Date: 01/23/09 02:27 am Title: Fighting It
plz update soon..thx=] i luvz u
Author's Response: I'll update in another day or two. ^_^
Date: 01/23/09 01:44 am Title: Fighting It
*claps* i do want to see your favorite scene! :D
Author's Response: I love that scene, so I hope everyone else likes it too! ^_^
Date: 01/23/09 01:37 am Title: Fighting It
UPDATESOONPLEASE...
GOD I CANT GET ENOUGH OF BILL AND TOM... AND GEORGS SMART ASSNESS
Author's Response: Update comes probably the day after tomorrow... And yeah, Georg is a smartass. I never thought of him that way, but now that you mention it... XD
Date: 01/23/09 01:13 am Title: Fighting It
Whoa, Tom hit Bill!! Wasn't expected Tom to get physical! But it's natural for people to defend thier sexuality. And the whole 'naughty words start with 'S'' conversation between Tom and Georg was priceless! And now I can't wait for the next chappie! You got me all excited. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it seemed more natural for Tom to eventually hit Bill in the face... And yeah, the "Words with 'S'" thing was something I realized when typing ch5. I mentioned it to parallelheartz, and she was like, "I can totally see Tom ranting about that" so I was like, "Hey, I'll put it into ch6..." XD Yes, I LOVE ch7!!!
Date: 01/23/09 12:54 am Title: Fighting It
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Of course!
Date: 01/23/09 12:48 am Title: Fighting It
i have fun reading ur story, u no that? i can always depend on ur chapters to brighten my day.
i never would expect that tom would actually hit bill, i was like "whoa, that's different". anyways, cant wait for next chappy, and take as much time as u need just not too long ;-)
Author's Response: That's good to hear. ^_^ I'm flattered. And yeah, I didn't see that coming until I wrote it. I realized it was the natural male reaction to a situation like that. Though Bill totally didn't deserve it, in my opinion.
Date: 01/22/09 09:03 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
lol i was cracking up at the pun too XD
yeah yeah! bill in the nuuude! lmao cant wait for the next chapter and hell i dont mind if you update every hour :)
Author's Response: Nude Bill = win. XD Update every hour? Damn, I can't even write a chapter in an hour!
Date: 01/22/09 04:18 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
How hot ^__^
Author's Response: Glad you think so~ ^_^
Date: 01/22/09 09:05 am Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
I love how Tom is getting slightly paranoid over the fact that Bill has got him by the balls :D
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Tomi is freaking out...
Date: 01/22/09 12:31 am Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
I thought the way you revealed SluttyBill naked was hilarious! Poor Tom but you know that he was enjoying it! the only gripe i have with this chapter is that it was shorter than normal :/ but thats not such a big deal. and i agree with your plan for not constantly updating because i love this story and it would stink if you lost interest in it! keep on writing awesome chapters! plus, playing Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories is a great excuse since those games are like super awesome! probably some of my fave in the whole world! hit me up if u ever wanna talk about the game or w/e! x)
Author's Response: I know, I really wish it was longer... >< And unless I add to it, ch6 is gonna be short, too... And yes, KH is awesome! XP And I might come and randomly poke you, if you've got AIM. XP Crap, last 3 sentences began with "And"
Date: 01/21/09 11:40 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
keep it comin!
Author's Response: Working on it!
Date: 01/21/09 10:17 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
kingdom hearts chain of memories?
holy schnitzel.(rawr)
that game is so confusing. the whole.. card.. thing. i don't have the game,though. my boyfriend does and he showed me how to play.
i love riku...
*doesn't partain to chapter at all*
ohh yeah and i love this chapter. hehe. neekkiiid.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love KH... And I really like the card system, and yes, Riku is sexy. But I prefer Zexion, he is the smexiest KH character ever. Even his name is smexy. And lolz, naked Bill...
Date: 01/21/09 10:13 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
i agree.. i love SluttyBill.
he's just so much fun. :D
Author's Response: He IS so much fun. I just wanna cuddle him~ XD
Date: 01/21/09 10:03 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
haha, BILL YAY!
Author's Response: GO NAKED SLUTTYBILL!!!
Date: 01/21/09 06:25 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
OH MY GOD I love this so so so much. I just came from a painting studio and then this just shot me straight to heaven, oh god what would I give to be in a studio with Bill modeling. This storyline is completely brilliant by the way. And the hottest sexiest thing EVER. Keep writing or posting or whatevering the chapters, fasto pronto! I'll be your virtual coffee maker/carrier, just keep the hot beautiful words flowing! xDDDDDD
Author's Response: I know, that would be the sex. And yay, glad you think it's hot and sexy~ Er, probably should skip the coffee, warm drinks put me to sleep... XD What else does your virtual cafe offer?
Date: 01/21/09 06:10 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
That was a good chapter..Tom killed me this one is to much, I can't help but laugh because Tom thinks he can handle Bill, but deep down he can't...hahahaha I can't wait for the next chapter & take your time with it. Love it.
Author's Response: Tom is no match for Bill. *shakes head* He thinks he is, but he so isn't. And Bill knows it. XP
Date: 01/21/09 05:15 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
Tom is such a lucky bastard even though he won't admit it LOL! BILL WAS NAKED!!! I can't get that off my mind! Tom should just give in and ravage the f*** outta Bill LOL! :)
Author's Response: God, he SO should! My friends who are reading this get so frustrated with me, because they STILL aren't fucking each other yet! XD
Date: 01/21/09 04:54 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
ahahaha, it's nice to see Tom suffering like this... XD
keep going please please pleeeeeeease...*.*
Author's Response: XD Don't worry, I'll keep it going.
Date: 01/21/09 04:33 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
ahem I tell you a secret my bf hates about me when I read books, magazine, or short stories I always read the end first. I like to know how stories end so I can determine if its worth reading. so response to your response of my last review even if I know the ending or whole stories plot or jist of it I will still read the whole story from start to finish...
I hope you don't get bored with the story and not finish.
I can just picture how alluring bill look in the pose. I would love to see the other naughty drawings that lucky bastards gets to participate in.
so love the dirty indueno in your pun with updates and notebook.
so don't lose intrest so update slower. and finish please love
Author's Response: Nah, it's not that I won't finish, there are too many people who would kill me if I didn't. But the updates might slow waaaaaay down, and I don't want that to happen. ^_^ And wow, I would kill myself if I read the ending of a story, that always bothers me... I can't even skip a word or two, I always have to make sure I read every word.
Date: 01/21/09 03:03 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
OMG... POOR TOM. I would feel like him sortof if I had to deal with some one like SluttyBill in a class like that. but not completely like Tom x.x
:D Update soon
I love KH:CoM for the PS2 ... its awesome I like it more than the GB version...
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Tom feels the way my friend feels when she has to hang out around me... I'm like SluttyBill, only not promiscuous. I just act like that, which gives me excellent ideas for this story... XD So I totally always hit on my friend, and we're both girls, and she's completely straight. (Or she WAS...XD) And yeah, having a lot of fun with KH:COM, I love the card system, and being able to summon Cloud... And finally getting to hear the character's voices!
