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Reviewer: stasi24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 08:05 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

Poor Bill XD
please continue

Reviewer: Merenwen Telrunya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 07:02 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

Oh my god, Tom! XD That was just great! Ha, Bill totally had it coming (in every sense of the word xP)

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 04:45 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

ahahah i was so waiting for that xD

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 03:49 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

hahah im glad you included this part >:D

Reviewer: billa_lewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 03:25 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

lmao. that was the most amazing chapter i ahve ever read lol. tom is such an ass for doing that to bill. but our little bill did have it coming lol. great work on the chappie

Reviewer: pppoynter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 03:21 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

HAHAHA =D
nice chapter! I like it too. :)Smiled the whole time while reading it. I can totally imagine Bill screaming at the end, while, uh, spreadout and handcuffed to the bed =/

Hoho :D

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 03:20 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

lol, this is a frickin HILARIOUS chapter!!!! Bill, you SOOO had it coming to you!!!

 

gosh, update more please!

Reviewer: gero_likia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 02:53 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

LOL LOL LOL
*reading and re-reading it* God, it still causes me laugh during the tenth reading LOL

I really want to know how Bill is going to avenge (and he IS going, right?) Tom *chuckling evilly*
But I'm slightly concerned - what if somebody other than Tom walks into boundaged Bill? It would be almost OK if he just laughs, but what if he takes advantage?.. I can only hope Tom didn't forget to lock the door... >.>

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 02:39 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

LOOOL! Karma really is a bitch, huh Bill? lol! I loved it!

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 02:14 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

*flutterclaps and giggles evily* oh yeah, now they can fuck and make up

Reviewer: punk_princess_044 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 01:55 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

hahahaha that was mean but funny bill deserves that for wat he did to tom Lol poor bill

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 01:48 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

LMAO LMAO!!!! GO TOM!!!!!!! YES!!!! He got revenge!!!!! I'm so proud of him!!!!

Reviewer: KayEmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 01:43 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

LMAO! Good Tomi! :]

Reviewer: dasistgelogen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 01:18 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

HA.
YES, That chapter was made of win, I mean, smut, slight bondage, and an unsatisfied Bill.
What more could I ask for?
xD

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 12:33 am Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

“Hey, Georg.” Tom smirked into the phone as he rifled through various 'toys' for sale. “I need you to do me a small favor...” – mmmwwwaaahhhh!!!! Georg and toys? Hum?!

Bill's eyes widened when he saw what Tom had bought. “What are these for?”
“For keeping you from escaping, like you did today. I think you owe me an apology.”
Bill grinned. “Hmm, yes, that was rather mean of me, wasn't it? But I think handcuffs is going a little far, wouldn't you say?” - *shakes head* no!! *grins*

“I'm punishing you for being a tease.”
Bill giggled again as Tom pushed his legs apart and chained them to opposite corners at the bottom of the bed. He was already very hard with anticipation of what Tom would do to him. “I don't know, I think I might like this kind of punishment.” – Well see what Tom has in store.

“Very much. Enough to punish you for it.” – lol

“You like that?” Tom grinned.
“Thought you didn't care what I liked.” Bill breathed, his eyes fluttering closed. He wondered vaguely if Tom intended to fuck him or just jerk him off, but he really didn't care at the moment. It was nice just losing himself in the sensation.
Then said sensation changed, as he felt a warm wetness engulf him. He cried out, eyes flickering open to see Tom going down on him. The visual only added to the feeling, and he bit his lip, trying hard not to buck up into Tom's mouth as heat rippled through his belly and into his veins. – very nice! Very hot!

“What?” Bill's eyes widened. “You're leaving now?”
“Yep.” Tom turned and began to walk to the door. “Karma's a bitch, isn't it, Bill?”
Bill's mouth dropped open. “You- you did this on purpose?” – lol!!!! *Cracks up*

LOL, Bill doesn't like getting a taste of his own medicine. Though he totally had it coming. – or lack there of cause now he can’t come ha ha ha!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/09 12:15 am Title: Maybe

“Going down?” Bill smiled brightly over his shoulder at Tom, who was following him into the elevator.
Tom rolled his eyes. “We're on the top floor. There's no other direction to go.” – lol

Bill smiled, not answering Tom, instead leaning against the elevator wall and secretly pressing the “Emergency Stop” button behind his back. The elevator halted.
“What the hell?” Tom pushed at the sliding doors. “It just stopped. Is it stuck?”
“Maybe.” Bill smirked. “This elevator is kinda faulty. Sometimes is just stops without warning. Don't worry, it'll start again soon.”
Tom stared at Bill, wide-eyed. “You mean, we're stuck in a faulty elevator?” His breathing became slightly shallower. – uh-oh trapped and starting to panic, that’s no good.

“I'm a child.” Bill smiled, pressing up against Tom. “I like my playtime.” He slid his hands down Tom's body; he had to do this quickly before he arose suspicion. – about the elevator or something else?

“What does it look like, Tomi?” Bill grinned. “I'm going down.” – lol!!

Tom gasped as Bill tongued his erection; that fucking tongue stud, blessing and a curse that it was, making him dizzy as pleasure swirled through his mind. He bit his lip and his eyes slid shut as Bill wrapped his lips around his throbbing length.
It was very difficult for Bill to keep from laughing, and impossible for him to keep the mischief from sparkling in his eyes. Tom was just too much fun. Watching carefully to make sure Tom's eyes remained closed, Bill slowly reached up and pressed the “Ground Floor” button again. - *gasp* evil, evil, evil boy!!!!

“Oh God,” he gasped. “I've gotta remember that trick...” – lol so evil lol!!!!

“No, Bill. She still can't get over what you did to her six years ago.”
Bill whirled on Andreas. “What I did to her? What about what she did to me?” – oh I though Lindie was his mum, not a sister. *nods* odd!

“Well, if she had just let it go the first time, we wouldn't be where we are today! I know how you think it is!” Bill screamed. “You think she's just the innocent little goody-two-shoes victim, and I'm just her slutty, unlovable, useless little brother! You think I wouldn't be this way if it wasn't for her? You think I chose to be this way because I like it?”
He stopped dead, realizing what he was saying. – lol!

“I do like it.” Bill said stubbornly. “Maybe I didn't choose it because I liked it, but I like it now. And no one, not you, not Lindie, and not Tom, is going to change that.” – that’s right dig your heals in deeper that will help.

Andreas looked confused. “Wait, when did Tom get involved...?” – ha ha when Bill started to get emotionally involved!

“Shut up!” Bill shrieked, leaping up. “Stop asking me questions! I like being this way, that's all! I'm not going to change, I'm not going to be a forgettable nobody like the rest of you!”
Andreas stared at Bill. He had never really understood his friend's need to hurt people so they wouldn't forget him. – *nods* makes sense

“It's always been a competition! You don't know the high you can get from destroying another person, Andreas... It's beautiful. And it's made all the sweeter when I know that feeling means I'm proving Lindie wrong.” – oy! Ouch!!!

“What if they do? If the ultimate rush was love, wouldn't it be worth experiencing? And wouldn't that prove Lindie wrong much more than... whatever it is that you do?”
Bill was silent.
“Maybe.” he said quietly. – mmmmwwaaahhhh!!!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 11:54 pm Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

Niice. Bill is getting it hahaha!

Reviewer: veestone Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 11:54 pm Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

lol :D

Reviewer: queenmadness Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 11:47 pm Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

Ahaah, I love Karma!!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/09 11:43 pm Title: Karma's a Bitch And So Are You

hahaha awesome, glad you didnt left it out ! and i liked your one shot ! very beautiful :)

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