Date: 01/21/09 08:36 pm Title: Powerless
oh, I really liked that.
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 01/21/09 06:22 pm Title: Powerless
This is my favorite story from now on! I cannot wait for an update. You are very talented ^_^
Author's Response: wow, thank you!! :):) there will be an update soon!
Date: 01/21/09 06:11 pm Title: Powerless
I'm still here. I have a thing for vamp fics so you didn't have to worry. I'm not going anywhere.
I liked this chapter quite a bit. I like their relationship and it's progression and Tom's sadness.
Hoewever. I think you need to put in a little bit more action too. I can't believe I'm saying that b/c it's not like me at all. But I think this can't run on Tom's emotional battle alone. Something, or many somethings are going to have to happen. Maybe the return of someone from Tom's past?
I don't know. That's just my thoughts. I like it a lot though. Don't forget that. I'm trying ot be helpful, sorry if I offend.
Author's Response: no no, you didn't offend not at all, i like to know what you think should happen. and I don't plan on this story to just run on Tom's emotions, it's Bill as well. and I do plan on bringing Tom's past into play, it's just a bit slow and mellow right now because I don't plan on this story being really short. I'm glad your still going to read, and I do appreciate your input and don't worry about offending me lol, you didn't :)
Date: 01/21/09 04:42 pm Title: Powerless
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fantastic!!!^^
Author's Response: thank you!! :)
Date: 01/21/09 03:09 pm Title: Powerless
like it very much!
Author's Response: yay! I'm glad.
Date: 01/21/09 02:59 pm Title: Powerless
AW, Tomiboy is so WHIPPED! XD Gawd I want more of this O_O I'm addicted. Oh yes. *running around waving hands*
Author's Response: :):) Woohoo, I'm glad you like it! There will be more! :)
Date: 01/21/09 02:52 pm Title: Powerless
I LOVE IT! And I love that finally someone had the guts to write a "Tom-Vampire-fic!" Thank you for your awesome skills :D
Author's Response: ohh your very welcome! I'm glad you like it! I love vampire Tom!
Date: 01/21/09 02:46 pm Title: Powerless
I like this story, but it reminds me to mutch of Twilight!
Author's Response: I'm trying very hard to avoid that. Very hard.
Date: 01/21/09 10:06 am Title: Powerless
Oh, that was really sweet! =] My stomach was clenching during certain bits ;)
Author's Response: :):) Glad you liked it, that last part was really difficult to write!
Date: 01/21/09 08:25 am Title: Powerless
Oh, love, love it. I don't know if I've reviewed this yet. If I haven't then I apologize profusely because I really love it. Did I say that already? :D
Author's Response: lol! I'm glad you love it :):) Thanks for reading!
Date: 01/21/09 08:22 am Title: Powerless
*swoons* What a lovely chapter! And that last line...so romantic!
Author's Response: ;) you know Tom's a romantic at heart! lol, thanks for reading.
Date: 01/21/09 08:18 am Title: Never Forget
that was my favorit chap, really beautiful =) I've been waiting for that kiss :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/21/09 07:18 am Title: Powerless
Well, yeah, I kind of was also thinking about.. your other story.. *insert a sheepish grin here* But right now my hands are shaking and I'm close to hyperventilating. Oh my sweet Lord, I felt as if the time had stopped when I read the end of this chapter. And I'm not just saying, I seriously mean it. That was just.. oh my God. O___O!! I'm quite positive that I'm not gonna witness a more delicate kiss than that in a form of fanfiction and twincest, like EVER. Holy crap, I don't know what to say.. TOM JUST KISS HIM BACK ALREADY!! XD Oh and luw, if school is absolutely killing you, just kick back and don't worry about updating in such an amazingly fast pace. 'Cuz this story is totally worth a wait of one day or two. Seriously. But still.. GAWDMOAR!!!1
Author's Response: Aw, your always thinking about my other story! ;) But thats alright lol. I'm glad you liked that kiss, I was really proud of that scene. :) Yeah, schools really tough right now, I'm losing free time to write. But I'm still going too, just updates won't be as fast, but you know I wouldn't even make you wait too long! Thanks for your never-ending support love!
Date: 01/21/09 02:07 am Title: Powerless
AWWWWWWE!! great chappie. So sweet. :D
Author's Response: :):) Thank you!
Date: 01/21/09 12:52 am Title: Powerless
awwwwwwwwww i wish you could see the happy tears in my eyes its so sweet!
Author's Response: awwww, as long as they're happy tears! :)
Date: 01/21/09 12:46 am Title: Powerless
Oh. i like it. You have a really nice style to your story. I really like it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: :) Thank you very much. !
Date: 01/21/09 12:43 am Title: Powerless
oh bill is special like tom sees.
wow that was intense I believe bill is the something that's been mising in tom's life. I guess they were meet to be in my eyes.love this chapter it's so moving the way you wrote it not chessy way they start to connect. I like that about your writing. you make everything genuine.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I really didn't want it too be cheesy, and I'm glad I managed to avoid that. Bill and Tom are always meant to be. ;) Thank you for reading.
Date: 01/21/09 12:28 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
*scream/sing* i love ITTTTTTTTT
Author's Response: ;) Thank you I'm glad!
Date: 01/21/09 12:20 am Title: Powerless
so beautiful... plz update
Author's Response: I will :)
Date: 01/21/09 12:17 am Title: Powerless
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that was my excited ramble! i completely flailed while reading this, mind you my roommate is like 5 feet away from me staring at me grinning like an idiot. it made me so happy!
is there any possibility of looking more into Tom's past or even at Bill's?
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you like it. and Yes, you'll get to see more of each of their pasts, but not quite yet. ;) Thanks for reading!