Date: 01/30/09 01:12 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
“If you've been convicted, you might as well be guilty.”
Fabulous. But I wanna see what other tricks does bill have to piss tom off. This is so much fun.
Author's Response: Haha, unfortunately, we're reaching the end of their game, but Bill still has a couple tricks up his sleeve to pull later. Don't worry, I'll keep it amusing, I love humor.
Date: 01/30/09 06:16 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
This is because I don't figure out all what I wanna say sometimes in my first review, so I've got to review again. *sigh* Sorry about that.
I forgot to mention I liked the little hint you gave about Bill finding self worth in his slutty reputation--which just screams that he has severe issues b/c most people try NOT to be known that way. I wonder what got him to think that way? But it just proves that even good looking people have issues, right?
Secondly, if I really enjoy your fic, I tend to try and guess where it's going and act out "later chapters" in my imagination. I just keep getting the feeling that Bill is going to be pretty callous once he beds Tom and Tom, being pretty fragile seeing as how he's just discovering his newfound sexuality, is going to be pretty crushed--and possibly angry. And then Bill is going to feel like shit. I may be nowhere near where you're going with this, but it just seems like Bill is focusing so much on winning, that he doesn't really seem to care whose feelings he's destroyed on the way to the victory circle.
I wonder how many other people he's crushed and doesn't even know it? Or maybe he knew it but didn't care before? I think he'll care if he hurts Tom though, but I could be wrong.
Dammit. I need to stop re-reading this. I'm getting obsessed and that's never healthy. *pouts*
Author's Response: Nah, it's okay, you always leave the best reviews, even if they do make me nervous... ^_^; Glad you picked up on that 'slutty reputation' bit, seems like most people totally missed that, only one other person has mentioned it so far... And damn, you're good. ._.; Now you've got me worried that it's too predictable. Either that, or you're just really good at guessing plotlines. *prays it is the latter* Though, that is the obvious conclusion, from what we know of the characters, so I guess it's fairly true to form... And I can tell you, he knows he's hurt people, he just doesn't care. (just trying to relieve your obsession a little bit, not trying to spoil it. XP) It's the way he is, you know?
Date: 01/30/09 12:50 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
I find myself getting more and more intrigued with Bill's thought process. I can't help it. I love to analyze characters in fics.
I know that only you know what's going on in Bill's head and all, but I am curious to know what exactly he sees when he sees Tom? Or when he sees anyone he likes to seduce? Is it just anyone at all? Or does he actually have to be attracted to the person? Does he find Tom attractive? Is there something about Tom--his eyes, his body etc.--that turns Bill on? From Tom--and Georgs'--POV, we get that they find Bill undeniably sexy, right? And Tom finds Bill body pleasing as well from the drawing in class scenes. But I'm just curious as to what drives Bill in his sexual aggression. There are some people who will sleep with anybody--no matter if they find them attractive or not. But so far I don't think we know what Bill thinks about Tom himself instead of just "Tom the next conquest". Maybe this is because Bill is only seeing Tom as a conquest/game right now? Perhaps? I'm sorry. Just speculating. Trying to understand Bill and all. :D He wants to fuck Tom (does he mean he tops or he bottoms or does Bill like to switch off?) so that he can forget about him. Which means, of course, that Tom has already gotten under his skin.
But whyyyyy? *wails* God, your Bill is an enigma and I'm dying to get inside his head.
This means that you are doing your job in character development, mind you, so kudos.
Now I want more. Pretty please?
Author's Response: Never sure whether to be happy or scared when I see your reviews... ^_^; Okay, here's the thing about Bill: He doesn't go after EVERYONE, he just goes for those who he thinks will try to resist him. (I believe he said as much in ch2) So, yes, he does view people as a conquest/game. Which is why I was annoyed when someone said he shouldn't get to fuck Tom until they were in love, because there is no room in Bill's mind for that kind of thing until he thinks he's won (and discovers he hasn't) so while there is the seed planted now, it can't truly blossom until afterward. And Bill bottoms. XD Bill always bottoms. I tried writing him on top once, and it was a disaster. He absolutely refuses to cooperate with me when I attempt that. Position- wise, he may be literally on top, but he'll always be the one taking it up the a- ah, um, you get the picture... XD Glad I'm doing a better job with the character development, I hadn't wanted to rush into Bill's character, since he's supposed to be kinda difficult to figure out for Tom, and thus, for the reader.
Date: 01/29/09 11:25 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
omg i love this story..please write more soon!!
Author's Response: Will do! ^_^
Date: 01/29/09 11:11 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
AWWW. HOW CUTE. I ABSOLUTELY LOV ETHIS STORY. IT IS SO CUTE THAT I JUST WANT TO CUDDLE IT. BILL MAY NOT LIKE CUDDLING BUT I BET EVEN HE WOULD CUDDLE THIS STORY FOR EVER AND EVER AND EVERS. LOL SRY BOUT THAT. ANY WAY LOVE THE STORY AND I CNAT WAIT TO READ MORE. ITS SO FASINATING, THE WORLD OF SLUTTY BILL. HES JUST SO RANDOM AND SCHEMING. GOD I WANT HIS MIND. LOL. JK, OR AM I?
