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Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 05:02 pm Title: Metal Walls

Go Bill, Go Gusti! We should make a cheerleading squad to cheer for the dudes!!! *get out poms poms and jumps*

Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 03:04 pm Title: Metal Walls

Oh shit... that was something i didn't expect. Huh... Andreas brother killed Bill's... wow. AW poor tomi!!! Good chapi. Update soon

Reviewer: Loran Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 02:48 pm Title: Metal Walls

*eats* Mmm, yum, Thanks!
Okey, so for the actually review...
Dun-dun-duuuun...
I 100% loved Gustavs pov! It was, just, fantastic... Well, I don't have time to write more on this review(I'm used to make, really long reviews) cuz I have to go to the Dentist...*Twin sister comes in, draging me away*

Reviewer: mercy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 01:26 pm Title: Metal Walls

You guys are very talented writers.I love this story and would love to read others from you:)If all of your stories are as well written and interesting as this then i am very sure i will love them also:D

Reviewer: Maddie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 12:14 pm Title: Metal Walls

*love*

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 11:02 am Title: Metal Walls

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeee gusti

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:48 am Title: Metal Walls

Awww, I'm glad they finally met =]

Even though the meeting was cut a bit short...*pouts* I feel so bad for Bill. And Andreas ought to feel like an ass :(

*cheers for Gusti section!*

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:03 am Title: Metal Walls

dammit! explain what happened sooooooooon!!! also, why is tomi likely not at home???

great chapter!!!

Reviewer: Kyara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:37 am Title: Metal Walls

*swallows* next, bitte? x3

Reviewer: gustavs_heartbeat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 04:59 am Title: Metal Walls

OH. MY. GOD. Why the hell was he still friends with Andi then anyway when his brother even tried to rape him??? OMG!!!!

Heheh, I liked the part about Gustav skipping away. Funny....hehehe

Reviewer: emraud Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 04:27 am Title: Metal Walls

OOOOOOOOhhhh... Gosh... Andi's brother...

Aaaww... Poor Tomi!! Hope Bill would pay him a visit...

Heeeeee... Please update soon!! *mwah*

Reviewer: LightMonday Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 02:14 am Title: Metal Walls

Nein!!! No ending there!!!! Not fair!!! *does Bill-pout* you guys writes more? Pleezes?

Reviewer: mon1652 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 02:14 am Title: Metal Walls

girly gustav back yeah

more details revealed this chapter. so here's what I think andreas brother who is also an ass tried to rape bill trace saw so he fight with him but was killed.

great can't wait for more of tom's story too. poor poor tomi. he needs to get away from abusive father before he dies one day.

they need to confide their dark secret to eachother to help eachother.

so gimmi gimmmi more

Reviewer: LightMonday Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 02:10 am Title: Meeting in the Art Room

0.0

...

Is lost for words. Just...awesome.

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 01:37 am Title: Metal Walls

yay Gustav!

Reviewer: Karousel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 01:03 am Title: Metal Walls

holy shit i was not expecting the killer of Trace to be Andreas' brother! that was a super awesome twist, devious twist but i luved it none the less! i feel sorry for both boys...they wont tell the other what exactly is wrong, which is why they go great together! keep up the awesome work and i will be anticipating whenever you decide to update next!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 12:48 am Title: Metal Walls

plz update soon..i luvz this hurry thx=]

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 12:09 am Title: Metal Walls

Oh gawd Gaiz update soon ish. I want more !

 

Reviewer: winkybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 11:55 pm Title: Metal Walls

Why must you end the excitement of the chapter so soon? Urgh! I want to know what's gonna happen!!! lol. I love this story.... and I asked my roommate what I should I should give you for being such incredible authors... and she said a hat with a feather in it. Sorry it's not edible.

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/09 11:39 pm Title: Metal Walls

*Wild applause* Brilliant, just wonderful. Great cookies, by the way!

And I love Gustav's little blurb. So random, it totally rocked.

Can't wait for the next bit *tosses skittles*

Oh, and it amazes me how you guys can be all hyper and weird in the chapter notes, but have the story so much more serious. . . Do you guys have on and off switches for hyperness or something?

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