Date: 09/22/09 10:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Regardless of plot lines or anything like that, this is my all time FAVORITE story. Even if you take forever to update, I'm still here and eager to read. :0)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! You have amazing patience :)
Date: 09/22/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 11
Whenever I read this fic, the world around me just pauses. Your writing shut me off from the rest of the world for a while. The hotness between the two is insane.
Just that when saki was mentioned, it felt like so long ago. I miss the straight smooth hair bill.
Author's Response: That is so sweet of you to say - thank you so much! And I know, I miss smooth hair Bill tons as well :( Maybe there will be some way for him to wear his new do flat and pretty? *hoping*
Date: 09/22/09 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Anis is such an caring and sweet bastard!!!
LOVELY SROTY!
CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE!!!!
Author's Response: He is, isn't he :) Thank you!
Date: 09/22/09 05:19 am Title: Chapter 11
This user is currently out of order due to too hot fiction. Please come back later.
Author's Response: looool XD
Date: 09/22/09 04:24 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh God, you did it! I woke up this morning and the chapter was there and I was like OMFG, YEAH! and then I was reading and Bill was crazy and Bu was so cute and they did it (well, not exactly IT, but still...) and... and... I'm rambling, am I not? *_*
Okay, okay, I'm taking a deep breath and starting all over again.
*breathes*
*_______*
Okay, Bill is... fucking frustrating! XD Really, I thinks Anis is some kind of a saint or something =P And he was great, here! *.* He wouldn't do anything against Bill's will, he wanted him to come and he wanted him to feel good. How lovely *.*
Bill was just a mess XD But he was adorable, too. He's just so confused, why can't he make up his mind? He wants it, can't he just come to term with that? -_-
He was so cute falling asleep in Bu's bed, anyway! *melts* I can't wait for the moment when he's going to wake up.
And as much as I LOVE the two of them being all smutty, I really think they should have a proper talk *sigh* They should get things straight and then fuck in peace! *ç* LOL
That part when Bill was talking about his relationship with Tom... maybe I'm just influenced by what you said about twincest once, but is that it? *_* Not a serious twincest, maybe, but... yeah.
Gosh, my review is even messier than Bill X'D But I'm just so happy that you updated and as I always tell you, you made it worth the long wait! Even though you're making us crave for more XD
God, I think I won't be able to wait and I'll start translating this right away *_* I'll probably be done before I leave the day after tomorrow XD
OMG, I LOVED IT! THANK YOU! *hugs*
- Fedy
Author's Response: Awww, Fedy, your review made me smile so huge, you don't understand :) OK, I'll respond to you via email - hope you're having tons of fun on your travels!! XD
Date: 09/22/09 04:13 am Title: Chapter 11
Beautifully written. I think that Bill is just a sexual deviant in this story or something. He want to have sex with Bushido but he's just confused about why he wants it. It's like he's trying to resist/deny the urge with words but his body is saying something else entirely. After that experience it's only a matter of time before they do what is bound to happen.
That aside, I must say that you're extremely talented when it comes to writing details. I was able to completely follow the action perfectly. I kinda almost felt the frustration of the situation from Bill coming into the room, Bushido grabbing him and throwing him on the bed, and the moment that Bushido just stared at Bill and Bill reaction to that.
I know that you're just going to do amazing when you write the tension-stricken climax of this story.
I just can wait, but I can wait...if that makes any sense.
Author's Response: You should know that this is just an incredible review for an author to receive. It means so much that you not only enjoyed the chapter, but you gave specifics about what you liked and offered your own insights into what was happening. I think that 'sexual deviant' is a perfect way to describe Bill...I can't really say much else, just b/c this is a point that receives more attention in later chapters and I don't want to give anything away. Just thank you so much for your review, and I'm really glad that you're enjoying it!
Date: 09/22/09 01:30 am Title: Chapter 11
I am so glad to see an update on this. :) Take as much time as you need to write, no stress. :)
Author's Response: :) Thank you!
