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Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 06:17 pm Title: One Last Kiss

Ooooo OMG

Does Offline v.2 still have GG as a pairing?

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 06:12 pm Title: Metal Walls

lol! BURRN hahaha
I love it!

Reviewer: kristina Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:43 pm Title: One Last Kiss

I LOVE THIS STORY:D
I started to cry when Bill had to leave, but I hope it's gonna work out for them in offline.v.2 :D

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:38 pm Title: One Last Kiss

i can't wait for the sequel... i despise Bill's parents so effing much

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:30 pm Title: Keeping What's Mine

Yes! they will finally meet!!
gahh yer dancing makes me want to dance :)
I love this :)

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:22 pm Title: Meeting in the Art Room

awwee. porr bil!

tom's need to help him out :)

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:18 pm Title: One Last Kiss

NOO!!! It's OVER!!!! NEIN!!!!!


such a sad ending..... POST OFFLINE v 2 ASAP!

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:16 pm Title: The Day

awwe poor bill.

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 05:10 pm Title: Roses are...Pink?

Awwwe! :)
this was funny, Gustav as a gangsterr? -shudders- haha HIALRIOUS!

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 04:41 pm Title: The Symbol and The Name

Tomi has an idea??
wow! he thinks xD lol jkjk

Reviewer: ellakaulitzlove Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 03:20 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

NOOOO!!!! BILL, DON'T LEAVE!!!!

(Sorry I couldn't come up with a more intelligent review) :p

Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 11:18 am Title: A Punch in the Stomach

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Billa can't leave, no he has to be there for Tomi. Update soon pretty please. I can't wait for the last chapter and the sequel.
Let me say that you're story changed my views on slash. I never really liked slash until I read this story. I can't wait to read more from you. You're an awesome writer.

Reviewer: Felicia08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 03:05 am Title: A Punch in the Stomach

I HATE HER! I WILL KICK HER AS!!

Relly like it give me more please

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 02:47 am Title: Family and IM

HAHA G_Man??? lmao!
I love it! I am trying to picture Gustav throwing gang signs and it's HILARIOUS! xD
haha it's so funny! I LOVE YOU GUYS xP

Reviewer: jumbiiexD Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 02:39 am Title: The Blog

hahaha!!!
I love this!!! :) it's mysterious?

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/18/09 02:25 am Title: A Punch in the Stomach

Oh noes! Bill's leaving! That is so sad! And he just got Tomi, too... This poor kid just can't get a break, can he?

Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 11:01 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

Poor Bill!!!!! His parents are jus absolutely horrible!! Plus if he is over the age of 16, he can live anywhere he wants not technically with a parent or guardian!

Author's Response: ja, ja, i know...in real life. but in my story...this is how it goes XP

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:46 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

OMG I COULD JUST SMACK THAT DAMNDED WOMAN!!!!! HOW DARE SHE DO THAT TO POOR BILL!!! I JUST WANT TO UGHHHHHHHHHHH!!...



...i think you guys are making this story too damnded good because I just want to fight that crazy woman! Damn you, good authors. X)

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:25 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

oh god what? please let auntie and unc like, umm adopt tom or stay in town or heck i dunno.... i want them together...

Reviewer: xxshatteredxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/09 09:18 pm Title: A Punch in the Stomach

omg, bill can't leave, his parents suck. gustav and the nargles, he actually kinda reminds me of luna with the weirdness, but he's still awesome. i wish i could try some of the cookies he makes. i can't believe bill's leaving, but i can't wait for the sequel.

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