This fic should be featured.
It's not common we see Billshido fic as good as this one. I just love sassy bill and his interaction with bu. He's so straight forward and yet so innocent at times. I wonder why he's so persistent in having bushido not to touch him when he had deep-throated him several times already.
This is not your first TH fanfic is it? If it is, you totally amazed me.

Author's Response: You're so nice lol! Yeah, this is my first fic and I officially have no idea what I'm doing haha...it means a lot that you like it. Thank you!

Although all your smut (the hard and the slow ;-)) was really wonderful, I mostly enjoyed the part of Bill's ranting and Bushido's reaction to that rant.

It was so vivid, so real and so revealing!


And, this is just some sillyness from my part: who wouldn't want an autograph from a hot-gender-bending-making-you-doubt-your-sexual-orientation-deep-throater?! That's right: everyone! Especially 50 year old, balding security guards! Hoorah for him!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! And I also give the security guard mad props for getting an autograph as well...the lucky bastard :)

Oh god, you're killing me with this fic.
It's amazing, I love it!
But I'm wondering what's wrong with Bill, too... why can't Bu touch his hair? We all know it's not because it's styled or anything... What does the touching mean to Bill? *mumble*
Btw, great fic! I can't ever wait for more ;)

Author's Response: So glad you like it!!

I like the slowness... it made me giggles. O_o... yeah, I know it's strange, but it did. That's just me though, so CONTINUE!

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

Gaaah, it's not only Bushido who's going nuts because of Bill's "no touching" rule D: He'll let him eventually, right? Right? *stare*

xD

I love this. It's so... PWP XD Perfect in a boring class where I'm supposed to be writing essays.
And I love that Bill pretends he doesn't want it, but when Bushido tells him to either do it, or leave... he gets really into it *mwahaha*

Author's Response: Maybe...*sheepish smile*

Phew. Thank gawd Bu thought to get the tape. They'd both be totally destroyed.

This chapter was haawt. So steamy it gave me chills. I hope Bu will finally get to touch Billa. Maybe a lil' screwing deep into the sheets action too. :P *hopes*

Author's Response: Haha thank you!

Boring? Not at all! I thoroughly enjoyed the mental image of Bill licking and exploring Bushido like a cat. Although I am really curious about Bill's reluctance to let Bushido touch him. Hmmm.

For this particular encounter, anyway - in the future he was going to figure out how to get his hands on the kid.

Yes, please! *__*

Author's Response: Oh good! Thank you!

This was no where in near boring. Not even in the same zip code. Holy shit. I loved every second of it. Yes, every glance, every word, every lick.

It concerns me that you're wanting to change now. Obviously, I can't tell you how to write your story. But I think the story pretty much hinges on these meetings that they have, and the feelings and little developments that we see in these meetings. Bushido going from a complete ass (which he still sorta is, of course, for the most part) to wanting to get his hands on Bill, to whimpering and begging Bill to finish him off are hugely important. So if you start skipping encounters, are we to assume that nothing of great importance happened beyond Bill's sucking him off? Do we assume that Bill showed no further vulnerability? That Bushido realized no further desire for more intimacy in the encounter we missed? Unless it's done by flashback, which could be quite extensive, I am afraid that if you skip encounters, you will ... lose some of the intensity that makes it so much more than smut.

I hope that this all made sense and you don't think I'm some random, rambling fool. Your writing is amazing, as always, and this story just keeps getting better. :)

Author's Response: I absolutely agree with you, and you certainly aren’t some rambling fool :). I guess I am just trying to adjust for writing for an audience in addition to writing for myself, but it makes me so happy that you feel that the slight changes in their relationship are integral, because these small developments are what triggered me to record the story in the first place (the smut was a close second lol). When I said that I was planning on only focusing on the more important developments in Bill and Bu’s relationship, I actually was referring to these tiny advances because, exactly as you said, they seem really small but due to the guarded nature of the characters, their importance is magnified. I don’t think that I would ever have been able to bring myself to gut them out of the story – the reader would just have to deal with it being boring lol. I’m just going to try and take out the encounters in which none of these little progressions take place, because a) they’re really sloppily written, and b) again, exactly as you said, I think the reader can just assume that sometimes the two’s interactions are purely physical and no emotional development happens.Thank you so much for your review – it means so much to me that you cared enough about the slight character development to make sure that I didn’t get rid of it. And feel free to tell me how to write my story any time lol – I’d love any advice you can give me XD

again i love your dialogue between the 2, i don't even care about the sex! please keep this story going. it's at the point of wondering how their relationship will evolve becaues whether they want it to or not it is already.... the blushing and the glaring! bill trying stay so utterly in control when he clearly is sweet on b. is so adorable and believable. x

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

lol bills a bitch xp
gud chapie

Author's Response: Thanks!