Date: 01/25/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Holy fucking hell!! I lost it completely when he just instantly dropped to his knees in the elevator. I can only imagine how Bu must have felt, his brains scrambling and melting out his ears.
I have a question. Why won't Billa let Bu touch him?
Author's Response: Bushido is beginning to wonder the same thing, and if I know Bushido (which I do, because I write him lol) he's going to want to figure out the answer...
Date: 01/25/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm so glad you're continuing this -- not only is it ridiculously hot, but there is actually a strain of plot hidden under all the rampant smut ;) For instance, really good character development. And then there's Bill's whole thing with the not touching: is there a deeper meaning? or will is just make for a really cute 'aww' moment when he lets Bushido finally touch him. I hope this happens -- I want a happy ending, just as i'm sure Bushido will eventually want something more than a blow job ;)
Author's Response: Lol, the plot strain just happens to be really, really tiny haha. The 'no touching' thing will get sorted out with time, I promise :). Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/25/09 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
I wonder why Bill doesn't like being touched... *ponders*
Love this bby :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And you shall find out...
Date: 01/25/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter 3
God, you're so rigth. Rules are made to be broken.
So, keep it going, and update soon! ^-^
Author's Response: Haha I will - thanks!
Date: 01/25/09 06:24 am Title: Chapter 3
I can't believe I missed chapter 2 and just now found this. I still love this as much as ever, especially now that there are some hints of genuine flirting in the air. I'm favoriting because there's no way I'm missing the next chapter. Which I hope comes soon. Just sayin'. :D
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for the favorite! And I'm planning on updating really soon :)
Date: 01/25/09 05:19 am Title: Chapter 3
I love this to pieces and am insanely jealous of your ability to write Bushido. The sex is -waves hands- smokin' and the dialogue is spot on but it's the details that make it for me. Their interaction and Bushido-voice make me so *__* it's kind of hard to see, you know, through eyes that have become star shaped, but I can clear them enough to pick out the details and lady, you've got me eating out of your hand here.
If I wasn't so dead tired I'd leave you a long worshipful review but as it is I'm about to pass out. Just know I loved and would like more plzkthnx.
Author's Response: That you like my Bushido is just...I'm speechless. It is such an amazing compliment (although it doesn't make much sense) because I am absolutely obsessed with your Bushido...the Space Between is such a perfect insight into his mind that it makes me sick. Thank you so much!
Date: 01/25/09 03:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Gawd. This is amazing. Your descriptions, characterization, not to mention accuracy with tiny little details that make the story soo much better... Simply wonderful. Not to mention really hot!
You're a genius. I canNOT wait for the next chapter.
-Ami
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you! That makes me so happy!
Date: 01/25/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 3
o.o i like it o.o you should..add another chaoter >->..
Author's Response: I will soon :)
Date: 01/25/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 3
...????
that was definitely great! it's incredible how you can make complete chapters with so little talking, sexy scenes and a catchy plot =).
Author's Response: Haha thanks!
Date: 01/25/09 12:00 am Title: Chapter 3
good. jeezz us. I'm in L.O.V.E.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you :)
Date: 01/24/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm pretty sure Bill is going to suck the skin off of Bushido's cock. I'm all for it, if Bushido would just give in to the master. lol And for the love of god, just remember to not touch him. lol
Author's Response: lol, yep, Bushido is not all that quick of a learner...
Date: 01/22/09 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sh*t. That was amazing. I actually hate (or I thought I did)head stories but it was arousing and crazily intense.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 01/22/09 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
I didn't think you could top what you did with the last chapter and you proved me wrong. that was so hot it was criminal
Author's Response: haha thank you!
Date: 01/22/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Seriously??? this is great!!! I'm so happy you are continuing this that I could dance my way to a mental institution where they'll think I'm crazy and probably try to sedate my euphoria away...
yea... I like your story that much =).
Author's Response: lol thanks!
Date: 01/22/09 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
love love LOVED it! :)
Can't wait for more, I'm so eager to see what happens.
And will Bushido actually not talk about Bill? I doubt it. Then Bill will have to come back and give him another blowjob and...yes *_*
Or, you know, I'll just wait :D
Author's Response: So glad you like it - thank you!
Date: 01/22/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
*comes back you life* Holy crap, I love you *dies again*
Author's Response: haha :)
Date: 01/22/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
*shivers, shivles up, and dies*
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it!
Date: 01/22/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Perfection.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 01/22/09 10:24 am Title: Chapter 2
your writing is several cuts above 99% of the hacks on here. It's your wit, intelligence and incredible dialogue. Keep writing!!
but what's with the name 'clarebear' sounds like you're a 3 year old when you write like a sophitciated, 40 year old. cc
Author's Response: Thank you! And regarding the name change, shoot! I was going for “oh, this girl seems nice and friendly” not, “Oh...should toddlers really be writing gay porn?” Oh well. I guess that I can use this to my advantage, luring readers into having low expectations and then bam! full sentences and everything lol. Thanks for your review!
Date: 01/22/09 05:18 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow, I just love this story. It's written so well and all of the guys seem so real! Good job! I can't wait to read more of it!
Author's Response: Thank you!