Date: 01/24/09 09:36 pm Title: Mama's Boy
it start so tame I was thinking well what's so jaw droping. then dun dun dun phone call mom.
that was one of the most halarious scenes so far. I could just picture a evil smirk on bill's face when he had a revolation. the things he did to tom's mom's psyche
will probably have her traumatized for life. he's probably going to give her a heart attack.
what to say about the phone call well what can't I say I was giggling the whole time saying oh no he didn't and then oh he went there. my faviorite part of the conversation is everything bill said and did. and the funniest part of the whole phone fiasco is when tom tried to retify the situation but only making it worst.
so I love the line
“Ah, Tomi. I love how you play hard- to- get. It's going to make fucking you that much sweeter.”
when bill said that it made me giddy and I look forward to it happen.
defintely up to my expectations great chap. your character's synopsis is appreciated. I agree with you defintely see how your story developed from this and maybe my faviorite part so far but its hard to say lots of hard competition from the rest of story.
oh and my imagination made his mother so deserving of bill's treatment I think she was calling him every derogatory word in the dictionary about his sexuality and him personally.
so thanx for this hummorous story and chap looking forward to the rest of the story
Author's Response: Oh no he didn't. Oh YES, he DID!!! And yeah, poor Tom tries to fix it, but he should have known better than to give the phone to Bill... Yeah Tom's mom is like, SUPERBITCH! especially in the final chapters... And I can't wait to share the rest of my story with you! ^_^
Date: 01/24/09 08:55 pm Title: Mama's Boy
hahahahahah i LOVE it :DDDD
Author's Response: Yay!!! I was worried people wouldn't like it~
Date: 01/24/09 08:42 pm Title: Mama's Boy
fucking hell...dude..this is awesome...well not bill being slammed to the floor but it was really good
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, poor Bill... But don't worry, Bill always gets revenge.
Date: 01/24/09 08:12 pm Title: Mama's Boy
okay, honestly my jaw dropped and i was laughing! Bill is a bitch, go BitchyBill but poor Tomi...his mother will never trust him again...but Bill seems to get more and more complex and unpredictable, yet its awesome! cant wait until next time! :]
Author's Response: YES! I knew I'd get at least one dropped jaw! XP God, I know, Bill is so volatile... Try to get him under control and he just gets more out of hand... *shakes head*
Date: 01/24/09 07:03 pm Title: Mama's Boy
BWAHAHHAHAHA. Have I told you lately that I love you???? I FUCKING MISS YOU....AIM is being a big tittied bitch, so it might be a couple of days before I can talk to you again. *pouts* ANYWHOOS, I loved this chapter (and the one before this) Tom's rant was amazing, as you know, Bill's revenge is AMAZNG and ouch...being thrown down like that must hurt
Author's Response: Aw, I wondered why I hadn't seen you lately... LOLZ, is AIM being a Big Kahuna? XD And yeah, Bill always takes one helluva revenge whenever Tom gets rough with him. Just wait for what he does NEXT chapter! XP And yeah, I bet that does hurt. Poor Billa...
Date: 01/24/09 07:02 pm Title: Mama's Boy
lol i luv what bill jus did
Author's Response: I know, right? He's so terrible. XD
Date: 01/24/09 06:47 pm Title: Mama's Boy
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHHHAAAAA! I love Bill! LOL keep it comin!
Author's Response: I know, isn't he just awful? I adore him. XD
Date: 01/24/09 06:14 pm Title: Mama's Boy
LOLOLOL Bill totally had that coming from Tom after that phonecall. :') Poor mother xD
Author's Response: I know, he SO did. He's still gonna get revenge on Tom for it, though. Boys are stupid like that.
Date: 01/24/09 06:06 pm Title: Mama's Boy
It's too short D;
I WANT MORE NAU D:
Actually, well, I mean.. I'm guessing you got your story pretty planned out. But what could help their relationship would maybe be if he knocked Bill out or something, then he'd totally freak out and he'd feel more sorry for Bill and stuff and.. aah, you get where I'm going? XD
Just an idea, lol x]
Author's Response: Uh, while I could do that, I probably won't. I think this chapter is the last time Tom attempts getting physical with Bill (At least, in a non- sexual way, haha)as he soon discovers Bill will always take revenge on him. XP And SluttyBill's revenge is always a doozy, as this chapter indicates.
