Date: 02/11/09 02:04 am Title: Self-Loathing and Acceptance
yay~~ there is more~~ :DDD
Author's Response: Yup :):)
Date: 02/11/09 02:04 am Title: Self-Loathing and Acceptance
awwww!!!! good thing its not over yet! I wanna see bill progress as a vampire XD
'my new born vampire' made me awwwwe out loud!!!
Author's Response: Lol writing Bill as a vampire will be quite the experience for me. Well, Bill is Tom's new born vampire :)
Date: 02/11/09 01:36 am Title: Self-Loathing and Acceptance
ooooo, how romantic. tom is like so perfect for bill in every way. i no that if i live for an eternity, i would get tired of my spouse :D. but tom is sticking with bill stronger than glue.
Author's Response: It's true eternity is a very long time to be with someone lol. But, they are meant for eachother in everyway. Thank you for reading! :)
Date: 02/11/09 01:03 am Title: Self-Loathing and Acceptance
YAY *dances around happy*
Author's Response: hahaha :P :)
Date: 02/10/09 01:29 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
holy crap man i love it
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 02/09/09 05:49 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
The ending of this chapter was so beautiful, i can't wait to read the next. These vampire/human stories always get me. I've read stories like this a hundred times but it never gets old, I love it. They always make me so sad but I feel so happy all the same.
You're such a brilliant writer, I love the way you make Tom talk, and I'm glad these vampires have fangs, like real fangs ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you:) I realize the general idea of the story isn't exactly orignal, the whole vampire human thing has been done a million times. But, I do try to make it my own :) Of course they have real fangs! ;)
Date: 02/08/09 06:52 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
oh billa... pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee describe the turning? please not many authors do
Author's Response: I'm going too, I was actually thinking of having it from Bill's POV but I decided against that. But, don't worry I'm going to describe it.
Date: 02/08/09 04:34 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
HOLY SHIT WOW UN-EXPECTED!!! defenetly update loll
Author's Response: :):) I will!
Date: 02/08/09 03:15 pm Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
*gasp* wow i was on the edge of my seat the whole time... and now billa's gona be a vampire! Ooh thank you for writing this! I love you for it and you're an amazing writer! I love how they (almost) all banded together to help and ooh it was beautifully written!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!! You're very welcome for this story ;) I love writing it. Siblings need to stick together, no matter where they're from :)
Date: 02/08/09 11:49 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
*needs air* I didn't breathe while reading this. *help!*
I'll just...hold my breath until the next chapter...no need to hurry...
Author's Response: Ah! I'll have to hurry, I don't want you to run out of oxygen before you can read what happens! ;)
Date: 02/08/09 11:01 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
The part when he was dying was really ugh
painful! and when they said their I Love Yous. aww ><
You write so well, this is like, the best vampire story on the site.
I'm so glad Bill's not begging to be a vampire, like Bella in Twilight!
Author's Response: Aw, wow thank you so much :) I'm so glad you don't think Bill is like Bella, she really bothers me! Ugh. :)
Date: 02/08/09 10:22 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
OMG!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! IS IT OVER????? PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol thank youuu! No it's not over :)
Date: 02/08/09 08:48 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
loved it!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 02/08/09 08:36 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
O_O
I got a bit nervous for a second :)
Bill's gonna be a 'wampire.' xD Yay!
Author's Response: hahaha yes he is ;)
Date: 02/08/09 04:17 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
I'm gonna cry. Tomīs "father" deserved that, but poor Bill didn't need to suffer so much. Then again, if that was what they needed to be free and to make Tom change his mind about turning Bill, then so be it.
It was worth reading, as always. You get chocolate cookies.
Author's Response: Yay, I love cookies. :) Bill had to suffer a little bit I couldn't let him go unharmed. He needs to be with Tom foreverrrr. Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/08/09 04:03 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
OH! so exciting! i love this TOM of yours so believable, and so loveable, he'd probably wince at that description though.
Author's Response: Ha, yes he probably would. :) He's been hard to write, but a lot of fun too.
Date: 02/08/09 01:51 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
So the dad's dead. Good for Emery! I now love her. And I'm happy Tom's willing to turn Bill. I was also excited over their siblings. That two of the three others switched sides says something about them.
Now there's only Alan and the mom to worry about. That'll be interesting, and teaching Bill how to deal w/ being a vampire.
Author's Response: Yup, Tom changed his mind, just cause he knows neither of them should be without the other. He'll feel guilty for a while but, it's okay. I'm glad you liked Tom's siblings :) They've grown since Tom's seen them, they are their own people now, no what I mean? Like Tom always was. and you're right, now theres Mom and Alan. :) And of course.. little Bill being a vampire! :)
Date: 02/08/09 01:17 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
with the quote in your intro I new that this was the chapter where bill got to be turned. by the way love the quote.
wow this chapter was actionpacked. I couldn't keep my self from the screen. which in my mind I see this as a big movie.
I keep thinking that the father was going to turn bill to bring tom back to the family. but I'm so glad that I'm wrong. it wouldn't be a good life and villians never do good always keep things grim. so then I thought the quote could mean both tom and bill die together at the hands of the family. but I like your script better. more of a ending from which I said your love story relates too.
I like that you discribed the family members and how tom analysizes how they are now. how they react to the situation before them. it makes them more real. not just extra people the readers just know by their relation to him.
I actual started to get interested in his family and would like to know more about them now. especially emery, alexander and his lifemate. sorry can't think of her name.
so tom turned bill after the best death scene of a villianous father. so I thought the way you ended that it was over but I hope not.
I want to see tom talk to his family catch up and see how tom and bill relationship goes as they are both vampires now. more I swear you are one of the best writers on this site you should really think of making writing a career. you are very talented. I want to see what you are planning to do now with the story after all of the dangers have passed.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. I got that quote from a class at school actually, it's the inspiration for a lot of this story. I was really worried about the action scenes I'm not used to writing them so I'm glad that you liked them, I picture it as a movie in my head as well. I would never allow anyone but Tom to turn Bill, it wouldn't be right any other way! Tom's family members are very important, even more important now that they are all on the same side, aside from Alan. I wanted Tom's siblings to be important now just random secondary characters. They won't always be present, but I want them to be around. Rebecca was the name you couldn't think of. It's not over, this part will be soon but I'm pretty sure I'm going to split it into two stories instead of one big one, I'm not sure yet. I would love to make a career out of writing, I love it. Hm, where will I go from here? There's still Tom's mother and now Alan who will both want revenge for their lover, and father. So, we'll see :) Once again thank you so much, your review made my night!
Date: 02/08/09 12:35 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
What an amazing chapter! I'm just speechless!
Author's Response: Aw thank youuuu!! :)
Date: 02/08/09 12:30 am Title: Where Our Alliegences Lie
oh my fuck!! thank you for turning bill!! XD
and uhmm i thought the encounter with their father would be longer but anyways turning bill compensated for it ;)
Author's Response: Mhm, I contemplated with that for a while. About how meeting their father would go. But, I tried to think about it realisticly, Tom would not care about seeing his father or for how long. Know what I mean? It was all just for Bill's protection. I imagine in real life it would be longer, but words are a bit harder :P And you're welcome ;)