Date: 09/22/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 11
Awww ^_^ This update made my day. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 09/22/09 12:31 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh, finally! This was an amazing update! I loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 09/21/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG! Soo hot! Update NOW!!!
LOLOL. JKJK. You totally deserve a brake after that. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: loool glad you enjoyed!!
Date: 09/21/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
God, THANK YOU for finally updating! I have been craving this story so badly for the last few weeks and just when I was considering begging for it, there it was - an update :) I hope you get a spur of inspiration, or whatever you need, to write some more.
Author's Response: Aww, i'm so excited that you were looking forward to an update :) And I don't really need inspiration as I know exactly what happens through the end of the story, I just need the time to write it all down. *sigh* Why can't school be less work?
Date: 09/21/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
Omg! Finally!!! This update has totally made my day! Thanks so much.
Author's Response: XD Lol I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 09/21/09 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
So I had a really bad day, but then this was updated and now it's okay. Anyway, it drives me crazy not knowing what is wrong with Bill in this. I feel for Bushido. I hope you find the time to update soon.
Author's Response: Aww, i'm sorry you had a bad day :( It's good to hear that you feel for Bushido, b/c he certainly shares your frustration about Bill's strange behavior, and I'm glad that the update was able to make your day a bit better :)
Date: 09/21/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
O. M. G. Bill fingering himself. One of my favorites. *purrs* And doing it with Bushido. *purrs and rubs against the furniture*
This story just sucks me in. I squee'd when I saw you had updated, and I almost commented before I read the new chapter! It's just absolutely fantastic. When Bu finally gets him, it's going to be so incredibly hot. I hope I can make it. Damn. Clarebear you're awesome. :)))))
Author's Response: loooool I have such vivid imagery of you rubbing against furniture and it's making me grin so much :) I have a huuuuuuge thing for Bill fingering himself, so it's great to hear that i'm not alone in this lol. Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
Holy hell that was hot! And so cute with Bill falling asleep at the end. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 11
I would totally say that I didn't care how often you updated this, but I'd be lying, I care but this story is too damn good to ignore just because you have an actual life(and I don't). Every chapter is so....gripping? I guess that's the right word, I can never look away until the end. I spent the last 20+ minutes reading over the last 2 chapters(just in case there was anything I forgot from last chapter) and I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end, I'm not even sure if I blinked the whole time, that's seriously how much I love this.
Please, I don't care how long your updates take to get out, I'm patient, I can wait, but please don't stop working on this permanently, there has been too many amazing stories on here that have gone unfinished and abandoned. I love this story too much to NOT know how it ends, however many chapters it takes to get there, lol.
Hope I worded this right and this doesn't offend you or anything, I read it back over and I don't like the wording but I can't think of a different way to put it. :/ Sorry.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, how could this offend me? It's just so incredibly sweet! Thank you for being so patient with me - I really wish I could update more quickly but RL just keeps getting in the way. But i give you my word that I'm not abandoning this (unless some freak accident happens and I lose like both my arms and can't type anymore)...I have it planned out until the very end and I just can't wait for readers to finally see what happens with these two little lovebirds lol :)
Date: 09/21/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 11
I was literally just looking at this again yesterday, so I did a bit of a doubletake when I saw it on the recent page! So long as you promise to update, I'll dutifully wait the month between chapters. Those boys are going to have to actually talk someday, and darn it I want to read it. ;)
Author's Response: The boys absolutely do need to talk, I agree :) Bu just has somewhat of a one-track mind lol, but I promise there will be some actual conversations soon!
Date: 09/21/09 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
um.
*dies of a nosebleed*
that is all i can say right now, seeing as this just about killed me, it was THAT sexy.
um. i'll properly review when i'm no longer dead?
Author's Response: lol thank you!
Date: 09/21/09 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
I still love your story no matter how many time you take to update. But sometimes I really don't understand Bill's behaviour...
Author's Response: You and Bushido are in the same boat lol :) I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: 09/21/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad to hear that!
Author's Response: :)