Date: 01/28/09 02:33 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
Best sex ever...xD
Heheee Tom loves Bill and Bill loves Tom :3
Author's Response: Aw, love love love. ;)
Date: 01/28/09 02:21 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
O______________________O Holy shit that was hot! *faints*
Author's Response: Oh no, don't faint! ;) Glad you enjoyed that!
Date: 01/28/09 02:15 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
Whoa *whipes sweat from brow* that was intensely hotter than hell. For real... I loved it, especially the bite part.. oooh you rawk *love*
Author's Response: I love the bite part, it's my favourite! :) Glad you liked it. ;)
Date: 01/28/09 01:25 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
That was AMAZING!!!! Damn do you know how to write smut. I also really liked how Tom sorta progressively lost control. You showed that really well, and how you keep coming back to Bill's body language. It's fantastic.
I thought the last line was really sweet too. What would Tom do if he lost Bill? That can't happen.
Author's Response: Well I view vampires as having human instincts as well as animalistic instincts, I felt Tom had to lose control completely, at least the first time because it's so new and intense for him. And I feel Bill's body language is also very important, Tom know's just how to read him. I'm glad you enjoy all of those aspects of the story :) Tom can't lose Bill, no way.
Date: 01/28/09 01:25 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
I...I...God!!! *speechless*
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Author's Response: ;) Glad you liked it.
Date: 01/28/09 01:13 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
awe, sexy.
Author's Response: sexy-sexy ;)
Date: 01/28/09 12:49 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
There's nothing better than this. I'm now absolutely sure about it. But... damn. I have to be completely honest with you, luw, and I'm not kidding when I say this - I had to stop reading this chapter every now and then so that I wouldn't completely lose it. Just.. oh my God. What.. Where did THAT come from?! That was the hottest thing I had ever, ever read in my goddamn life. The way that you described even the smallest details, every single one sooo very 'out of this world' -way had me searching for my jaw that had previously hit the floor. And my breath actually got caught in my throat when Tom bit Bill, I was seriously gasping not in horror but because of the goddamn hotness! Just damn! I love the fact that in every chapter, the plot flows very smoothly and it makes sense! So it's not just plain smut and ridiculously hot make-out scenes, the thing actually has a plot and an effin' good one too! So yeah, I was so drooling as I read this.. Phew, I think I've got a permanent freaky-ass smile plastered on my face from now on. XD But everyone had gotta known that someone was bound to have a fetish for Bill's swan like neck. Might as well be vampire!Tom. ;] *drools* I mean, what's better than having a VERY willing, gorgeous as hell Bill writhing beneath a very, very hot and dominant vamp!Tom? *shivers* I love you for this chapter, SO. FRIGGIN'. MUCH. Dayum! Can't wait for the next, mind-blowing chapta! *___*
Author's Response: I just knew you would love this one! It was soooo hard to write ugh, phew I'm glad everyone loved it. The small details are very important they make a story worth reading. :) By the way, I hope you relocated your jaw! Mm, biting Bill was my favourite of the whole chapter I knew it had to be done. Once again I can imagine your freak-ass smile lol. Bill's neck is amazing, I love it. You love me for more than just this chapter admit it. ;) Next one will be up in a little bit. Thanks as usual! :)
Date: 01/28/09 11:11 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
How was that? How was that?!! That was fucking ... *shudder* HAWT!! The way you described every little detail. Entering Billa, the blood dripping from Toms lips - BRILLIANT!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it so much! :):):)
Date: 01/28/09 11:08 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
Rawr! I love that Tom bit bill sooo damn sexy
Author's Response: That was my favourite part of writing that whole chapter.!
Date: 01/28/09 11:06 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
*drools*
That was sooo worth the wait! Just wow...
Author's Response: :):) Glad you liked it. ;)
Date: 01/27/09 10:42 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
....EVIL!! YOU'RE EVIL!!! “_”'
Author's Response: I'm sorry!.. well not really. ;)
Date: 01/27/09 06:12 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
i loved it!!!!!!!!!! u deffenitly gotta update!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and I will very soon. :)
Date: 01/27/09 06:06 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
yes im dying for the next chapter and i luv tomi english accent hehehe
Author's Response: hahaha, english accents just suit the old vampire types! ;)
Date: 01/27/09 04:49 pm Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
i loved it , SOOOOO HOT!! MORE PLEASE!!! O_O
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, next chapter will be up very soon!
Date: 01/27/09 10:14 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
Oooh...
*rubs hands together*
Yepyepyepyep
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 01/27/09 09:12 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
ARGH! ****ing cliffie, dammit! Got me all worked up here and then you- you...NNGH! Gosh, just...the next one...soon. Here. Fast. *tries to breathe normally but failes royally*
Author's Response: awww, sorry love! Next chapter will be up very soon I swear.
Date: 01/27/09 06:50 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
My nose is seriously bleeding itself off my face at this very moment. I swear, when I got to the part where Tom crawled back to Bill's bed my nose started to protest against me reading this. But knowing me, I didn't give a crap! XD Billa's kitten licks had me going green with envy. Damn you, lucky Tom! But seriously oh my god, YOU'RE GONNA LEAVE US HANGIN' HERE?!! You're so cruel, luw! No but like, seriously, I was going CRAZY at the moment when Tom had Bill pinned beneath him. 'Cuz I think I heard my neighbours dash for cover when I screamed like a possessed fangirl. Damn, that was.. Okay, now I'm seriously getting worried of my nose! Gonna faint out of bloodloss.. Bill's just too hot for a horny, vampire!Tom to handle, no? D'uh. XD And me, of course! At least when it's you luw, who's writing the make-out, soon to be SMEXOHMYGAWD scenes anyway. *sighs happily* I think my brains are melting.. hehee~ *w* I can't wait for the next part. Goddamn! I can only imagine what's gonna happen next.. Oh, my poor nose.
Author's Response: God, I'm surprised you even have a nose left, let alone any blood running through you. Shame, Vamp!Tom would love that ;) Haha, I'm sorry for the evil cliffy, but admit it, I don't leave you hanging like that for very long so there's no need to worry! I can almost hear in my head your possessed fangirl scream, it was rather amusing to picture. You know I love smut, and this story will be no exception to that ;) Next chapter will be up very soon I promise, thank youuuuuu again as always.
Date: 01/27/09 01:39 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
first I can't believe that john was such a coward. he was a waste of tom's energy. he even begged, john deserved to be tortured for his actions.
well tom's so sweet his human emotions make him so lovable and mushy.
I can't believe you ended with it starting to get all hot. well that's the best way to keep people intrested. so so dying for next chap.
Author's Response: You're right, John deserved it. I love to incorporate Tom's human emotions :) Sorry for the cliffy, but the next chapter will be up very soon!
Date: 01/27/09 01:33 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
more soom please. =]
Author's Response: very soon.
Date: 01/27/09 01:02 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part One)
*faints*
You really are going to provoke me something! I just can't keep on focused on anything after reading chapters of this!! OMFG!! *squeals*
I...I... *fangirl scream* Tom is AMAZING!! I love how you describe him...I love all the melodramatic vampire thing!! Though Bill's character is also great! Still my fav is Tom!! Please keep updating this! It's GREAT in all the meanings of the word! I feel like dying from happiness and sadness while reading this...and I can't understand why...it's just that your writting and the plot...together are just...WOW!!
This should be featured! Seriously!!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much, really that means so much to an author to hear their work is so greatly apprecetiated! :):) I try really hard on both Bill and Tom's character. I'll admit Tom can be very difficult, but I manage. and it's because of reviews like this that I continue, so thank you very much!