Date: 01/24/09 05:54 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Oh shit I loved this chapter! XD Now I know why this was your favourite scene xP OhGod it was SO much FUN to read xD *gigglefit*
And ah, I love it when Tom is rough, too *grins* Plus, it's just getting more and more obvious that Tom is angry and frustrated with Bill just because he KNOWS Bill is right and it's the truth that Tom is going down the same path that Bill has already finished. Oh, wasn't that poetic x)
*awws* This fic is just something you cannot resist and can't NOT love x)
Author's Response: Yeah, I adore that scene. XP Yeah, poor Tom. And wow, that was poetic and summed it up quite nicely. And wow! We can't not love this story! Whoo- hoo, compliment! ^_^
Date: 01/24/09 05:51 pm Title: Mama's Boy
omg absolutly hilarious though i cant belive Bill would play that dirty and bring his mom into it thats so a cheap shot though funny update soon hun
Author's Response: It is a cheap shot, but SluttyBill has no scruples. XP
Date: 01/24/09 05:51 pm Title: Mama's Boy
It was very impressive! I mean...Bill is my GOD right now!!
xD
Oh, God! That was so funny!! XD and unbelievable! I loved it! :D
Author's Response: Haha, SluttyBill is always my God. XD And he is always unbelievable, always going farther than we expect. XP
Date: 01/24/09 05:34 pm Title: Mama's Boy
awww, poor bill. he practically got beaten up by tom. i feel so much sympathy for bill, but he should really have not said that to tom's mother. yet again, it was hella funny.
Author's Response: *giggles* Which is why we call Bill NaughtyChild. Because he does naughty things and gets in trouble with Tom. And then he does MORE naughty things, by way of revenge... XD
Date: 01/24/09 05:20 pm Title: Mama's Boy
*giggles like a manic* i've actually done something very similar to that! haha. I was at my friends house, and her mom was in the other room, her mother thought I was a lesbian anyways so me and my friend started making noises.... I fluffed up her hair a bit, and her mom walked into the room while are heads were like two centimeters away from eachother and I had a hand burried in her hair... that was a sight to see and now, her mother hates me for it, and thinks were both lesbians... It's amazing!!!
Author's Response: Wow, you are my idol. That's epically amazing and hilarious. Totally sounds like something I would do, if any of my friends would actually let me, haha.
Date: 01/24/09 05:14 pm Title: Mama's Boy
omg that was so good...plz update soon...i luvz u adn this...hurry thx=]
Author's Response: Yay~ ^_^ Okay, update probably on Monday~
Date: 01/24/09 05:04 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Hey, one addicted reader who's been too lazy to review here :)
I've read every chapter since the beginning, and I absolutely love this. Slutty Bill is such a delight to read (and do probably as well, hmmm Tomi=). I almost feel bad for Tom's pathetic struggling, he doesn't stand a chance.But I also almost feel bad for Bill - I wonder what he's really like inside, I hope the two find each other's true souls and it ends up in a fluffy smutty galore.
And you definitely didn't overhye this chapter, it was priceless and I was giggling sincerely.
Author's Response: Hey, sweet, always great to see a new face, yaknow? And yep, I intend to end this story with lots of smut/fluff. Um, smuff? XP I'm glad this chapter made you giggle sincerely. XD
Date: 01/24/09 05:02 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Lol.
That was a dick move on Bill's part, but it was funny. I can't say I blame Tom now, though. I'd have kicked his ass, too. Oh, and Tom's mom is a super-bitch ;)
Ahhh, the more Tom denies it and holds out...the better it is. =] I hate seeing Bill get his way like, super fast. It always ruins everything.
I'm ready for ze next one! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, can you imagine someone doing that to you? I'd have KILLED him. And yeah, this only happened because Tom keeps denying it, haha. I didn't want them to be fucking each other, like, 2 chapters in. It makes no sense. But I think readers are getting a little agitated, they want some release here, ya know? I think they go at it around... ch11. Crap, thought it would be sooner than that... See, I have the whole story planned out, but I don't know where the chapter breaks fall within that plan, so this is a rough estimate. I used to think it'd be ch8, but NO WAY will that happen now. ^_^;
Date: 01/24/09 04:58 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Ha! I was hugging my pillow and kicking my legs and giggling. Bill is so bad.
Author's Response: I know, he is. He always makes ME hug my pillow and giggle, too. Usually when I'm concocting a new scene for the two of them. XP
Date: 01/24/09 04:48 pm Title: Mama's Boy
OMg best chappie yet I giggled. All through it I can't believe the u deniably perfectly slutty bill would d that but I'm glad he did my horrible mood went away after the first few sentences. God I love your writing so much. It's therapy
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad I improved your mood. ^_^ And wow, I'm therapy. XP
Date: 01/24/09 04:48 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Bill you fucking ass! XD XD XD XD
Tomi just give in a fuck him. We ALL know you want to. xD
Author's Response: I know, Bill is such a jerk! XD