Date: 02/16/09 09:07 pm Title: Game Over?
awww the smex was great but i really hate bill right now oh yeah hehehe
Author's Response: Thanks~ Well, it's not like he's having the easiest time either, you know ^_^;
Date: 02/16/09 08:50 pm Title: Game Over?
DUDE! *blinks a few tears away* You just made me feel bad for Tom, probably in one of a extremelly few ocations I do... Really! I NEVER FEEL BAD FOR TOM AND YOU JUST MADE ME! And On top of that, You made me wanna kill Bill.. O_O I NEVER WANNA KILL BILL! I ALWAYS WANNA KILL TOM AND I FEEL BAD ABOUT BILL!
WOW! You just changed Bill and Tom's rolls in my mind when I never thought someone would be able to Ö!
Translation to all that: You are an AMAZING WRITER! I mean it! I L-o-v-e this story! How you write it, the charactors, everything... This has been in my faves for a while now! ;) Great Job! ^^.. xx
Author's Response: Well, people usually make Tom the asshole and Bill the victim. I MIXED UP THE SYSTEM, LOLZ. I'm glad you like the story so much! ^_^
Date: 02/16/09 08:35 pm Title: Game Over?
can i kill Bill now?
Author's Response: Aw, give the poor kid a break, he's not in much better shape than Tom is. And we kinda need him alive if this story is gonna have a happy ending... XD
Date: 02/16/09 08:34 pm Title: Game Over?
God, I hate Bill. And I love him, all at the same time. I've been PMSing all day screaming at people, wishing I didn't at the same time. I so understand how he feels and I hate it. I love the story, the chapter, how it's written, everything but I hate that I can feel what Bill is feeling, 'cause it sucks to feel like that.
And Tom, poor, poor Tom I just want to hug him and tell him about rainbows any puppydogs while patting his head.
You can write a sex scene by the way. If you look at this chapter you can find one, I promise. :P Still, it's hard to get that "hot-steamy-my-head-is-going-to-explode" thingy when you have all the emotions mixed in there. I personally like it better this way. One of the things I hate is when a good story has a totally pointless sex scene. The "ok-so-they-haven't-had-sex-for-three-chapters-so-they-have-to-have-sex-now-who-cares-about-feelings-let's-just-write-it-as-a-pointless-porno". Don't get me wrong, I like the sexy one shot as much as the next person. I just don't like when they turn it of and on. I think the scene fits the story.
Now me and my heat-pad are going to sleep. Just want to let you know that it's ok to be disappointed and sad and upset and fucking pissed of at times.
Hope you get something useful out of this comment.
Lots of love!
Sara
Author's Response: *imagined Bill PMSing* WOW, that made me laugh, no offense. And yeah, I'm going to try to make the sex scenes mesh smoothly with the story, I don't want them to seem out of place... Meaning there will probably be fewer of them than people would like... XD Oh well, in the end, this is really supposed to be a romance.
Date: 02/16/09 08:27 pm Title: Game Over?
that was awesome and scary and it made me want to cuddle tom at the end and offer bill a warm towel and a hug while he was in the shower and, and, and,.....I'm ramblling right? sorry...and even though I can't write a story to save my life I'd just like to say that was AMAZING! I've been waiting for this chapter and you did a great job!
Author's Response: LOL, I also want to hug Bill while he's in the shower. Er, I mean... XD Yeah, sorry for the wait...
Date: 02/16/09 08:15 pm Title: Game Over?
okay now im incredibly depressed
Author's Response: HA! Made you depressed! Come join my circle of depression, we have chocolate! XD
Date: 02/16/09 08:15 pm Title: Game Over?
I hope Bill actually breaks towards what he feels again Tom. Great chapter can't wait...For more
Author's Response: I'll make them end up together, I promise. XD Then I'll finally get to write some fluff~
Date: 02/16/09 08:13 pm Title: Game Over?
Omg I woulda died if you ended it! lol. But you did promise a happy ending, I'm waiting for that because BILL RIGHT NOW IS IN SOOO MUCH TROUBLE!!! I woulda beat his skinny little ass. lol. Awesome chapter!!
Author's Response: I know, that would be the most terrible ending ever. XD And I know, Bill was a little bastard in this chapter.
