Date: 01/22/09 03:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, pretty GOOD chapter XD... BUt I-ll love it even more if there were something more than just oral sex 9_9
Author's Response: It's heading in that direction, I promise :)
Date: 01/22/09 03:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Hsumcg high ofnnxhbj. Feukvd. Hjdhn.
Ahhh. *shudder*
Please forgive my inability to form ledgable understandable words. This has left me quite disoriented.
(DAAAYUM HAWT!!)
Author's Response: haha thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.
Date: 01/22/09 02:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Perfect.
Your characterisation of Bill and Bushido and the dynamics between them is just perfect.
I love how you write Bill so self-assured yet with a clearly vulnerable and soft side.
I love how your Bushido is an arrogant fucker but a charming one. How he cover up his confusion with pure bravado.
I'm very excited about this fic and I can't wait to see how you're going to devellop this.
Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much!
Date: 01/22/09 02:34 am Title: Chapter 2
At the beginning I was going to try to keep track of all the lines and situations that amused me, but the list became too long so I'm sorry you won't get specifics. Basically, know that my eyes are completely like *_* after seeing the story's not complete. I really want Bill's lingering looks to lead somewhere but even if you clicked complete here this would be a very well done, if slightly unsatisfying story.
Author's Response: The fact that you think the story could end here makes me feel wonderful - since I'm writing with an insight into Bushido's mind and he obviously doesn't think that he and Bill are going to develop any sort of relationship, his character does consider this scene to be an endpoint(But since I want he and Bill to hook up lots more, its not...I just love how that works). Thank you so much!
Date: 01/22/09 02:16 am Title: Chapter 2
this is amazing. The development of the characters is phenomenal. Great job! Can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/22/09 01:25 am Title: Chapter 2
*_*
Okay, this is gonna sound weird, but roll with me here. This line:
He liked it that way; he enjoyed how even the most high-class women all looked like whores when they were on their knees, eyes watering and struggling not to gag as he fucked their mouths.
That's genius. And even though it's shitty, it's him.
Also, you help me picture him with his shirt off when there's not a pic handy, which is always a good thing.
I think I do *_* too much with you.
Author's Response: When I wrote that line I literally blushed...it is so dirty and chauvinistic but I felt that I had to keep it, just because that's how I see him feeling. I'm so glad you felt the same way. Thank you :)
Date: 01/22/09 01:21 am Title: Chapter 2
This installment had me laughing and cheering for both Bill and Bushido. Another wonderful job, and I really can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you liked it - thank you!
Date: 01/22/09 01:15 am Title: Chapter 2
Like you would get negative feedback on this?
Puh-lease.
Or maybe I'm just starved for Billshido. It is my favorite pairing, without a doubt.
I'm wondering what your endpoint will be. It's not transparent like so many other fictions.
I wonder when we can expect an update?
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm planning on updating pretty soon :)
Date: 01/18/09 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Great fic, good length, fantastic not!delicate!flower!Bill, and if you do decide to expand on this universe then I for one would be very grateful :)
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm going to try!
Date: 01/17/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was excellent. you are a writer whether you realize it or not!! keep writing.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you!
Date: 01/16/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no, you can't end it there! This was utterly, brilliantly, deliciously *hot* and I desperately need a sequel XD I esp. love confident Bill; everyone always writes him as bashful, but seriously the boy has more confidence and self-assured-ness in his hair follicles than I have in my entire body...
Author's Response: I agree, lol...I don't really think that Bill is lacking in self-confidence. I love seeing him as a strong-willed character and I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks!
Date: 01/16/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was really good, and I must confess to being a Billshido fan too. I think this was great for such a simple plot line and you manage to get a good level of believability with the story.
Side note: the funniest bit to me was Bushido saying that Bill is “Too young" when Bushido's current girlfriend in real life is 17.
Author's Response: What! 17! Bushido, you dirty old man. You dirty, sexy old man. Who is this lucky 17 year old and why can't Bushido find someone closer to his own age...like a 19 year old hottie from Tokio Hotel? Thanks for your review :)
Date: 01/16/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked saucy-Bill! You're going to write another chapter, right? I really liked how you portrayed Bill and Bushido! This story was so SEXY!
Author's Response: Thank you - I've actually got a lot of other chapters already written, they just don't exactly...connect yet. I'm going to work on it :)
Date: 01/16/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have a raging Billshido addiction now that needs feeding, thanks to you!
The dynamics between the two were so...so perfect! Totally different than I've seen on the site.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always love the idea of forcing two characters together who don't exactly get along and letting the conflict (and passion) run wild. Yay for feisty, strong-willed characters!
Date: 01/16/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
If I could erase all of your self doubt, I would.
This was absolutely delicious. I did kind of want to face palm when Bill said he'd never blown a guy before (with those deep throating skills, please) but it didn't take away from the scene at all.
It was extremely hot, for sure. I also really liked that - on Bill's part, at least - this was just to get Bu off his back. But now Bushido is really interested? Fuck yes.
You also did quite well for not having a beta.
Even if you don't find a way to weave the one shots into a story, just change the summary a little bit and make it a collection on Billshido fics.
I'd like to read more of them :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really tried to keep Bill consistent with how I see him and RL, and it just made sense to me that he would stick with his virginal yet seductive image when interacting with Bushido...i mean, it's worked quite well for him in the past, right?
Date: 01/16/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
there is SO much interest, i need MOAR!
so gooooood.
Author's Response: haha thanks!
Date: 01/16/09 07:23 am Title: Chapter 1
bwahaha. that was AMAZING. i fucking loved it. it's good to see some new blood on the site, and i just got into the whole Billshido stuff, but stories like this are making me LOVE that pairing. You should def. write (or paste together) a sequel
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm going to try!
Date: 01/16/09 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
HOLY FUCKING HELL THAT WAS HAWT!!
You should do a sequel to this. Bu's just dying to fuck Billa, I just know it. :P
Author's Response: Of course he is :)
Date: 01/16/09 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot hot hot! I'd love to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/16/09 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1
That was kind of amazing. I really like how you write, the way you introduced the characters and everything.
I can't even pinpoint all the reasons Bushido just reads wonderfully to me. Maybe the biggest is that he seems fleshed out and real.
It is so so rare to find a Bill in fanfic that seems like the guy I see in interviews and whatnot and this was amazingly close. Like, I enjoyed that he went right up to Bushido, but it was too good to be true and I kept expecting him to back down because that's just what keeps getting written. And he didn't! I love that he's not backing down, that he may smell like strawberry vanilla but that doesn't mean you can walk all over him. Making up rules like that? I buy it. Deciding to try something he's never done before? Sure thing, and of course he's fabulous at it.
I would adore to see more from you, especially anything that comes before, after, or whatever related to this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really focused on trying to make Bushido and Bill as interesting and dynamic as they are in RL, and it makes me so happy that I somewhat succeeded. I agree - most fanfics have Bill cast as a pretty but weak character, but I see him as so much more than that. He is feminine but confident and selfish and magnetic, and all the contrasts that make up his personality are what make him so irresistible.