Date: 02/08/09 12:07 am Title: Never Forget
OMG!!!! i got a huge adrenaline from reading this. bill is really going to spend an eternity with tom. that is sooooo romantic. ur fanfic looks like a novel because i could see great effort in every little detail.
Author's Response: Yay for adrenaline rushes! Bill and Tom belong together. Thank you for reading and for recognizing how hard I work on this! That means a lot :)
Date: 02/07/09 11:47 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
AAAAAHHHH! That was like an action movie! You described the scene so well, my heart almost jumped out of my throat! I swear to God I will get a heart attack if that continues ^_^ And I kinda saw it coming that Bill was going to get bitten, but the love story is just amazing!!! Keep it coming
Author's Response: Yeah I guess Bill being bitten was kind of predictable, but I mean come on, everyone knew they had to be together forever and that was the only way! :) I'm glad you liked the action scenes I was soooo worried about them, but your review made me feel a lot better! Thank you for readingggg.
Date: 02/07/09 11:35 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
AWWWWWWW there are tears in my eyes!i want to bring toms father back to life just so i could kill him slowly!
Author's Response: Awww, no tears! :)
Date: 02/07/09 11:12 pm Title: Never Forget
Splitting it into two stories might be a good idea.
Author's Response: I think so two, that's probably what I'll do. This one will be over soon then.
Date: 02/07/09 11:10 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
Billla!! O_o *über loud screaming*
Author's Response: Oh nooooo!! ;)
Date: 02/07/09 10:50 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
This story isn't ending soon is it? :(
Author's Response: Well, this part might be. I can't decide if I want to split it into two stories or just have one really big one. What do you think?
Date: 02/07/09 10:46 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
ohhhhhhhhh... *.*
sooo intense! really really good!^^
lots of hugs and hot chocolate for you! ;D
PS: hope you're getting better dear!
Author's Response: Yayyy I do so love hugs and hot chocolate as you know! :) I am feeling a bit better I've got medicine now, but I'm not completely cured yet.
Date: 02/07/09 10:46 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
keep it comin! Im hooked!
Author's Response: ;) you know I will.
Date: 02/07/09 02:39 pm Title: Game Over
Totally able to visualize the panic in this chapter. Poor Tom, he can't fight him can he? Can they run, I don't want Em to die but I don't love her enough yet to totally care if she does, just don't let Billa die! Or Tomi! Why'd their dad want Tom so badly? I'd love more background info.
Author's Response: There will be more background info in the next chapter, Tom and his father are going to talk before the big showdown. So don't worry about that. They could run, but I doubt they would get very far. As for Tom fighting him, there isn't really much of another option. Don't worry, everything will be alright! :)
Date: 02/06/09 08:20 am Title: Game Over
They are soo fucking sweet together!! :3
This is getting intense!! Moooore!!
Author's Response: :):)Thank youu, there will be more!
Date: 02/05/09 11:42 pm Title: Game Over
*gasp* Didn't see that coming! but I love it... keep up the fabulous writing and i'l read more later! :)
Author's Response: :) Next chapter will be up soon.
Date: 02/05/09 08:54 pm Title: Game Over
holy shit this is good update plzz fantastic writing btw
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I will update soon.
Date: 02/05/09 04:58 pm Title: Game Over
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! AAAAAAAAAH! You made me go crazy!!! Don't kill them! PLEASE! HAVE MERCY!!!! *screams into heavens*
Author's Response: Don't worry I have lots of mercy to go around! :):)
Date: 02/05/09 02:44 pm Title: Game Over
And dear, get well soon! ;)
Hugs and chocolate for you!^^
Author's Response: Aw thank you, I went to the doctors today I have bronchutis! Ew. I love hugs and hot chocolate :)
Date: 02/05/09 02:43 pm Title: Game Over
=O... *breathless*
I'm behind Tom now, right beside Bill, and almost crying... XD
SOOO waiting for more! *o/o/o/o/*
Author's Response: There will be more, hopefully very soon! You shouldn't have to wait for too long. :)
Date: 02/05/09 02:35 pm Title: Game Over
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WANT TO SEE A NOTHER CHAPTER
Author's Response: There will be another soon don't worry!
Date: 02/05/09 12:11 pm Title: Game Over
rawr! cliffhanger!
Author's Response: I know, it's awful.
Date: 02/05/09 08:59 am Title: Game Over
drumroll please)))
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 02/05/09 03:03 am Title: Game Over
Eternity
wow for being sick you sure can get out glorious work. I was so drawn into the story I thought I was feeling the end coming for everyone like I was with them. you went through so much in such a short amount of time. you make me so jumpy through the whole chapter thinking there not going to make it there to late he found them. then emery I thought was him.
I'm glad that tom wanted to protect emery. she was the best sister.
I pictured Viktor from underworld too. hopefully he's not going to kill his children too and they actually defeat their father and not underestimate his hatred of disobedience.
I found my self thinking you write this story like a Shakespearean play. because you have a poetic flare with love and tragedy. also I find this story more on the lines of queen of the damned. With tom being like Lestat and bill like Jesse. Maybe it could end like them since they have similarities with those character's and their circumstances as well kind of.
I want to see what happens next. The big climatic fight everyone's been waiting for and the ending for tom and bill's love story. So old fashion but love that.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I'm glad my being sick didn't affect my work that much. I feel like, in a relationship like Bill and Tom's everything is very unpredictable and fast-paced because it's so forbidden in it's own way. I'm glad I can make people feel suspense through my writing, it makes me feel good, Tom will protect Emery because in turn she is there helping to protect Bill, and well yes she's the best sister. Yes, Viktor. I love his character. Shakespearean play, I see what you mean. I love love stories filled with trials and tribulations, just just sunshine and rainbows, but I do love happy endings. And I do see what you mean about Lestat and Jesse. And the fight will be next and it will be hard for Tom. Thank you so much for this review, it made my day.
Date: 02/05/09 01:10 am Title: Game Over
i feel bad for having prejudice with ur fanfic. i always thought vampire fics were Twilight related, and i got sick of it. but ur story just completely proved me wrong. i luv every single chapter, and each has such explicate details. keep on doing what ur doing!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that, I love twilight but I hated that people thought I was trying to make my story like that. So I'm very happy to hear you say that. Thank you :)