Date: 02/07/09 11:38 am Title: Conceding Victory
Oh. My. God!!!!!!!!!!!!
The wait was so worth it, I was melting throughout all your descriptions.
Author's Response: YAY!!!!!!!! Oh dear, do I have to clean up this puddle of Kaulcest now...?
Date: 02/07/09 11:14 am Title: Conceding Victory
ah!! don't tell us it will be late!! I was so excited to see this updated, i just adore this story. you have created such realistic and deep characters. and the rest of your writing style is just so funny, i love it. i can't wait to see what happens next. and once they both give in, and stop pretending, they will be such a cute couple!! Tom will be the one who got to keep the slut! and bill wont be a slut anymore. keep up the great work!! =)
Author's Response: *screaming to the world* I CREATE REALISTIC AND DEEP CHARACTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you for that comment. Like, that makes me giddy with pride and joy. And yes, they will be SUCH a cute couple! So cute, I may be forced to write a sequel. XD
Date: 02/07/09 10:57 am Title: Conceding Victory
water sport? oO
urgh NOOOOOOOOO >________
Author's Response: Waitwaitwaitwaitwait. Wait. Wait. Stop. You're going to tell me that you read through 12 chapters of this story, are RIGHT before the first real sex scene, and only NOW you're realizing it has a watersport warning? You're kidding me, right? That warning has been there since this story was first posted. And personally, I like watersport, I find it both sexy and hysterical. So, um... I don't really know what to tell you. Maybe watch the warnings a little more carefully next time? 'Cause I'm not going to change my story, the warning was there, it's not my fault if you didn't see it. Sorry if I'm sounding a little bitchy, but you pretty much just dissed my story for something that I said would be in it from the VERY BEGINNING. I mean, come on, don't you think that's a little unfair on your part? You know the rule: Don't like, don't read.
Date: 02/07/09 10:53 am Title: Conceding Victory
Wild guess. Bill won't like it because Tom breaks down. They realize they actually do like each other and just cuddle for the night. Then when they are sure of each other they try their hardest to fuck their brains out. ;P
Love the chap!
Author's Response: Good guess, and that'd be awesome if it worked out that way, but Bill is too goddamned stubborn to admit his feelings for Tom, so... ^_^; It doesn't quite work out that well... ._.;
Date: 02/07/09 10:51 am Title: Conceding Victory
oh my gosh!!!!! tom looses!!!!!wow i never thought hed give up just like that. i thought they would be arguing and then fucking the next. but your way works as well. i loved the chapter it was so good.cant wait for the next chapter. update... talk to you then.
Author's Response: I thought over several ways to do this scene, and I really wanted the emotional impact of that last line, so this is how I ended up doing it.
Date: 02/07/09 10:45 am Title: Conceding Victory
*does the new chapter dance*
*scrolls to the top to read*
Author's Response: *does the new review dance*
Date: 02/07/09 10:38 am Title: Conceding Victory
lovely! I'm glad Bill realizes he feels something more for Tom! :D
and the ending was so "GAME OVER" I loved it.
This story is sofa king great (ha!)
Author's Response: He *kinda* realizes it. He's still in denial, though. And lol, GAME OVER. XD
Date: 02/07/09 10:29 am Title: Conceding Victory
You are amazing, you have me so whipped on this story, though I wish you would have told what happens lolz update soon hun
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but the chapter made sense to end there...
Date: 02/07/09 10:19 am Title: Conceding Victory
Then hurry up with it! that was too good of a cliffhanger.. seriously!! get writing, cause oh boy do i want the next one!
Author's Response: You're not the only one yelling at me to hurry! XD Well, others are yelling at me that I left a cliffhanger at ALL... ^_^;
Date: 02/07/09 10:16 am Title: Conceding Victory
loved this chapter and can't wait until the next one!! your one of the best!!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this one! And thank you, I do try to do it well! ^_^ That's very flattering~
Date: 02/07/09 09:31 am Title: Conceding Victory
OMG, I'm so excited, you so don't even know. I think I will end up cahnting the titile of this story everyday before you update.
Damn.
Author's Response: Yay! *tempted to not update for an extra few days just so you will chant* XD
Date: 02/07/09 08:49 am Title: Conceding Victory
noooooeesss u cant end it hereeee
me wants more xO
much much much much moreeeee
Author's Response: XD It had to end there, that's where it made sense to end it.
Date: 02/07/09 08:28 am Title: Excerpts
he is a bit of a nut but i still love him just the same hahaha
Author's Response: Yep, he's just a little crazy... XP
Date: 02/07/09 08:03 am Title: Conceding Victory
D:
Damn it woman! You post that chapter nowwww. The suspense it kiiiiilling meeee.
Author's Response: But, but but... I want to do it the RIGHT way!!! I want it to be good enough!!! T_T
Date: 02/07/09 07:29 am Title: Conceding Victory
Ahaha, I love your unending notes! XD
First... bout the notes... you don't need to beg, I'm not gonna lose the new story for nothing, famous girl! ;D
Now, bout the chapter... =O *drooling*
Counting seconds for the next one... ;D
Author's Response: ^_^; I can never seem to get myself to shut up in the notes... There's so much that I want to tell people, I just can't stop talking! XD And yay, please do read our story when it finally goes up... We're having real difficulties with ch2, I don't know why we haven't posted ch1 yet, though...
Date: 02/07/09 07:08 am Title: Conceding Victory
ARGH! More! Lol, I love this story xD
Author's Response: I'll write more! I just want it to be a good more!
Date: 02/07/09 06:57 am Title: Conceding Victory
ahhhh!!! I am getting way excited on this one that I left the song that I am composing and totally forgot my idea..man, this sucks.. but making me forget a song means it's very distracting because I can hold an idea for at least three days if needed but.. this is way to great to pass... please update soon...*pouts* I missed slutty bill...
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make you forget things! ^_^; And I'm sorry you miss SluttyBill, but remember, the story isn't over yet! Not by a long shot...
Date: 02/07/09 06:12 am Title: Conceding Victory
Bill wins? Can Tom just 'love him & leave him' for a while? LOL, I mean, Bill needs a taste of his own medicine!
Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: Oh, trust me, Bill gets what's coming to him.
Date: 02/07/09 06:08 am Title: Conceding Victory
Yesssss!!!! He admitted it!! YESS!! Billa's such a devious little bastard, isn't he. :P And I LOVE it!! ^^ Excited for what comes next. I'm practically quivering. :3
Author's Response: Yes, he IS a devious little bastard. But we already knew that, didn't we? XP
Date: 02/07/09 05:19 am Title: Conceding Victory
yes oh yes! finally! Bill! your my idol! please more, we cant waIT
Author's Response: Bill wins, haha! More soon, as soon as it's PERFECT! XD