Date: 04/23/09 12:28 am Title: Blood Lust and Control (Part Two) Momentary Lapse
Lovely chapter!
Date: 04/18/09 09:48 pm Title: Our Story
That was perfect! (I know, took me long enough, right?) Thank you so much for writing that!
Date: 04/04/09 08:31 pm Title: Our Story
I don't know what to say except AWESOME...It really was.
I loved it
Date: 03/19/09 02:19 am Title: Thank You
aww. This truely gave me butterflies!! :D I LOVED the part where Tom is describing the things about Bill to be a puzzel. That was brilliant! :D
Date: 03/19/09 02:10 am Title: Powerless
Gahh. this is too good, I swear! i take back what I said--This is better than Twilight. By far! :D
Date: 03/19/09 02:03 am Title: Informative
i love the things like when he said that hazel was his new favorite color, and the facial expression things...And I guess you should expect me to say that this kinda, sorta does remind me of 'Twilight'. And I'm sure you get that alot. LOL...You have awesome skills, no joke! :D
Date: 03/19/09 01:55 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
oh this is good; real good! :D You have really amazing skills, you know! :D
Date: 03/19/09 01:47 am Title: Never Forget
this. is. amazing. as simple, but amazing, as that. It's already really good, and I loved how you ended it with that one line! :D
Date: 03/17/09 02:45 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
One word: amazing!
Date: 03/17/09 02:45 am Title: Thirst and Insanity
One word: amazing!
Date: 03/16/09 08:35 pm Title: Our Story
Alright I haven’t been able to review many of my favorite authors or stories for a while. But this is the end of your story and I thought at least I can review your story one last time for old time sakes. Well as always your writing is so moving and it just evokes emotional pull of your readers. I thought it was sad yet happy ending. But that’s the way all poetic people write right! But I love how you ended the story it seemed like the right place to end their story.
And Bill having powers was an great addition to his transformation. He was the key element to the decimation of the threat to their lives and happiness. I thought you utilized him well in the story as a vampire. I thought he wasn’t going to be important in the final showdown but more of a nuisance but I’m glad I’m wrong. Him being the one to be the hero was unexpected but appreciated.
And the ending chapter was beautifully written and sweet in a way. Everything Tom ever wanted he has now. He will never be alone or a shadow living he has a purpose and a life worth living now. And a family he choose this was a great end to his introduction to the audience it sum up his existence. He has someone to spend every second of his life with and he actually loves who his is now. He will never loath was fate has brought to him. And he has the rest of eternity to appreciate the fruits of his labor. And your right this was just the beginning of a wonderful life for them to write. Now they can really live and enjoy each other.
You write really beautiful so hope to see more from you and hope you actually read this since I think it’s been a long time since you wrote this but I just read the whole rest of the story since I left off. And hope you love this review.
Author's Response: Wow, I'm speechless. I don't really know what to say other than thank you. I really appretiate that you took the time to write that review to me, it means a lot, and the fact that you enjoyed the story means so much. I felt this ending was the ending that needed to happen as well, I could have kept it going but there was no direction. They were happy, they were together and that's all that mattered. Bill in reality is already other-wordly, so I felt the need to portray him as even more than that in a supernatural position. He was the hero ultimately with help of course. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. :) I was really happy with the last chapter, I was very emotional writing it, and it means a lot to know that I can provoke such emotion in other people as well. This is just the beginning of their life together :) I have no plans for a no story right now because of how busy school is for me, but I do plan on writing more. Just waiting for the right insipration. Thank you again so much for reading and for all your support :)
Date: 03/12/09 11:37 am Title: Our Story
yay!!! awesome story!!! i love it!
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Date: 03/10/09 05:24 pm Title: Never Forget
That's too bad, some episodes are just brilliant, like the one with the ninja surgeons...that's was just random... XD
Yeah, don't worry about it ;)
Date: 03/10/09 04:49 pm Title: Our Story
Dude! There's a sequel??
THERE BETTER BE MAN! THIS STORY IS WAAAYYY TOOOO COOOL TO END!!
Author's Response: There isn't a sequel I'm afraid. but I'm glad you liked the story :)
Date: 03/10/09 02:48 pm Title: Our Story
perfect ending ;)
Author's Response: :):) Thank you!
Date: 03/09/09 09:27 pm Title: Our Story
wow i absolutely loved this stry u do not know gurl i really did
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!
Date: 03/07/09 11:15 pm Title: Our Story
My dear this was a truly wonderful story! I loved each and every chapter from start to finish, I loved how Tom's perspective changed, how Bill grew stronger, how tom over came his demons (literally). It's was wonderful!
congradulations on finishing it, you did a fantastic job.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :) I'm so proud of this story, it feels amazing to be finished it but at the same time I can't help but to feel a little depressed. I'm going to miss writing them so much, but I'm happy with how it ended. Thank you so much for the support.
Date: 03/07/09 05:14 pm Title: Never Forget
Yeah I know what you mean. I was great while it lasted though ^^
You should watch scrubs, It's hilarious! I started watching it forever ago and Bill and Tom watch it too so I love it even more now. They talked about it in 'interview in the clouds' on Tokio Tv ;)
Author's Response: Yeah I remember when they talked about it, it just doesn't seem like my kind of show lol.
Date: 03/07/09 03:20 pm Title: Our Story
OH MEIN GOTT! I'm so sad to see thie one go but WOW can you write an epilogue! That was one of the top five endings I have EVER read in my entire life. I love how it all ended up happy and all the poetic love at the end was so beautiful that it nearly brought tears to my eyes... I hope to read more by you in future... :) Keep up the fabulous work. XD
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I said from the very beginning that I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I hope that did it justice! :) Thanks again for the support. :)
Date: 03/07/09 03:01 pm Title: My Family, My Past
Excellent! I love that Tom is opening up to Bill now and they are getting to know each other more. Well at least Bill is getting to know Tom. Bill himself is still a bit mysterious and I want him to confide in Tom. Like, does he have any friends? What happened to his family etc. etc? Is his past just as intriguing as Tom's? Inquiring minds want to know. :D
Ooooh, methinks John is about to get his. How exciting! I want to read more now, but I have errands to run, so I'll have to wait to see what happens when Tom finds John.