Sorry for being so late from reviewing, but I'm dying because of school. But for real, I friggin' love this chapter! Gawd, where did this come from! Seriously, I was like 'Oh, Tomi's gonna lose it!' (not hoping for it, nooo.. >__>;;) when that John guy was obviously going to go after Bill. And just thinking about that now rottin' in hell Greg.. Hmph!! So yeah, I too, was cracking my knuckles over here. :D And I can't seem to get over the fact that Bill is so damn adorable and arrgghh! I wan't to eat him up. *___* Not literally, but you know. XD Tom, however... makes me drool like my aunt's old dog. Geez, he should stop growling like that! I can picture it so clearly and HEAR it in my head, and gosh.. EARGASM! And no, I'm not schizophrenic or anything, but I guess my brains and ears are just retarded. ;] ...Und what's this? TOMI'S GONNA STAY AT BILL'S?!! I think I died for the hundreth time.

I was so scared you wouldn't update 'cause i really fallen in love with this story. It's awesome. Please update soon. ^^

Author's Response: Aw, I always update. :)

greg and john both deserve to be tom's meal.
I love the possessiveness tom shows already.
bill is so cute always initiating the kisses.
looks like bill has to move the relationship forward if it was up to tom they be moving at a snails speed.
I like that tom's confused about human emotions since he's starting to use them again he already exibiting lots of them.

Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's just getting used to it :) I'm sure he'll break through his old human emotions sure enough, with Bill's help. Greg was already Tom's meal, John, we'll see ;)

holy crap i love it

Author's Response: :) Thank you

That was sweet ;)

Author's Response: Thanks :)

^_^

Beautifully written as always. You take on the first person POV so well, I just can't get over it.

I have a question though: What does Tom look like? I don't know if I missed it in the past chapters but I was just wondering. When I read I like to envision the characters as the author sees them. I would think he has the dreads but how does he dress? Is it outdated or the baggy wear??

Author's Response: You know what, it's so hard to describe what I picture Tom as. Of course he has the dreads, I can't picture him in anything but. His clothing, I picture black, because he wants to blend and he's always around during the night. Not baggy, just comfortable. Black pants and t-shirt. Not outdated, but nothing stylish. It's his face that's meant to be captivating. No caps either, just a something like a black bandana to keep his hair back. Does that make sense? It's so hard to describe, and I didn't describe it in the story because it's from his point of view. I hope that helps you a little bit :) Thanks again for reading, and I'm glad you enjoy my first person, it's so hard to write sometimes.

i adore it, i'm truly fascinated by the way you write; it's simply elegant and i'm falling for it, completely. Pretty please, update, not soon, just NOW! XD

Author's Response: Aw, thank you :) I will try to update soon! I'm working hard. It won't be too long, I promise.

I love how Tom swings from calm and stoic to passionate whenever Bill gets into trouble. Great update!

Author's Response: Yes, Tom's get erratic mood swings when it concerns Bill. ;) Thank you!

OMFG THIS IS AMAZZZING TRULY AMAZING U ARE A FABOULISHH WRITER UPDATE PLZ

Author's Response: AWW! Thank you!! :):) I will update soon!

I really liked this chapter. It had the perfect mix of emotions and action/suspence. I liked how youo brought Greg back into the picture. It hadn't occured to me before but you're right, someone's bound to miss him, no matter how dispicable a person he was. So I'm really happy you thought of that.

I'm also happy w/ how I got to see Tom slowly giving in. With the kiss in the beginning, and then getting more protective, STAYING W/ BILL!!!! and kissing him again! That was a great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Yeah, I figured no matter how disgusting the city was, someone was bound to notice a missing regular right? Tom's slowly but surely feeling attached, protective. Bill needs it :) I'm really glad you liked this chapter! :)