Date: 01/21/09 12:14 am Title: Powerless
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will, ;)
Date: 01/20/09 09:29 am Title: Informative
Grr, Tomi. ;] Thinking about someone special? Yeah, well, who wouldn't be fascinated by Bill. I mean, he's like not real. But at the same time he's like real real, like an angel who came from the heavens just to be corrupted by his evil twin and smex ensues and then... Oh, right. Wrong story! XD Anyway, WOAH! This chapter made my heart tie itself into a knot. Just thinking about Bill all curled up whilst crying his poor soul out makes me wanna cry. But that's because you write scenes like that so well. I still don't get how you do that. You just.. know how to make everything seem so real, I mean, I always lose all sense of time when I'm reading any of your stories. It's amazing. But this.. Damn, the cat got my tongue. *purrs* It's so cute to see that Tom's looking out for his Billa.. Though I can't believe that Bill lives in a DUMP of an apartment complex like that. I guess I'm just too used to diva!Bill. And this is just the right kind of way for me to get used to the fact that he's just as perfect as always regardless the 'plot' in this fic. ;) I NEED MOAR, like nao! no really, don't stress yourself. But I just can't wait to see what happens next when Bill and Tom meet again! I'm so hyper!! rawr, ilu. XD Oh, and 'gasm. Tom's family? I WANNA KNOW.
Author's Response: Oh girly, totally love your reviews as always! :) You keep thinking about my other story don't you! ;) I know you love it! I'm glad you think I write those scenes well, that means a lot, sometimes I struggle with them, especially in this story, it's very difficult to write. Tom always looks out for Bill, no matter what time or story ;) You know you won't have to wait too long for another chapter. :) Although, school is getting pretty crazy. You'll learn more about Tom's family later on, don't worry. Thanks again, as always for your support!
Date: 01/20/09 08:00 am Title: Informative
Oooooh. They would be great together. :)
Author's Response: Oh, you know it. ;)
Date: 01/20/09 12:12 am Title: Informative
yes I defintely see brendon lee from the Crow(original)in mind mind as I read from the story. tom's way of analysizing everything and wise words are similar to his character. and I love that tom is trying to help bill aspire to make a better life for himself and not waste his precious human life.
I love your tom character because of the way he acts and the way you written him is so philosophically makes me love him more. even bill grew on me he seems weak yet strong willed when push comes to shove I see glimmer of something witty and confidence shining through when he's with tom.
I think I see that in the future bill is going to ask to be part of tom's world and be turned.
write more please so intrigued.
Author's Response: Oh! This review got posted twice, not that I mind ;)
Date: 01/19/09 11:48 pm Title: Informative
yes I defintely see brendon lee from the Crow(original)in mind mind as I read from the story. tom's way of analysizing everything and wise words are similar to his character. and I love that tom is trying to help bill aspire to make a better life for himself and not waste his precious human life.
I love your tom character because of the way he acts and the way you written him is so philosophically makes me love him more. even bill grew on me he seems weak yet strong willed when push comes to shove I see glimmer of something witty and confidence shining through when he's with tom.
I think I see that in the future bill is going to ask to be part of tom's world and be turned.
write more please so intrigued.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you've head the nail on the head with the way I hoped to write this story. and I'm glad you apprcetiate Tom's character, and Bill's as welll, he's down on his luck but he's tough. and Tom just wants to help. :) Yeah, I can definately picture Brendon Lee. I will be writing more :) Thanks again.
Date: 01/19/09 10:55 pm Title: Informative
wonderful!!
this story's cool.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/19/09 08:24 pm Title: Informative
I feel like watching a movie! =D
Keep comin!^^
Author's Response: :):) Thank you, and I will!
Date: 01/19/09 07:40 pm Title: Informative
YAY!
Is there any chance Tom will take Bill on adventures? And where does Tom stay? I mean, I get that he doesn't sleep but where does he stay when the sun comes up?
