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Reviewer: AdventPhantom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 11:21 pm Title: Tom's Place

I think at a point I awww'd when Bill was crying and Tom was just holding him. So sweet!! And why did Georg have to find Bill? o.O Was he just worried or does it have to do with something important?

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:42 pm Title: Tom's Place

*Le gasp* That was intense! I loved the hell out of it. Thank you guys so much for the fast updates, this is like crack... if I didn't get it regularly, i'd go crazy! So much love

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:34 pm Title: Tom's Place

*growls* Good job, G's. -_- Way to ruin the moment...


*takes away your sweets and caffeine* You guys...are something else, haha.

Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:34 pm Title: Tom's Place

I HATE YOU! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?
Lmao JKJKJK I love you guys, you are amazing! But come on, NO KISS???
Kill meeeeeeeeeeeee

Reviewer: mestup1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 10:28 pm Title: Tom's Place

what's so important George has to find him that bad O.o.... hmmmmm nice chapter :)

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:49 pm Title: Tom's Place

*teacher voice* Today class we will do an experiment! If, we give ML and engery drink *gives ML the energy drink*, then...(you fill in the rest)
*love*

Reviewer: icequeenqt170 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:48 pm Title: Tom's Place

Ah! so close to kissing! keep it comin!

Reviewer: talyntokiohotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:42 pm Title: Tom's Place

oh very nice i love this chapter. whats going to happen nect

Reviewer: The Walking Oxymoron Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:32 pm Title: Tom's Place

AWWW.
I adore this.
(:
It's so nice that it took you almost ten chapters to get their actual physical romance going.
It's a nice breath of fresh air considering most people have them meet in Chapter One, fall in love at the end of Chapter Two, and have sex and relationship dramas in Chapters Three through Seven.

I love this.
:D!
Keep writing and update soon!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:18 pm Title: Tom's Place

O.O;

<.<;;

CLIFFHANGER WHY??? it was just starting to get good... and Why did they haveta ruin the moment huh?? 

Reviewer: Karousel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 09:08 pm Title: Tom's Place

aw that was kinda sad about the whole thing about Trace and then with Toms father....but it helps the story! i thought that it was sweet, and yeah i feel bad for Andi because his brother did that and he didnt even do anything! but yay for Bill almost kissing Tom! stupid Georg and Gustav busting in... haha

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:57 pm Title: Tom's Place

hoky shit i LLLLOOOOVVVEEE this with a burnin passion.. wow update tho plppzz XD

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:48 pm Title: Tom's Place

I love where this is going! Um why was Georg so desperate to find Bill though? By the way Tom's place sounds amazing, it would be awesome to see! I wish I had a place like that.

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:29 pm Title: Tom's Place

awwww, more pretty please? with sweet sweet sugar on top with chocolate? this is so emotional, but so good and addicting.

Reviewer: gustavs_heartbeat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:20 pm Title: Tom's Place

NO! They almost kissed! I wonder if Gustav nd Georg mite get together as well...hmmmm

Reviewer: Synnie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:08 pm Title: Tom's Place

*Giggles* Hey, ML, Did you know that if you stared at the ceiling and said banana, it sounds like gullible?

Ok, so this was an amazing chapter. I'm dying to know what Andreas is up to, what Georg knows, etc.

Grr to you and your trailing off. . .Even if it WAS a good place to stop,

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 08:07 pm Title: Tom's Place

Are you two sisters? lol
And damnit. It was so close. So so close. And Tommy can open up! Wowzers. And and and and and and... -holds out a banana to ML- Happiness in yellow form?

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 07:14 pm Title: Metal Walls

interesting.... *munch* thanks for hte cookies dudes!!!!

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 05:55 pm Title: Metal Walls

Wow!! So it was Andread brother!! How unexpected!! also...WTF about Tom?? did his father hit him or something like that??

Reviewer: Ascuba Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/29/09 05:22 pm Title: Metal Walls

Hahahahaha. I love you guys. And this is really good. I think I know what happened to Bill...slightly obvious...*cough* Anyway. I must go make my eyes look like Bill's. Freaking eyeliner's gonna poke me I bet. -wanders off grumbling-

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