Date: 04/01/09 12:38 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
“Are you ticklish?”
“No!” Bill said a little too quickly. He blushed, and Tom grinned. – OMG lol no! they’ve gone to lovey-dovey girly!!!
“Well, your policy of never sleeping with the same person twice kind of conflicts with the way you've been hanging all over him.”
Bill shifted uncomfortably. “Well... Our relationship is different than normal... I guess...”
“Oh really? How so?”
“I don't know.” Bill traced the lip of his cup thoughtfully with one finger. “He makes me feel... confused.” - *giggles* awh he makes you confused??!! *snickers*
“On the contrary. I think you need it more than anyone else I know.”
“I don't want it, then.”
“No, Bill. You've always wanted it.” – I really like Andreas’ observations! He’s right!
with the possible exception of Lindie.” – awh his mum’s name is Lindie *nods* ok!
“I don't fall in love.”
Andreas shrugged. “If you say so. In that case, you won't mind that Tom is about to be picked up by some girl.”
“What?!” Bill's head snapped up – ah ha ha ha!!!
The music started and Bill had to close his eyes again, because this girl was simply terrible. As someone who'd had six years of experience developing his powers of seduction, it pained him to watch this girl butcher it so terribly. Her routine was amateur, her movements jerky with nerves. Bill opened his eyes again and decided he couldn't let this go on.
He strode forward, pushing past people. He stood before the platform, arms crossed over his chest. “Stop.” – OMG that’s sooooooooooo mean ha ha ha ah hahahaha!!!
The sexy not quite stripping was perfect. I was toally cringing when I got to this part because so many people just fuck it up but yours was perfect! *Grins and claps* well done you!
Bill grinned devilishly. “Hey, birthday boy. Want a private show?”
Gustav blushed and stuttered, and Bill smirked, while surreptitiously casting his eyes around the room. His smile widened as they found one face in the room that was not happy. Tom's eyes burned with anger and jealousy, the girl beside him long forgotten. Bill felt a surge of triumph, that took care of that. - *giggles* horay!
“Sorry, babe, gotta fly.”- I like this phrase! I don’t think people use it enough I’m going to try and start!
Bill grit his teeth. He was not used to the emotion of guilt, and he didn't know why he was feeling it now. But he felt that he had to fix the damage he had caused. – awh! Something’s changed!!!
“Why? Were you sexually abused as a child or something?”
“I'm going to overlook the fact that you just asked a terribly inappropriate question, since I did just publicly embarrass you. No, I was not abused as a child. But it's a story I'd just rather not tell.” – thank you for not making him an abused child *eye roll* I’m kind of over that unless you’re telling that story from the beginning…then I’m all for it…but I digress, continue please.
Unbeknownst to either of them, Andreas had followed close behind Bill, and had heard most of the conversation. The old Bill would never have done anything like this. Andreas smiled and leaned against the wall outside the bathroom. I knew falling in love would be good for him. - *grins* I like an observant Andreas!!!
Date: 03/31/09 11:42 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
AHHH, oh god please hurry and post... I'm begging you here...
Date: 03/31/09 06:46 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
Yay! Good Bill. I hope he'll figure this out. Tom can't wait forever xD. Maybe Tom will think Bill actually doesn't like him after a while, and will move on *cries*. That can't happen! Good chapter, but a little short for a party scene. I would have liked to see a little more of what was going on in the party aside from Gustav, Tom, and Bill. It would have created a sense of familiarity with the party and would pull the reader in feeling more comfortable with the scene around the people you're talking about.
Date: 03/31/09 01:41 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
awesome!
Date: 03/31/09 01:19 am Title: Denial And Challenges
Oh, Bill's actually being nice!!! It's cute :D
Date: 03/31/09 12:13 am Title: Assumptions
Oh yay, I'm so proud! Actually, I'm feeing mostly relieved - for a second there, I feared Bill has a bad hetero experience in his past :(
Date: 03/30/09 10:03 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww billllllll ^.^!!
Date: 03/30/09 08:12 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
now he has to give her some tips XD
UPDATE SOON!!!
Date: 03/30/09 08:01 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
yay for bill, he's turning into a normal human being, kinda, he's not all the way there yet. he is in such denial about his feelings for tom, it's kinda funny. at first he confused me, but now he makes more sense, but is still a little confusing.love your story, and vicious is on my extrememly short favorites list, it was the first one i added to it,this is about to go up there too.
Date: 03/30/09 07:40 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
Oh my BK. That's something I need to see in my lifetime. Preferably sooner rather than later.
Date: 03/30/09 05:28 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
“Fine. That leaves just me, then. And I say you've fallen for this guy. Hard.”
“And I say you're full of more shit than a constipated horse.”
That made my day!
Date: 03/30/09 05:04 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
Billa!!!!
*hugs Bill too*
XD
Date: 03/30/09 04:36 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
i'm so glad u update it!
it was pretty good
Date: 03/30/09 02:26 pm Title: Excerpts
that would scare me shitless! i love it!
Date: 03/30/09 01:48 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
Oh this is SO cute!!! I like smiled the whole time!! Write more soon please (: This is great stuff ya know (:
Date: 03/30/09 12:27 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
Have to say, when Bill went up to that girl I was so mad to him - love it he's doing that to make Tom jealous, but the meanness... And then in a few minutes I was so proud of him for apologizing and acting decent. So the mystery "she" from a few chapters back is obviously Bill's sister, Lindie. Wonder what happened there. But more, can't wait for the flirtation between the sweets continue - they'll be so good for each other :)
Author's Response: Ha! Good job, you're one of only a couple people who picked up on the mention of Lindie, and you're the ONLY one who realizes it's Bill's sister. Nice work! *high fives*
Date: 03/30/09 12:21 pm Title: Denial And Challenges
aww bill is so cute now i want to hug him!
Date: 03/30/09 11:54 am Title: Denial And Challenges
I missed this (:
Date: 03/30/09 10:23 am Title: Denial And Challenges
aww how cute!! Bill is really changing for the best ^^
loved the chapter!!!
Date: 03/30/09 06:53 am Title: Denial And Challenges
AWENESS!!! *huggles* and you were sickish while writing this!!!! *huggles tighter* You are DARLING!