battle! All the details and the talk. Bill saved them! Sorta. You did a wonderful job explaining and describing everything! I couldn't stop reading! I am a sucker for a happy endings also, so I love the way it turned out to be. And the conclusion is just awesome. One of my fave fics of all time, and I am a truly dedicated fan of your work.
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! It's not quite over yet, a couple more chapters to wrap things up. I worked really hard on writing the fight scene so I'm glad everyone liked it! :) And you saying that your a dedicated fan of my work means so much to me!
Date: 03/03/09 05:44 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
awwwwww rebecca shouldnt have died. thats sad
Author's Response: I know it's sad, but I couldn't make it so the good guys won so easily. You know what I mean? That would be too predictable. I loved Rebecca, but at least whereever she went too after that, Alex would follow her.
Date: 03/03/09 03:47 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
Is this the last chapter? If it is all I can say is NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEEEEEEEEEESSSS!!! I love this story, and the battle scene was really good so be proud of your awesome writing skills okay? ;)
If you do have to end it now could you write an epilogue or something? You know, put some fluff in with just Bill and Tom?
If theres more then I'll do good reviews and I'll definitely keep reading! I might read this all over again actually... :3
Author's Response: Aw, it's not the last chapter yet! I did not check the yes box :) There will be a couple more chapters to wrap things up. I'm glad you liked the fight scene, I worked really hard on it! :) Thank you so much for the support.
Date: 03/03/09 01:10 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
It sounds like the story is ending soon...and I can't believe Alex turned on them! And poor Rebecca :(
Author's Response: It will be over soon, a couple chapters left. I know it's sad, but I had to make it unpredictable, it couldn't be so easy for the good guys to just come in and win it all.
Date: 03/03/09 01:00 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
I'm crying now. And I can't help it ;__;
Author's Response: Aww, don't cry! *hugs*
Date: 03/03/09 08:24 am Title: No Where We Need To Be
*exhales forcefully* What an intense chapter! I really think poor Bill and Tom need a vacation after all of this...
Author's Response: I plan on giving them one :):)
Date: 03/03/09 03:27 am Title: No Where We Need To Be
Wow!
Author's Response: ;) Thank you.
Date: 03/03/09 01:17 am Title: No Where We Need To Be
OMG!!!! This was so amazing! You did such a great job with it and I'm so awed by Bill! He was so great and I'm so happy with how he turned out:) I'm sorry that Rebecca and Alex died, but I'm glad that Emery, Tom and Bill are ok. So, what now? I hope that the three of them can stay together in some way. I feel like even though Tom and Bill need to have their time together I also want Emery to have her... brothers..... with her right now.... Anyhow, great chapter:0)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry about Rebecca and Alex as well but thats just the way it happened. Tom and Bill will have their time together but they wouldn't ever leave Emery on her own. Thanks again :)
Date: 03/03/09 01:15 am Title: No Where We Need To Be
awww, I'm sad that Alex and Rebecca died but that was a good battle scene.....now what's going to happen now? Obviously can't really go back to Bill's, ya know with the blood and all in the living room.
Author's Response: What's going to happen now? Well I think Bill and Tom deserve some resting time. Bill's apartment would be salvageable but, now that theres no danger, what's the point in staying there. I guess they can really go wherever they want too! :)
Date: 03/03/09 12:57 am Title: No Where We Need To Be
that was marvellous.
a great ending to all that action
you write so well, this really needs to be a movie XD
I loved your description of Bill's magic,
I was really curious about that!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! A movie whoa, I still can't believe that! Although a lot of the scenes wouold be amazing to see, especially if Bill and Tom were really in it ;) Thanks again.
Date: 03/02/09 11:59 pm Title: No Where We Need To Be
Oh wow... that was freaking epic! I can totally tell you spent ages perfecting every last syllable of that and it was SO worth it.. in fact, after this review, I may just read it again.. wow that was breathtaking and surprising and wow... just wow.
Author's Response: Omg thank you so much! I did work so hard on that chapter, it was so hard to write. I really appretiate that you liked it so much, that means a lot to me! :):)
Date: 03/02/09 08:31 am Title: Only The Beginning
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!! I NEED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!! PLZ!!!!
Author's Response: I'll have an update up soon I promise! :)
Date: 03/01/09 11:34 pm Title: Only The Beginning
wow!!!!!! i loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 03/01/09 11:00 pm Title: Only The Beginning
Definitely enjoyed it :D
I'm excited for the confrontation...*squee*
Author's Response: I'm working on it :) I want it to be perfect so it's going to take a little while :)
Date: 03/01/09 03:05 pm Title: Only The Beginning
Wow, so is Bill gonna have anything else up his creepy immortal sleeve? I'd like to think so... *grin*
Author's Response: Hm, I'd maybe like to think so too. ;)
Date: 03/01/09 04:37 am Title: Powerless
This was awesome. I love how Bill and Tom talked while having a moonlit stroll, getting to know a bit about each other...well about Tom. I hope Tom learns more about Bill's life as well. :)
And yay, first kiss! It was the right amount of tentative and sweet and I am desperately wanting to read more. Each chapter is getting better and better and I love the interaction between Tom and Bill. Keep up the great work!
Still watch out for tiny mistakes though. Little misspellings here and slight punctuation errors, but other than that, this story is out of the gates now and chugging along nicely. Kudos.
I will read and review more later.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad your really starting to like my story! I feel like you have a lot of knowledge about proper writing and all that jazz so it means a lot that you like my writing :) I go over my story 3 or 4 times before I post but I always miss little things. I'll admit I enjoyed writing their first kiss a lot and thought it turned out pretty well. Thanks again :)
Date: 03/01/09 04:01 am Title: Only The Beginning
Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens, such good suspense!!!
Author's Response: :) I'm going to try to have the next chapter up Wednesday night if things go as planned. Maybe a bit earlier if I don't have tons of homework!