Author's Response: Hm, there might be a chance of that, I'm not too sure at this point. Tom just stays hidden, like a good vampire does. He knows his way around, I'm still working on the sun predicament at the moment, I'm not sure how I want to play that out yet. ;) I kinda want him to be able to be in the sun, so I'm thinking through my favourite vampire shows and movies. :)
Date: 01/19/09 07:39 pm Title: Informative
I love this! Cant wait for an update
Author's Response: Thank you, there will be another chapter up soon. :)
Date: 01/19/09 05:11 pm Title: Informative
Tom's very wise, isn't he? :)
Are we going to get more of a look into his past life? Just out of curiosity ;)
Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: He is very wise, comes with age. ;) Yes, you will get a look into his past, but not for a little while. Thank youu, :)
Date: 01/19/09 04:52 pm Title: Informative
I really love the way Tom talks in this. I can really imagine him as a century old vampire. Just a wonderful chapter!
Author's Response: :) Thank you, I can picture it too, very cleary. I figure, since he's been around for decades, his speech would be a little different.
Date: 01/19/09 04:47 pm Title: Informative
Interesting. Let their relationship begin. I liked most of this, but not why Bill was crying. I felt like something more specific should have sparked his misery than just his lofe over all. That's the type of break down you'd have in the confines of your house, not in the middle of a street. Did something happen? It didn't seem that way. Maybe I missed something.
Author's Response: Hm, I see what you mean. But I'm just trying to see it through how a teenage boy all alone would feel, which is hard considering im neither. I always felt Bill was a little different, he's just had enough I suppose. And Tom has only known him for a few days, barely that, he has no idea what Bill has gone through so his perspective of the situation isn't exactly clear, and it's from his point of view so I don't think he can pick up on everything. If that makes any sense at all. But I apprcetiate your input, I hope you'll keep reading.
Date: 01/19/09 04:29 pm Title: Never Forget
good girl!
Vampires own the world =)
Author's Response: Vamps are my ultimate favourite!
Date: 01/19/09 04:27 pm Title: Informative
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I will. ;)
Date: 01/19/09 02:16 pm Title: Thirst and Insanity
i think someone's been watching twilight a little to much hahaha either way love the story cant wait for more tom as a vamp? hmmm he definitly has the smirk mastered
Author's Response: Not watching it, reading it too much. The twilight books are way WAY better than the movie. I love Tom as a vampire. :) Thank you for reading!
Date: 01/19/09 08:27 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
Oh luw I'm so, so sorry for being so late from reviewing! You have no idea, it's been crazy when the school started for me again, so I've had only a little time to do the actual work on my computer so.. :[ But oh God did I miss your writing! This one is a diamond. That's the first thought that entered my head when I read this one's summary, I just knew this was gonna be amazing. And I wasn't disappointed. But you know what this fic kinda reminds me of? Twilight, you just gotta love that movie. Anyway, your vampire!Tom IS SMOKING HAWT. And the Bill you portrayed had me literally, no kidding, drooling! I HAD SERIOUS 'GASMS. *w* But who was that 'random if not almost a rapist' guy?! I almost ripped my laptop's screen off when he tugged at Bill's hair, because Tomi's the only one who gets to tug at HIS Billa's hair whilst... playing games. ;] *drools* So yeah, sorry for being such a lame reviewer, but I still haven't gotten over the shock that someone actually wrote about my #1 wish for a TB fanfic. The twins plus vampires equals HOTNESS. And you know that I love you for it. :] I can't wait for the next chapter!! Seriously. I'm pouting.
Author's Response: I was wondering where you were! :) I do like the Twilight movie, but the books are way better. Vampires are my absolute favourite, so I had to write about them, and the twins are also one of my favourites, so I put two and two together. ;) I'm going to be arrogant for a second and say, I love my vampire Tom too :) And the "almost rapist" got what he deserved, and your right, no one but Tom gets to tug at Bill's hair. ;) I know all about school being busy, theres where I just got home from! Anyways, I'll putting up the next chapter now because I have it finished. Thanks always for your support. P.s your reviews are never lame.
Date: 01/19/09 12:46 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
wow the poetic hero.
love how he reminds me of edward and the guy in the crow.
wow I see that tom's defintely intrigued by bill.
tom's already in staker mode. ha jk
well can wait to see how tom and bill get closer.
Author's Response: :) That's kind of what I was going for with Tom's character. I love the crow(the original), your one of the only people to think of that! Thanks for reading.
Date: 01/18/09 09:53 pm Title: Thirst and Insanity
keep it comin!
Author's Response: ;) Yup.
Date: 01/18/09 06:57 pm Title: Thirst and Insanity
I like it =]
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/18/09 05:49 pm Title: Thirst and Insanity
omg i loved it ppplz update
Author's Response: I will. :)