Date: 02/07/09 05:17 am Title: Conceding Victory
YES YES YES YES YES. xD
lol.
Author's Response: Yes indeed! XD
Date: 02/07/09 05:16 am Title: Conceding Victory
Eek eek eeeeeeekkkkkk! It's happening now. How can you be so cruel as to say the next chapter will take a while :)
Poor Tom. And, honestly, poor Bill. It sucks to realize that something you never thought is happening to you, whether it's attraction to the sex you never thouht you would, or something you've thought about your whole persona proving to change..
I really liked the view inside their heads and hearts again in the beginning. And I thought Bill was endearingly sweet to Tom, almost like he was trying to win.... lovingly. Yay.
Author's Response: I want it to be peeeeerfect! *annoying whining* Yeah, both of their previously held self- images are shattering into little bitty pieces. And yay for winning lovingly. XP Or maybe it was all a trick to psyche out Tom even more? Who knows? I don't. XP
Date: 02/07/09 05:13 am Title: Conceding Victory
Does Bill win? I believe he doesn't. They will fuck, he will think he won, but he did not.
Why? Because he falls in love with Tom and wants him again and again. He wants Tom like he hasn't ever wanted anyone before. And that's not winning, Bill knows it.
But who wins then? Tom? No. Because Tom gave up and fucked Bill. He can't resist, he does not win it over Bill.
But who's the winner? Someone has to! Well. wins the one who got what he wanted. Bill gets Tom and Tom gets Bill. Both boys are happy. The will both win in that case! :)
Yay! I hope my theory will be the right one. I sosososooo hope that.
Please make it like I hope. Let them be happy. :)
I just love that fic so much!
Oh, but of course I don't want it to end yet. I just mean the winning thing. (a)
And, update soon. Wanna see them fucking. :)
Author's Response: Haha, love the questions in bold. And you pretty much called it. Didn't I say I'd write a happy ending? ^_^ Though it's gonna take them a while to get there... ><
Date: 02/07/09 04:22 am Title: Conceding Victory
I love your notes!
They always make me laugh! xD
0.o
Who could you end it there????
EVILLLLLLLLLL!!!
o.0
Author's Response: Hehe, I always worry that they're too long, so that's encouraging! (For some reason, I can't seem to make myself shut up in author's notes... ._.; )I ended it there because the next chapter was kinda long, and I don't like long chapters... (Have you noticed that? XD ) Plus it makes such a great chapter end! XD
Date: 02/07/09 04:20 am Title: Conceding Victory
YOU CLIFFHANGER LOVING BITCH!!!!! I loved this chapter, ALTHOUGH, I remember talking to you about it a while back xD Certain lines sound familiar. BTW. I love you and I missed you the last couple of days. HUGGLE!!!!!! This was awesomesauce! You are the shiznik, much like KFC xDD
Author's Response: Aw, that's no fair! Seriously, how often do I use cliffhangers? RARELY. And yeah, I had some difficulty that I talked to you about with this chapter, basically the part where Tom's all like, "I want to fuck you, but I'm not going to!" I was like, "How am I going to get him to actually say that?" XD Yay, huggle! ^_^ And giggles for KFC. (And because of you, I now always think of Tom whenever I hear the term 'awesomesauce' XD)
Date: 02/07/09 03:13 am Title: Assumptions
I just finished reading the hole story.. waauu i have to say that u leave breathless with this... i love how u put Bill in this one sooo kinky love it!!... I hope u update soon.. I will waiting!!! :D
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ^_^
Date: 02/06/09 01:33 am Title: Assumptions
umm something about a hole...XD dont worry i have a bad memory too lol
Author's Response: Let's just laugh at the word 'hole'. LOL, hole. XD
Date: 02/05/09 03:38 pm Title: Excerpts
Ack.. somehow my review got cut :S What I wanted to say that despite Bill being such a self-centered jackass I still like him and though he's taken it to the absolute extreme I think everyone can relate to the rush you get when the person you're interested in can't get enough of you. People are not games, bad Billa *swats him with the newspaper*
Bill's mind is indeed a scary place but there's a glimmer of hope that Tomi can change him ^-^
Author's Response: *watches Billa scurry into the corner to hide from the scary newspaper- wielding lady* XD Yeah, he needs some serious help or something... XP
Date: 02/04/09 08:44 pm Title: Excerpts
I love Bill even more because of this. ;D
Author's Response: Haha, well that's always good! ^_^
Date: 02/03/09 06:34 pm Title: Excerpts
can you keep going on with the story? Does he end up fucking tom?
