Date: 01/28/09 12:38 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
woah. woah. woah. woah. woah. woah. xDDD eventhough i knew this was gonna happen, it was sstill awesome to read!!! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR ALMOST SMUT ALMOST FLUFF....now come back to aim so I can f**k you and give you secret agent Bill babies xDDD
Author's Response: XD Well, it's GONNA be more smutty, and there's fluffiness in the final chapter... That's about it though, plus this little fluffy bits that get in there occasionally.... And lolz, Secret Agent Bill babies... No one else is even going to understand what you just said, you know that, right?
Date: 01/28/09 12:37 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Im starting to think maybe bill isnt the only one doing the cracking...goood ol tom...they both are going to crack...heehehehehe and I cant wait! keep it comin!
Author's Response: Yeah, they really are both going to crack, but at least Tom sees it coming. Poor Bill, he doesn't even know what hit him. XD
Date: 01/27/09 11:51 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
plz update soon..i luvz u thx=]
Author's Response: I'm updating right now... Give it a few minutes, maybe half an hour?
Date: 01/27/09 10:07 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
Aw...kind of endearing? I'm definately putting this fic in my favorites and suggesting that it be featured!
Author's Response: I know, so cute, right? XP I was like, "This smut needs more fluff..." and I was having issues with the end of that chapter, so I reworked it (several times) and finally found that, Bill's actions are endearing! XD And yay, another fave, and yay, being featured would be AWESOME!!!
Date: 01/27/09 09:59 pm Title: Mama's Boy
Bill is terrible! It did make my jaw drop. Bill is really mean, and I don't see how that would help his cause any...But I loved the scene, at any rate!
Author's Response: It doesn't seem like it would, but it made sense when I wrote it. I'll pull it together, I just have to remember why he did it again... I'm several chapters past that, so I have to go back and think about it, haha...
Date: 01/27/09 09:48 pm Title: Fighting It
Something tells me the "thing" that Bill needs from Tom can't just be solved by fucking him. It's love....Oh snap! I really like this.
I update every few months, unfortunately. I have to change that...
Author's Response: I know, but Bill doesn't realize it yet... Nor will he for quite a while... Well, he will, but won't admit to it...
Date: 01/27/09 08:54 pm Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
Poor poor Tom! And I'm sure Bill does it just because he's a slut and likes being on display! XD I don't like sluts in real life (aka, female sluts at my school), but I love them in fanfiction. XD Every other day is a lot better than most...
Author's Response: I know, real sluts tend to be icky, but SluttyBill is lolz. XD
Date: 01/27/09 08:44 pm Title: Swirling Out Of Control
Okay, the foodplay scene was very good, not as hot as it could be, because it wasn't actual sex, and there was no licking (God, I'm a perv XD), but for you first time it was really great!
I love this story, I have a feeling real drama is going to happen somewhat soon.
Author's Response: Last review you complained Tom was going to give in to soon, and now you're upset there wasn't any sex??? How do I win at this??? XD Kidding. There's no licking because Tom simply isn't at the point where I could get him to willingly lick whipped cream off of Bill.
Date: 01/27/09 08:35 pm Title: In Hot Water
I really love Slutty!Bill. I'm already working on too many things for other sites, alas, so I might do it eventually, but not now.
I love this story, but Tom seems pretty weak. I'm kind of worried he's going to give in too soon...
Author's Response: Would you believe he holds out for 12 chapters??? As opposed to most stories like this, where they're usually fucking in half as many chapters as that...
Date: 01/27/09 08:20 pm Title: You Can't Resist Me
I really love Slutty!Bill, but I can't help but think there are some insecurities, and cravings of attention and affection that are...fueling his sexual escapades. But that's okay, it makes it interesting.
Author's Response: Oh, most definitely. That's what makes it good. XP
Date: 01/27/09 08:07 pm Title: Assumptions
That's hilarious so far! I really liked it. I'm on the next chapter.
Author's Response: I do my best! ^_^
Date: 01/27/09 07:31 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
Ah that bill...lol... Awesome chapi. update soon
Author's Response: Of course, I have been quick with my updates on this story! (Can't say the same for my others...)
Date: 01/27/09 07:03 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
aw... jpw adprable.... i love it!
Author's Response: ^_^ Glad you love! XD
Date: 01/27/09 06:16 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
hahahaha...This one kills me...Love the way Bill plays everyone thinking him & Tom slept together keep up the good work...Love it.
Author's Response: XD I know, right? He's so awful! But he'll get better soon...
Date: 01/27/09 05:24 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
o_o no words it's just so perfect!!! i love Bill poor tomi
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, poor Tom having to put up with Bill.. XP
Date: 01/27/09 05:22 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
YAY new chapter!!!! =D Me loveth this story
Author's Response: YAY, love that you love ! XP
Date: 01/27/09 04:49 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
I should be sleeping, but found the first chapter of this story and just couldn't stop. Like most other people, it seems, I absolutely fucking love SluttyBill. The banner for Dirty Little Slut is so f-ing perfect. I love it!
Now I'm going to try to reattach my jaw, brush my teeth and try to sleep. While trying to get SluttyBill out of my head. I'll probably not sleep much tonight. ;P
Loved it!
Author's Response: Hehe, glad to have a new victim! ER, I MEAN... Yeah, victim. XD I totally made that banner, on GIMP 'cause I couldn't use PhotoShop, 'twas on the wrong computer... Sorry you won't be able to sleep! ^_^;
Date: 01/27/09 04:40 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
the lines from tom's internal dialogue sums up bill's actions to a tee.
Definite points for creativity... Tom thought He's clever... in an annoying way. He never fails to use a situation to his advantage, I'll give him that. I just wish he didn't have to do this shit to me, the little bastard...
Odd thing is... It's kind of endearing...
that was one of most defining moment into tom's true emotions towards bill.
and bill's line
“Tomi,” Bill smiled sweetly, reaching over to entwine his fingers in Tom's dreadlocks. He leaned closer to him, nuzzling against him affectionately, suddenly happy just to be near Tom. Then Tom interrupted his momentary euphoria.
this is bill's defining moment of truth.
it's crazy how neither of them realize that they want more from eachother than just sex.
I think there was a lot of cute moments here and I like that bill never lied to anyone about him and tom. and its funny how everytime tom tries to fix things it just works in bill's favor.
like where this is going still halarious.
Author's Response: I know, right? They still have yet to realize that they are slowly getting attached to one another. I think it's so adorable that they're so dense, but Bill's going to begin to catch on in the next chapter...
Date: 01/27/09 04:36 pm Title: Mama's Boy
*picks jaw off floor*
Author's Response: Haha, knew it. XP Dropped jaw. XD
Date: 01/27/09 04:33 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
I am so in love with this story.
^///^
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm so glad~! *smile*