Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

Clappyhands!! Hooray!! I've been having a shitty day, but this sooo makes up for it!

Author's Response: So glad to have made your day a little bit better lol :)

Reviewer: Ikkke88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

omg, this story is so erotic

Author's Response: lol I do my best :)

Reviewer: Jelly Pencil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 10

=DDD I intended on doing stuff today, but now I just really want to read this fic from the beginning again. *_*

I loved Bill’s insistence that "We have a system that works"! He’s so controlling and bossy about the whole thing, but in the end he always gives in and is happier for it. =3 Well, not about Bu fucking him, but I think that’s for the better for now, and I did like his insistence that Bushido doesn’t necessarily have to top. Bill is most definitely not a girl, no matter what position he takes sexually.

Bushido’s concern for Bill’s recording and his voice was so sweet, I thought. Even if Bill totally didn’t appreciate it. ;) Bill’s oral fixation may be just about the hottest thing ever. I don’t blame Bushido a bit for not being able to resist it. Bill being shy after sex, too, is so cute!

Bill’s personality changes so rapidly from before, during, and after sex – he really is such an enigma! In the last review you mentioned Bill displaying the whole spectrum of personality traits, and that making him so interesting, and I really have to agree with you so much! You portray that so well in this fic, and it’s really one of my favorite things about it. One of my many favorite things. ;)

The last line, was just, oh god, love it! =D

I could not tell at all that you struggled with this at all, as you mentioned. It was just amazing, and flowed so well, and made me go all starry eyed. I’m pretty much in awe. ♥ ♥ ♥

Author's Response: I really wish there was a way to squish someone into a big hug via the internet, but since there isn't I will just have to settle for telling you that your review made me really happy :) I worked so long on this chapter and had to fight so hard to get it into a post-able state that feedback like this just makes it soooo worth it. I'm glad that you liked Bill not automatically accepting that he would bottom, because I think he would be opposed to any role that could be considered 'submissive' in RL - he has too much diva-ness in him lol. And the fact that you think I did a good job depicting Bill's wide range of personalities means a lot... I'm trying to write him as multidimensional as I see him in RL w/o making him an inconsistent & unrealistic character, and it makes me so happy that you think I'm succeeding. I'm also so excited that you mentioned the last line, b/c that was by far my favorite part of the chapter. It's hard knowing what Bill is thinking but not being able to write it b/c generally his character is so guarded, and so the phone thing was kind of my way of showing Bill's view of their relationship. Thank you so much for your wonderful review - it makes me so giddy that you are enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

I FREAKING LOVED IT XD Tha best tha stpry be *trying to be gangsta...* Anywho ^^' I love the fact that this is actually from Bushido's point of view :) That makes it all the better, 'cause normally you have one of the boys' POV xD I hope you continue soon!! *I loved Bill in the end!! just like Bu xD*
xx Chi ^^

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! Thank you very much :)

Reviewer: sirpustophlese Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/09 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 10

Gosh, I missed this sooo much, but it was well worth the wait. I'm super excited for the next chapter; don't hesitate to email me ;D

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you found it worth the (super long) wait! Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/09 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I miss this story... It was my favorite once. Now it's dusty and covered with cobwebs. *sigh*

Author's Response: *sighs with you* I understand your frustration, but I just can't bring myself to post a chapter I'm not happy with. I have spent a lot of time writing and rewriting ch. 10 and just haven't found something I love. Until I do, I'm afraid there will be dust and cobwebs :(

Reviewer: gustavlover41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/09 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would cut my right boobie off for an update.
HAHAHAHAHA!!!
Seriously....take your time....well, ur..I mean....not tooo much time.
*wink*......:)

Author's Response: loooooooool I laughed so hard. OK, I'm not making any promises, but I will tell you that as of this morning, I have the body of ch. 10 written (aka all of the rampant smut). This means that I only have to write the beginning and the end of the chapter, so an update is in the forseeable future...

Reviewer: asdjhk Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/09 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1

I've read this story more than once as well.

I am enjoying it so much, your Bushido is my favourite out of all the Billshido stories I've read. I love that Bill is such a prissy little bitch, that Bushido is so determined to make the 'relationship' (or lack thereof) more than what it is, and most of all I love Bill's natural cock sucking abilities. Hah.

Please, please update soon!

Author's Response: Awww, your review made me grin so much - thank you! I'm so happy that you like how I portray Bushido, and I'm working on updating as quickly as possible. Sorry for being so slow!