Author's Response: Whoa, caps lock! Owen Meany much? Er, nevermind... XD Yeah, he kinda is random and scheming, isn't he? XP
Date: 01/29/09 04:22 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
"The sooner I fuck him, the sooner I can forget about him."
How I have a feeling that it's not that simple? ;)
Yes, we did like the fluff in this chapter! We also like the way you wrote about Bill's feelings towards Tom. That's so cute!
And Tom, he is trying. But, like we all know, it's for nothing ;) Maybe he will fall for Bill too soon? :D
xx
Author's Response: Because it isn't that simple. XP Poor Bill, doesn't even know what hit him. I SHALL MAKE THEM FALL FOR EACH OTHER, BECAUSE I AM AN AUTHOR, AND THAT EQUATES TO BEING GOD, MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Date: 01/29/09 02:08 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
i love this story. i hope the next chapter is as good if not better than this one:)
Author's Response: So do I. ._.; XD
Date: 01/29/09 06:26 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Wow... I loved this chapter, it was probably the best. Then again all the chapters in this story are good, this is probably my favourite story at the momement. Please post more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I like this chapter, I like watching Bill crumble... ER, I MEAN... um... Crap. XD Wow, I'm glad it's your favorite story, that's totally awesome!
Date: 01/29/09 01:16 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
yay! i enjoyed this chapter~! i seriously can't wait until the next chapter~!
Author's Response: Next chapter cometh SOON... *dun dun dun*
Date: 01/29/09 01:11 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Oh my god, I just read this whole thing last night and then this chapter just now. More, I need more!!!
I'll definitely be watching this and hope to see more updates soon!
Author's Response: Okay! More soon! Like, today! XD
Date: 01/28/09 11:45 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Once again, you created perfection! How do you do it?? I love it, and can't wait for the next update! :)
Author's Response: Uh, I kinda stumble through it and then I re- write it and post it. XD
Date: 01/28/09 11:21 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
This was awesome. I'm excited to read more. Update soon please.
Author's Response: I'll update today, which is a day late, but better late than never, right? Right? ^_^;
Date: 01/28/09 10:41 pm Title: Assumptions
Hahaha. Don't worry, I think I'll survive, as long as you promise not to keep it that way. Then I'd have to kill you, and bawl my face off at the same time. XD
Author's Response: Wouldn't it be boring if I kept it that way? And didn't I promise a happy ending? :P Don't worry, things will work out.
Date: 01/28/09 08:52 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
wow
that was marvellous xD
somebody's in looove ^^ i love the bitchy Bill, but please keep him away from fucking Tom as long as possible. i don't like when things are rushed... and you write it all perfectly, but i am just making sure... xD
haha i don't even know if it makes any sense, i am too tired to care, it's almost 3 a.m. xD i got my bed-time story and i am going to dream about all those dirty things included in your amazing story ^^ mrrrau xD
Author's Response: Well, we're already into chapter 9 and they still haven't done anything. Er, anything serious. XP I wouldn't exactly call that 'rushed' since this story will not get much farther than 20 chapters, we're already about halfway through. XP We'll just see how it all turns out... Pleasant dreams~ XD
Date: 01/28/09 08:50 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Fluff is good. Smut is better.
Author's Response: *slightly hurt* Um, this IS a romance, you know. I can only have so much smut, and good romance needs SOME fluff... I'm doing the best I can.
Date: 01/28/09 07:09 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
aww SluttyBill is in love; but he doesn't know it yet, and NotSoSluttyTom loves him back; but doesn't know it yet either XD how cute.
great chappie!!!
Author's Response: I know~ They will find out, but I'm gonna make them suffer first, mwahahahahaha...
Date: 01/28/09 06:28 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
ooh, i loved this development!! its perfect, because i dont want them to just fuck anyway, i want happily ever after for them. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: I promised happily ever after! XP We will get to happy ending, it will just take some time...
Date: 01/28/09 06:17 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
hahi like your chapter end note. "oh no you won't billa ...i won't let you" *evil laugh haha im soo going to feature this....after i figure out how = i hate delemas
Author's Response: Haha, I won't let him. XP He's not gonna get away THAT easily. There's a link at the top of the page, that says "Feature a Fic!" I think that should do it, right?
Date: 01/28/09 04:59 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
dude your amazing, you dont know how much I wish I could get as many review as you. This chapter was sweet as shit, I loved the little fluff there, kinda sweet. I think Bill is falling for him, though it will be hard for him to convence himself that he's not. I feel bad for him, for not really inderstanding it all that much. You did great hun, keep it up. Please update soon, your so lucky.
Author's Response: It always amazes me how much people like this story. EVERY time I post a chapter, I worry people will hate what I'm doing. >< Plus, I know a ton of people read it, so I'm not sure which is worse: Having a ton of people pissed off because of what you wrote, or having only a few people absolutely adore it. ._.; And yeah, poor Bill, has no idea what's going on... ^_^;
Date: 01/28/09 04:27 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Ohhh, what a sweet slutty Bill! XD
Needless to say that your writing is fantastic, and that I'm dying to see Tom surrendering... ;D
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a sweetie under it all... And mwahahaha, Tom surrendering to The SluttyBill. XP