Date: 02/01/09 06:40 pm Title: Excerpts
Haha, he's in such denial. I'd love to see him fuck Tom, and then BE the one forgotten, instead of the one forgetting. He'd be able to see what it felt like =]
Oh, and I don't mind the sex being pushed back ;) The longer it takes, the better it is, haha.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's like, DENIAL TO THE MAX!!! Nah, Tom won't forget him. It's worse than that, he'll put himself through emotional agony trying to break away from Tom.
Date: 02/01/09 05:56 pm Title: Excerpts
Holy fuck!! What I wouldn't give to be one of the students in that hallway during that delicious fuck-fest. *dirty thoughts*
Gawd this fic fucking kicks ass!!
Author's Response: Some people would be scarred for life because they saw that. People like us are scarred for life because we missed it. XD
Date: 02/01/09 05:55 pm Title: Excerpts
plz update soon...plzplz u dnot write enough..plzplz thx=]
Author's Response: I update every other day. That's not enough? o_0
Date: 02/01/09 05:27 pm Title: Excerpts
aww that's so cute, congrats to you for being an aunt and congrats for your sister too! :] if i were to read this in my roommates diary, i would kinda freak because 1) his mind is crazy and 2) holy shit, im a game? xD anyway that was just a pretty good explanation into looking into Bill's mind, SluttyBill is such a puzzle xD and im happy that you ended up posting this, it was a nice little change :]
Author's Response: Yeah, that'd be very disturbing to read in your roommate's diary... And I'm glad you were pleased I posted this, someone else said they didn't like the sudden use of Bill's diary, and I was like, "Yeah, but this scene has more impact if written in first person..."
Date: 02/01/09 05:16 pm Title: Excerpts
He's a bit of a nut, but he's also hugely in denial about himself, or at least how he feels about Tom. I liked this chapter, I like any chapter in this. Another chapter is always a good thing no matter what it is about. Congrats on being an aunt, thanks for the quick update, keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: You called it. HUGE denial. XD Glad you like all my updates, haha.
Date: 02/01/09 05:12 pm Title: Excerpts
oh man...that would freak me out if i had a roommate who's diary said stuff like that...wow haha
update soon please, love!
Author's Response: I know, right? I'd be like, "Ooookaaay, gonna get a different roommate..." XD
Date: 02/01/09 04:21 pm Title: Excerpts
Now I wish Tom would break Bill instead haha karma is a bitch & so is Bill in this story=D
Author's Response: LOLZ. Don't worry, Bill is going to go through a lot of emotional pain in this story... Tom will too, of course, but oh well, it must be done.
Date: 02/01/09 03:29 pm Title: Excerpts
WOW... I still dont get how people can keep dairys.
SLUTTYBILL is one fucked up dude. SO is he a naturally Sweet guy but vary into being that other person? '
HE LIKES TOM... >.> how could he want that to stop really?
Author's Response: I don't know, I don't keep one. ._.; And yeah, he's kinda... insane. I don't know if he's naturally sweet, or just sweet to Tom. And he wants to stop liking Tom because it scares and confuses him.
Date: 02/01/09 03:13 pm Title: Excerpts
Lol. That was insane. He's a trip.
Author's Response: Yes, he is. ^_^;
Date: 02/01/09 03:03 pm Title: Everyone Does
"Just fuck me!" lmao. Oh drunk Tom...and then Bill's being all nice, I wonder how long that'll last.
Author's Response: One chapter. XD He doesn't stay nice for long, but we do occasionally get to see SweetBill. Occasionally.
Date: 02/01/09 03:02 pm Title: Excerpts
will tom be reading his diary soon? ur story is so fun to read!! =^.^=
Author's Response: I actually don't think Tom ever reads his diary... He's not sneaky like that.
Date: 02/01/09 02:52 pm Title: Excerpts
Reading that in my roommates diray would make me go "WTF MATE?! WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU, I DO NOT HAVE DREADS! AND I'M A FUCKING GIRL!!!" :P
But I really do like the chapter, it's a nice visit in a fucked up mind. We all have out little kirks, like me, I'll flirt with a person and then stop talking to them, but unlike Bill it's more because when they get interested they totally creep me out. I mean you have to be fucked up to like someone as fucked up like me. So ok, I might be a bit like Bill, people under my skin, not a favorite. But I don't go around sleeping with them. ;P
And if I'm correct, it's Bill not Tom, who is only a game away. Poor, poor Bill, haven't got an idea what he's getting himself into. :P
Great chap! XD
Lots of love!