Reviewer: Jelly Pencil Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 12:29 am Title: Chapter 9

This. Is. So. Amazing. *__*

There are just about a million things I love about this story, so excuse me while I get very babbly. ^_^;

I really like the style of the writing and the way the story is told. Referring to Bill as ‘the kid’ and ‘the boy’ in the narrative really makes the whole thing feel like it’s legitimately from Bushido’s POV to me, since that’s the way he refers to Bill out loud, as well. Bushido calling Bill ‘kid’ and ‘princess’ and the like was very cute to me, even if he is or was talking down to Bill a bit. It works for Bushido, anyway. ;)

Bill’s passive aggressive like teasing makes me smile so damn hard. =X Sorry Bu. I just love their bantering, bitchy ways. Too, I feel bad for Bill, whatever his issue is, and I’m curious if there’s more to it than his fear of releasing control and being found out, or what exactly is going on there. Bushido mentions a few times that Bill is used to being fawned over and catered to and he seems to think that’s the reason for Bill’s need for control, and I wonder about that. Very curious!

I love the characters’ complexities. Bill’s seemingly unending confidence and lack of fear and at the same time his complete inability to let Bushido touch him, at least at first. Bill seems so prickly on the outside and also insecure. Bushido is clearly a good guy, even when he’s being a bit of a jerk. Can’t say he wasn’t provoked. I was really proud of Bushido for not taking advantage of Bill’s vulnerability when he first saw him without the make-up on, and how their relationship seems to be progressing and they – I think – seem less harsh. Bu seems kind of mushy sometimes, actually. =X I just love the way you write both of them. =D

Even though he only got to come out for a little while to play, I like Tom’s character too. He’s much less willing or able to put up with Bushido’s poking at him. And of course Bill got pissed when Bushido bothered his brother, which I thought was cute. xD I’m curious to see if there will be more Tom, how he would handle what’s going on between Bu and Bill if he finds out.

I love all the little things – Bill’s pointless observations when he’s about to suck Bushido off and Bushido noticing Bill’s strawberry vanilla cologne.

Also, this story is just incredibly, incredibly hot. ♥__♥ *fans self*

Clearly I like to over analyze stuff. =X

Author's Response: First of all, I am SOOOO sorry that it took me forever to respond. Your review just meant so much to me that I wanted to give you a thorough response, and RL has just been kind of demanding lately.

I'm really glad that you liked how the story is kind of being told from Bushido's POV, with his perceptions influencing the narration (like calling Bill 'kid' and such). I started writing it that way without really noticing it, and then decided to stick with it. It's kind of challenging when I want to write about something that Bushido wouldn't really notice or find important (for ex, I really wanted to explain how damn sexy Bushido looked all sweaty during ch. 2 in the weight room, but even he is not a big enough ass to mentally comment on how glistening droplets of sweat rolled down his perfectly muscled abdomen lol). And it also makes me happy that you smile when they have their little lover's spats lol - I just loooove writing arguments between them =). If Billshido existed in RL, I'm just sure that the relationship would be full of wildly passionate disagreements and fights, as both of them have such dominant personalities and are used to being in control.

That you described Bill as being "so prickly on the outside and also insecure" just makes me feel so wonderful, because that's exactly how I wanted to portray him. The reason why he's so fascinating in RL is because he exhibits pretty much the entire spectrum of personality traits, and he is able to seem so confident yet vulnerable/breakable at the same. I think that Bushido acts like a selfish, immature & chauvinistic ass, but I also think that he has a soft, unprotected side that he will show to people he doesn't feel threatened by. Therefore when Bill shows any weakness/insecurity, Bushido can allow himself to reveal some of his own softness and their relationship becomes a little less abrasive. It just makes me so happy that you like the way I write them and that you find the characters complex...I have told you before, but I am obsessed with your character development so the compliment means so much coming from you.

It also makes me grin that you like Tom's character :). As a twin myself, I always like comparing how twins react differently to the same situation, and I do feel that Tom has a much shorter fuse for being made fun of than his brother (even before the whole stalker thing). He just prefers to avoid 'the haters' while Bill uses his coyness and manipulation skills to deal with them. Tom's never a major character, but he'll make another appearance in later chapters...I just love him too much to not write him in lol :).

Thank you so much for your detailed review, and I can't tell you how flattered I am that you read my story so closely and picked up on so many of the little details I tried to include. And again, sorry for the insanely slow response!

Reviewer: anorexia_damn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/09 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1

oh comm'on....i feel like i've been waiting for centyries for your update and there's still nothing...
pllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease,MORE!

Author's Response: I'm soooooorrrrrry :( I know, it has been forever... I've just been super busy and it is hard to write w/o my computer (it's STILL being fixed!). I'll really try to update, though