Author's Response: Keep your pants on, all will happen as it needs to happen! This story isn't JUST smut, after all, it has a storyline, too! ^_^;
Date: 02/03/09 05:42 pm Title: Excerpts
hey, this is kaulcest's cousin and can i say this is really hot and i hope you keep writing, well ill hand back over to her :)
Wonderful fic hun, keep writing!!!!!
And congrats on becoming an aunt
Author's Response: Thank you both, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I will definitely keep writing it! ^_^
Date: 02/03/09 01:11 pm Title: Falsifying Evidence
I really like this story. It's funny!!
Author's Response: ^_^ Glad that it's funny, I do my best! XP
Date: 02/03/09 01:08 pm Title: Mama's Boy
He rolled his eyes and mouthed 'Your mom's a bitch' at Tom.
OMG! I laughed so hard!
Author's Response: XD I'm glad it made you laugh! ^_^
Date: 02/03/09 12:51 pm Title: You Can't Resist Me
God, SluttyBill is HOT.
Author's Response: I know, right? I love him, he's awesome...
Date: 02/03/09 09:59 am Title: Excerpts
fucking GOD!!!! If I read this in my roommates diary and if that person is treating me the way bill treats tom, I swear I am going to slash myself in front of that person slowly and give him a taste of his own medicine.... wait I think I just became morbid again... have I written a review on this? too lazy to check but I really like this so I look forward to the next chapter.*hopping eagerly*
Author's Response: Yeah, except he probably wouldn't even care. He'd probably just be excited that he'd gotten you so upset. He's... almost sociopathic or something, I don't know. And yay, hopping! *hops too*
Date: 02/02/09 10:20 pm Title: Excerpts
Yeah, I don't hate Bill after this chapter. I'd be totally creeped out after reading it if I knew the person, but I don't hate him. I feel bad for him. Clearly, he's afraid of emotional attachment (like I am), and everyone has a reason for that. I really like it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's got some real issues. A lot of people have emotional attachment issues, and I'd say he's got it pretty bad. Not to mention "in denial" issues...
Date: 02/02/09 06:04 pm Title: Excerpts
Hmm.. Bill's a bit twisted, and very scary. But I like it!
Author's Response: Yay for twisted, scary Bill? XD
Date: 02/02/09 04:14 pm Title: Excerpts
awww its so cuteee ty xx
Author's Response: XD What's cute about it? ^_^;
Date: 02/02/09 03:17 pm Title: Excerpts
he's only game after all? BILL YOU SLUT!!!! don't sy stuff like tht. I know you loooove him xD
Author's Response: Of course he does! But do you seriously think he's ready to admit that, even to himself?
Date: 02/02/09 03:05 pm Title: Excerpts
Congrats, auntie! It must be so nice, wish I were - well not really, as my sisters are only 14 and I'd rather not have them being baby mamas.
So, judging from your chapter end notes - did Tom read this in his roommate's diary, is that what you're hinting?
I was scared to read this chappie after you said that it'll make us hate Bill again. I'm just letting him under my skin (well, him getting under Tom's skin is what actually gets me:) and I don't want to start disliking him again - and I didn't! I guess it makes me a bit of a freak as well; I admit he did sound so selfish and so mean in some sentences, but I liked seeing inside him a bit more. Tom being a game to you? Dream on.
Author's Response: Well, my sister is almost 33, and married, so it's all good. XP Glad you still like Bill, I think it's nice being able to see his point of view a little bit so we can understand where he's coming from. It'll also make the next few chapters have more impact. HAHA! IMPACT! And yeah, he still thinks he can win this, poor thing... He's too far gone to get out now, mwahahaha...