Date: 12/21/09 06:01 pm Title: Mama's Boy
hahahaha priceless
Date: 12/21/09 05:52 pm Title: Fighting It
Itīs a great development, and I love getting to see some from Bills POV
Date: 12/21/09 05:47 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
Itīs very beautifully described..
Date: 12/21/09 05:30 pm Title: In Hot Water
hehehe sexy and I gotta say I do like all the characters here..
Author's Response: You got the 1483rd review! Skillz! XD
Date: 12/21/09 05:25 pm Title: You Can't Resist Me
this makes me think of an anime Iīve seen a few episodes of- canīt remember what itīs called.
itīs hot though.. X3 and this is oh so hot..
you write very well.
Date: 12/21/09 03:30 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
Oh.oohh YAAAAAAYY I LOVE IT!!!!!!MWUAHAHAHHAHAHA
Date: 12/21/09 03:13 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
AGHHHH THEY BOTH HAVE SO MANY HIDDEN EMOTIONS. I'm going crazy XD and oh no...the dinner..that's going to be quite interesting hahaha
Date: 12/21/09 03:03 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
hahha that is to funny I can't wait for more!
Date: 12/21/09 02:22 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
wow...and they got caught...kinda...and tom's mom...and bill's gonna meet her...this outta be good...
Date: 12/21/09 02:19 pm Title: Assumptions
yea.
updateupdateupdate!!!!!!
Date: 12/21/09 02:15 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
XD fuck thats so messed up! lol i can't wait till you post again please post soon i have to read what tom's mom does XD but still great chapter soooo worth they wait
Date: 12/21/09 02:14 pm Title: Assumptions
yes i did!
im thinking of Vicious.
sorry.
you really should update that
Author's Response: OH, yes, that DID happen in Vicious. XD I understand now.
Date: 12/21/09 02:12 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
update SOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNER=] i love this...=]=] plzplzplzplzplzplz they need 2 tell eachother they love eachother=]=] plz=]
Date: 12/21/09 02:05 pm Title: Assumptions
i think you were drunk
Author's Response: How strange, considering I rarely drink alcohol as it puts me to sleep. XD And I looked at the chapter you indicated and I see no mention of Bill telling Tom he loves him. Maybe you mixed it up with another story?
Date: 12/21/09 01:51 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
XD wow, that was a great chapter... and i cant wait for the next one.
Date: 12/21/09 01:46 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
wait, im confuzed.
waasnt there a part where bill told tom to make love to him, after he admited he loved him which came after the lindi story?
Author's Response: Not unless I was drunk when I wrote it or someone hacked my account. O_O I'm positive I never would have put that down, since I know that's supposed to come later. XD
Date: 12/21/09 01:36 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
“Enough supposing, more screwing into the table.”
I almost died of laughter while reading that xD
Awesome chapter as always :D
Date: 12/21/09 12:14 pm Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
When I saw that this story was updated, I literally gasped and said 'HOLY SHIT!'
That being said, I think this was a rather great chapter...and that Bill's fucked up head is getting worse with each chapter.
Date: 12/21/09 11:59 am Title: The First Step Is Admitting You Have A Problem
Yea! Yea! YEA! And update!
Bill deciding that he will be his own master piece is so so so freaking melodramatic! OMG BILL!!! lol
I love that you put the bit about lotion and spit being not so good lube options!
LOL they get walked in on by a professor LMFAO so funny!
Other then plot why did Tom answer the phone. The nice think about phones is that you can call someone back in a few minutes.
Yea! Thanks for the update I know how hard it was to get it all down. I’m very proud of you for writing even when you were having so much trouble with it. Well done you.
Author's Response: Because Tom answering the phone meant he had to tell his mother why he was in a hurry, which in turn means she insists Bill comes to dinner. >:D DEUS EX MACHINA!!! LOL!!! If we want a real explanation, we can assume Tom would rather get chewed out by Bill than by his mother. XD