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Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:10 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

If Bill doesn't want to go, then he needs to apply for emancipation. He'd have to figure out how to support himself andn prove he can, but he could! There's a plot thought for ya!

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:09 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww G's

Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:06 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

Ok, I have to say Gustav's part was so fucking hilarious I had tears in my eyes.
And BAM it all came crashing down when Bill had to move...
And I've always been wondering how you can keep up with so many stories... Wow, but you rock. Like fricking flying cows on sticks with spotted zebras ...?

Reviewer: lil banana Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 08:31 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

noooooooooooes!!!!!!!!!!pretty pretty pretty plz with monkees and evil bunnies on top hurry up and update!!!!!
aaak!!i luv this story...u ppl r even awesumer than skittles...and thats really really really awesum...

Reviewer: cleverone Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 08:01 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

that's so sad and really unexpected. great job. :D

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 08:00 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

oh gott... NEIN BILLA DON"T LEAVE!

love the story btw!

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 07:58 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

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Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 01:23 pm Title: Candid Camera

this part is making me panick.....thank god i don't have to wait for more....

Reviewer: unrayTHefan43x Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/09 02:06 am Title: Run to Love

hmmm i wanna cookies
GOOD JOB MY DEARS
THIS STORY IS ADDICTIVE :D

Reviewer: tokiohotelfan12354 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/09 12:26 am Title: Killer Cuteness

yay! i just finished reading it all. its so good=3 update soon plz! and hope ML comes back? it was so funny when u were together *gives bag of skittles for u 2 to share* love the story!

Reviewer: OhDearGod Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 06:50 pm Title: Killer Cuteness

Loving the story
haha The way Gustav falls asleep is similair yet differet to how i sleep XD
I worry about crap and I get attacked by my cat and strangely after that realisation decides to slap me and then i grumble about fruit and gummy bears before sleeping :)
Strange alikliness :)
Can't Spell, Dont give a chinchilla about it

Reviewer: OhDearGod Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/09 05:42 pm Title: THE CONVO

I love this story :)
Got confused a little but it made me laugh at my stupidity but oh well:

Cuddles: *looks up*
*gasps*
would u look at that?
there's a ceiling up there! ^^

- I laughed here -

Homie-G: I KNOOOOOOO I GOT ONE! IT'S A GOOD ONE!

- smiled here I thought it was those random happy scream-the-obvious parts of conversations.(Gustav's my favourite I love the way you characterised him ^^) From here on is where I got confused... -

Cuddles: yeah? n what's that?

- I went "wtf? Its a ceiling ... Unless he has a straw roof ... Wtf girl just read the damn story!!" -

Homie-G: I hereby dub you Blondie!

- I went "Oh! I get it! He's talking about nicknames! That explains it all!"-

So yeah totally confused at the end but I got there in the end:)
Keep on going :)

Reviewer: gurr730 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/09 03:02 pm Title: Killer Cuteness

omgfg!!! i fukin love Gustav in this story!!!! i havent laughed that hard in a while!! i absolutely loved these last two chapter and i cant wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: ladysoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/09 08:53 am Title: Killer Cuteness

OMG! This is so freaking funny and really really good! I stayed up all night to read all 22 chapters, not even pausing to leave comments after each chapter, it was that good! Can't wait for you to finish this story!!!!!

Reviewer: alelgreen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 10:00 pm Title: Killer Cuteness

tadpoles!!
and lol
i loved it awesome chappy

Reviewer: BeCkY Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 05:05 pm Title: Musings about TK_Deluxe

i lurved this chappy!!! lolz... srry to hear that ML isn't writing anymore!!! =[ keep the amazing chappies coming tho and the hilariousness! peace love tokio hotel!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 01:37 am Title: Killer Cuteness

FINALLY! That's all I can say.
Oh, and I know what that odd acronym is nao...

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 01:32 am Title: Musings about TK_Deluxe

Why doesn't ML write this anymore? Just curious...
Freaking flying monkeys with juice boxes on sticks...Once again, you astound me with your language skillz.
Gustav is a nut, plain and simple. And I like it!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 01:26 am Title: Run to Love

HOLY FLYING MONKEYS WITH PEANUT BUTTER! That was osm!
Attention Deficet Ohh! Shiny. I think we all suffer from that...
Oh, shit. Caught, um, shall we say, red handed? That prolly can't be good...
I can't argue with the math in your chapter end notes. I like that equation.

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/09 01:19 am Title: Diva and Man Whore Glaredown

Ceiling cat and Basement cat! Oh, I luff dem! Dey R mi heeros!
Epic retard=Masterful Use of the English language!
Gustav reminds me of Billa, with the randomness and craziness. Come to think of it, we're all a LITTLE NUTS!

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