Date: 02/16/09 08:11 pm Title: Game Over?
aww...im sorry that youre in a bad mood...*hugs* O.O are you kidding me? that was one of the best sex scenes i've ever read on this site you are absolutely amazing! and then afterwards with Bill breaking down and Tom saying that he used him, i started getting teary eyed, youre great at making the story speak to readers! ekk yay its not over! my heart literaly stopped when you put that it might be the end, yay for not being over :)
Author's Response: That's a really huge compliment, wow! Like, everything you said was a huge compliment! XD And haha, I psyched you out!XD
Date: 02/16/09 08:10 pm Title: Game Over?
Whoaaa, emotional overload!! Haha! Crap, I've been waiting for this update forever, and no disappointments!!
I know what you mean about writing sex scenes, its fricken tough!!
Author's Response: OVERLOAD!!! Sorry, I was putting it off because I hate writing sex scenes... XD And yeah, it's way difficult, supposed to be one of the most difficult things to write...
Date: 02/16/09 08:05 pm Title: Game Over?
thats a sad story and very well wrote
kinda emorional from it so i say good job hope tom gets him back for it
Author's Response: It ends up a happy story, though. ^_^ And no, Tom will not get revenge on Bill for this.
Date: 02/16/09 08:04 pm Title: Game Over?
omfg..plz update soon..man i wanna cry now..shh im emotional lolz...plz hurry thx
Author's Response: I'm sorry! ^_^;
Date: 02/16/09 08:01 pm Title: Game Over?
It was a good sex scene. OMG Poor Tom. I feel so bad for him. Bill is evil.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad it was good! And Bill isn't evil, he's just confused... Okay, he is a LITTLE evil... XD
Date: 02/16/09 08:00 pm Title: Game Over?
This broke my heart, you need to fix this, 'cause I'm so sad over this that is not normal. Amazing chapter, by the way.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry. Don't worry, I promise everything works out!
Date: 02/16/09 07:57 pm Title: Game Over?
the sex scene was good?! WTFP! well whatever I hope tom gets his revenge and bill finally cracks....man, and i hope the next and if there is a next time...that tom screws bill senseless...
keep it comin! i wanna know what happens next!
Author's Response: What do you mean, what's the point? I don't want to write a BAD sex scene if I can help it! And no, Tom does not get revenge, I can already tell you... Nor does Bill crack. Mwahahahaha...
Date: 02/16/09 07:55 pm Title: Game Over?
oh god...i feel like crying!
bad bad bill!oh tomi, you poor thing!
i wanna hug him!
this story is really really awesome!
thank you!
Author's Response: Well, Bill isn't exactly having the easiest time of it either... Yay, glad you think it is awesome! ^_^
Date: 02/16/09 07:48 pm Title: Game Over?
you HAVE to update! Fix them!
Author's Response: I will! Don't worry! ^_^
Date: 02/16/09 07:45 pm Title: Game Over?
psh......goddamit MISA....
I cried.
I fucking cried!!
I'm gonna kick your ass when I get back to yahoo.
That was sexy and intense and amazing.
I'll write another more detailed review when I'm not doing stats hw! ILY babe ^_^
Author's Response: YES, I MADE YOU CRY. XD ILY too. XP
Date: 02/15/09 07:47 pm Title: Conceding Victory
Oh God! Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
There's no more *breaks down into sobbing mess*
*stops, composes self, continues review*
I love this so much so so so much!
This is indescribable and so well written, I have crumbled at the Hypno Eyes of SluttyBill so many times, it';s not funny... it's hiliarious!
I swear, this has had me squeal in delight, chuckle and guffaw, (love RantyTom btw) my eyes widen and jaw drop, salivate immensely (thank you God for whipped cream) and cower in the corner (the inner workings of SluttyBill's mind is a scary scary place)
So anyways this is amazing and I shall sit around and wait for more!
did i mention I love this? I did? oh okay... I love this i love this i love this love this love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love...
Author's Response: I updated! XP Next chapter, I'm going to try to make you cry... I already made a few reviewers cry with it, mwahahahaha...
Date: 02/15/09 11:59 am Title: Conceding Victory
*whines* More chapters please?
Author's Response: I finally posted one! XP