Date: 01/19/09 02:47 am Title: Swirling Out Of Control
I love SluttyBill!
And I just love the way you think Tom is going to give in but he never does... yet :)
Author's Response: He gets oh so close... And then he's all like, "Wait, no." XP Bill must be so frustrated.
Date: 01/19/09 12:36 am Title: Swirling Out Of Control
*drooling*
really REALLY nice... ;D
Author's Response: Yay~ I'm glad it was enjoyed~!
Date: 01/19/09 12:09 am Title: Swirling Out Of Control
i don't understand why people would hate sluttyBill, so far he's pretty awesome xD
Author's Response: I've gotten a few complaints that he's being mean to Tom and he shouldn't play games with him, but you know what? That's his character. People don't like it, they shouldn't read it. I stated it very plainly in ch1- "He'd rather play with your head than your body" People gotta realize, that's just how SluttyBill is.
Date: 01/18/09 11:00 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
*grins goofily* That oh so nice. I loved it. And those eyes are killer. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: I know! Any normal human would be swept away within minutes, how does Tom resist so well?
Date: 01/18/09 10:31 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
....Have I told you how muc hI love you and your writing skills?
Just checking.
Author's Response: I'm not sure, I don't think you did. But you did now, so it's all good, right? XD
Date: 01/18/09 10:29 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
*shudder* mmmmmmm sexy boys groping eachother ... Oops, erm ... Uhm.. I mean, mmmm whipped cream. Ya. That's it. That's what I meant.
Hee-hee *dirty thoughts*
Author's Response: Hey, sexy boys groping each other is what we're all here for, isn't it? XP No need to be shy. XD
Date: 01/18/09 09:05 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
SluttyBill has to be my fav character of all the stories on this site! It's just something about how him that makes me love him. He's cocky, determined and, of course, slutty. It nearly had a nosebleed with the whole foodplay! That was so hawt and I don't even like whipped cream! Tom has a long year ahead of him LOL! Bill just isn't gonna let up. And LOL @ Bill's dialogue to Tom's mom! She must have been shocked LOL!
Author's Response: It's his natural "Fuck me!" vibe. XD I'm glad you liked the whipped cream, I almost left it out when I wrote this. And yeah, poor Tom... Yeah, Bill gets to have another little chat with Tom's mother in a later chapter, and oh god, is he awful. He says such terrible things, I love him.
Date: 01/18/09 08:27 pm Title: Assumptions
i love this its so different from a lot of stuff even though people do a bit of slutty bill stories. i love how tom didnt just jump in and get it on from the beginning and you let his feelings for bill increase slowly
Author's Response: Yeah, he has to work into it. I really wanted to emphasize the emotions of the characters, not just make them have sex all the time, which, while amusing, is not terribly, ah, realistic.
Date: 01/18/09 08:05 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
What I especially enjoy about your story is that you manage to convey sexual without heavy pornography. It takes talent to work the difference.
Author's Response: That's a huge compliment. But want to know a secret? The reason I write that way is because I'm too embarrassed to write details of what's physically happening, so I play up the emotions of the scene... Which is actually useful, since Tom's feeling about the experience are what's important here...
Date: 01/18/09 07:50 pm Title: You Can't Resist Me
I can just imagine Bill coming up to Tom and, suddenly, the seduction takes a quick turn to stank breath...
I loved it.
Author's Response: You can not imagine how many time I have wrote a kissing scene and thought about putting something like, "Thank God his breath didn't smell" and then realized how much that would totally ruin the moment. XD
Date: 01/18/09 07:43 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
perfect agony xD
pure tease xD
LOVELY!
GREAT!
MORE!
xD
Author's Response: Yay! More will come... tomorrow? Or the next day?
Date: 01/18/09 07:24 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
Love the foodplay and my favorate part is when bill was talking to tom's mother that made me laugh! And I adore suttybill I could never hate him :D
Author's Response: yay, I successfully pulled off foodplay! Oooh, if you like Bill talkiing to Tom's mother, you will LOVE chapter 6... Unless I break it up, and make it chapter 7...
Date: 01/18/09 07:01 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
*headdesk-starts writing-thanks the gods for you-no sleep for this kitty tonight*
Author's Response: Wow, I'm not even sure I understood that... ^_^;
Date: 01/18/09 06:32 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
keep it comin! bitte!
Author's Response: I'm doing my best! ^_^
Date: 01/18/09 06:24 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
this is too good.
Author's Response: Yay~ I'm glad you like it~
Date: 01/18/09 06:23 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
y billahave to be like that?
Author's Response: ??? Have to be like what? He is what he is because he is SluttyBill. If you don't like him now, you should probably stop reading the story. 'Cause he will get better, but it won't be for a while.
Date: 01/18/09 06:10 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
"No." Oh YES!
It was very okay, believe me ;)
I'm happy to hear that everything will work out. I will be with you to the end of this story. Can't help but Love Bill!
xx
Author's Response: Yay! That's good to hear, I don't want people to give up on Bill before he can show them his true self, you know?
Date: 01/18/09 06:06 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
O_O
Ummm. Errmmm....
Goodness. Bill is absolutely hilarious :) And I couldn't help but to laugh at how mortified Tom was for a minute there, haha.
Bill seems to have a few issues though, doesn't he? Hmmm. Poor bby.
Author's Response: Haha, poor Tom. And yes, Bill definitely has some issues in this story. I mean, even beyond the whole thing about getting offended because he's bisexual, there is the whole slut thing too. Which obviously points to some sort of insecurity about himself, right? *hugs SluttyBill* It's okay! I won't let you have a sad ending, Bill! Everything will work out!
Date: 01/18/09 06:00 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
OMG...this was amazing. i will NEVER be able to look at whipped cream again xDD and omg, ja, you are SO RIGHT about Tom staring into SluttyBill's HypnoEyes. Those things are VICIOUS xDD OH OH OH, I added two of my stories "Holy Fucking" und "On Santa's Lap" into your series. READ THEM AND FALL IN LOVE WITH MY SLUTTY BILL xDDD god I fucking LOVE this story ^_^
Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I actually had some home- made whipped cream when I wrote that chapter... Unfortunately, I ate it all. XD But yeah, it seems to me that Tom always makes the mistake of looking into Bill's eyes, and then it's all over. XD Yes, I will go read you stories now! ^_^
Date: 01/18/09 06:00 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
Love the story so far keep up the good work..
Author's Response: I'll do my best!