Sara
Author's Response: *Throws back her head and laughs* Well, there is that, lol. And yeah, he is a bit messed up in the head. And nope, he has no idea what hit him. Poor thing, he'll figure it out eventually...
Date: 02/01/09 02:51 pm Title: Excerpts
Oh, I forgot to congratulate you for the story, It's amasing. ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. ^_^
Date: 02/01/09 02:49 pm Title: Excerpts
no, but i just can't bring me to like Bill, or feel a bit of sympathy for him... I just like hate him?
But I read the last chapter, and feel that maybe he's going to get a big lesson about this... It's like the phrase that Tom told him in the first chapter, I think.
Maybe he needs a break down like he likes to give to people, you know? feel the pain that his acctions causes to others.
I don't like Bill, in fact, I hate him. And never it is going to change, until the reality slaps Bill's face and he loses what his fighting for. I'm not saing that he hasn't reasons for being like this, I just think that he is not allowed to hurt people, destroy them.
But, remember again, it's just a story with a mad slut Bill with big dreams of tons of affections just for him. Sad, hm?
Author's Response: In ch2, Tom says: “Someday,” growled Tom. “You're going to make a mistake. You're going to say the wrong thing to the wrong person and get yourself into trouble.” And yeah, he's gonna breakdown, so don't worry about that. He's about to get a dose of reality. In about two chapters. XP And no, he shouldn't be allowed to hurt people, but who's gonna stop him?
Date: 02/01/09 02:39 pm Title: Excerpts
*haven't even read it jet, but i'm doing the new chapter dance*
Author's Response: XD Yay! *dances too*
Date: 02/01/09 02:37 pm Title: Excerpts
That's fair, and it is your story after all. I still maintain it felt out of place though. From a personal perspective I feel like we got to know so much about Bill and what he had going on from the chapter where he almost found himself snuggling Tom? You could have done a chapter from his perspective like that again if you wanted to let the readers have a big dose of the Bill-side. First person just rarely works for a story, in my own humble opinion.
Keep it up though. I really liked the last chapter with Tom getting the Nurse!Bill treatment.
Author's Response: It may seem a little random thrown in there, yeah. But I don't think I could have pulled it off as effectively in third person, and I like the way this turned out. Though I probably won't return to the diary unless it's necessary... and yeah, I like Bill being a sweetie... Too bad he isn't that way more often...
Date: 02/01/09 02:16 pm Title: Excerpts
Interesting I have a feeling Bill will still want Tomi after all this. It was a good chapter can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Mwahaha, of course he will. Otherwise there would be no story. Well, there would be... But it wouldn't be as good. XP
Date: 02/01/09 01:35 pm Title: Excerpts
interesting.... i liek it!
Author's Response: Yay! ^_^
Date: 02/01/09 01:34 pm Title: Excerpts
I'm not really sure the diary excerpts thing worked for this story. It was introduced way too late into the plot without even a previous mention that Bill kept a journal (or else, there wasn't a lot of importance put on it).
I would have personally preferred if you kept writing the way you normally were doing and showing us Bill changing or his internal struggle. Last two chapters did a very good job at showing us his side and another layer to Bill while still staying in your regular style for this fic.
Author's Response: I REALLY wanted to do this chapter in first person, because the feel you get from it is much more personal, and I wanted to express that and get the reader really involved in Bill's thought process. There's only so much I can do in third person, surely you can see why I chose this method? The diary was the only way to switch perspectives like that. And since it was an unplanned chapter, there wasn't any way to mention it beforehand.
Date: 02/01/09 01:28 pm Title: Excerpts
I like twisted, insane people.
being one myself. =D
well, not as bad as Bill, but ... heheee.
I'm glad we got to see what really goes inside Bill's head.
nice chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's pretty insane. Crap, what does that say for me as the author? XD Bill is the character I identify most with in this story... o_0