Date: 02/18/09 01:07 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
ughhh. Bill's so cruel.
Author's Response: He is, but I'll make it all better in the next chapter. Just watch me.
Date: 02/18/09 01:01 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
WAIT!
um... is it some kind of relative? a sister maybe?
or some girl who raped him?
or maybe he is just being drama-queen bill?...
or... a teacher? no, that's crazy...
um... well, "she" it's a girl, anyway.. or a ship... or a car... ugh im talking nonsense now...
Author's Response: LOL, drama queen Bill... XD And you called it! One of those guesses was correct. Good job, you're the first one to get it! But I'm not telling you which one it was... XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:58 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
okay, my guess is:
some bad-ass girlfriend from way back when used him like he did tom and then got pregnant and disposed of the unwanted child. or something.
or Bill means Tom's mother. THEIR mother)))
Author's Response: None of the above! XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:56 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
great story. i think that it was bill's mother that he was talking about.
Author's Response: Nope, not his mother! Though that is the obvious choice...
Date: 02/18/09 12:55 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
OEEH OEEEH OEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHH GOOD GOOD SO GOOODD!
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm glad you liked the chapter! XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:52 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
his mom huh? I bet it's bills mom! More! I like this!
Author's Response: Nope! Not his mom! XD Everyone thinks that, or they think it's someone who pulled on him what he pulled on Tom. Neither one is correct. XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:51 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
My first guess would be his mother or somebody like that, for example if they don't have a good relationship, he is not good for anything. Just a guess ;)
You really know how to get readers to want more. I just can't wait to know what will happen! :)
xx
Author's Response: Nope! Not his mother! I knew everyone was going to think that... And yay, thank you! ^_^
Date: 02/18/09 12:50 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
grrr...cliff hanger haha.
hmmm i dont know who it could be. at first i thought it was Toms mom but then i was like "What?" haha...
Author's Response: Aw, come on, it's not THAT bad of a cliffhanger... Not as bad as the one at the end of ch12... No, it's not Tom's mom, that would just be weird. XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:48 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Uh oh. First, and I really hope I said it in my last review, I definitely don't hate Bill. I hate the way he's playing with Tom, but I definitely see where he's coming from. I just wish they could both get over their pride and fears.
Haha. Bill is so talking about mummy dearest. Nothing like abandonment issues to twist you up.
Author's Response: LOL, trueness, they need to just suck it up. XD And yes, Bill DOES have abandonment issues because of his mother, but that's not who he's talking about. So, you are both right and wrong. XP
Date: 02/18/09 12:47 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Letme guess. That girl (whoever) played the same game, Bill plays. And she seduced Bill. And broke Bill. And... Oh, the angst.
I Luuuuurve it! Tomi's so... Amazingly adorable.
And Bill's hot when he's crazy. Well, crazyishly lost, anyway.
Author's Response: Nope! No one has guessed right yet, but I don't think anyone will... Though it's not that difficult, I don't think anyone's going to think of it. Hooray for Misa being unpredictable! XD Yep, Tom is adorable, in the next chapter too. And Bill is... out of his mind. XD I guess it's sexy, if it wasn't so scary... XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:22 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
wow.. Bill kinda reminded me of the joker in this. creepy.
Crazy!Bill just gives me the creeps. even if he is just playing the role.
i love it.
but it was so amazing how right after Tom had hurt Bill, he apologized and held him. i dunno why but that just.. strikes me for some reason.
Author's Response: OH MY GOD, LOLZ, YOU'RE RIGHT. XD He IS like the Joker, I hadn't even thought of that. And yeah, CrazyBill is creepy as all hell, I got chills while writing this. Yeah, I think it's a powerful image, Tom apologizing to Bill even after all the pain Bill has caused him. Just goes to show how much better of a person he is than Bill. XD
Date: 02/18/09 12:16 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
I think she did to him what he did to Tom. He was in love, she seduced him and kept him for fun and shattered him in the end. And that's why Bill became like this.
That's why he refuses to love.
Am I right? I bet I'm not.
Author's Response: Fun as that would be, nope! That's not what happened. Bill has never been in love in this story, which is why he's so confused about Tom.
Date: 02/18/09 12:11 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
._. Even with Bill cackling away in his devilish little act, hurting Tom with his venomous words... I still couldn't hate him. It's Bill! I just CAN'T hate him. lol.
The whole scene was so intense actually, I didn't expect it at all. I was trying not to miss a word because it was all so serious.
Author's Response: Bill is a psycho. XD And yeah, I can't hate him either, but I know it works out anyway, so... XP
Date: 02/18/09 12:07 pm Title: Assumptions
Well update fast, cause I need fuel to survive D:
Btw, just featured your fic, I had to send it by mail since I can't actually feature any fics xD (it just says that the link is broken O_O)
But now it's done, so keep your eyes up :D
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I get distracted by stuff! And thank you for helping to try and get this featured! ^_^
Date: 02/18/09 12:06 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
I have no freaking idea! I almost thought it was like a Miss Murder thing, you know, alternate ego taking over and stuff? But, I am happy you let Tom throw a punch in this one. Bill deserved it. The Angst is killing me, it's true and somehow I am just as frustrated as Tom is with Bill. I can really feel the exhaustion of just having to be around someone like that. I hope he gets fixed, like, soon. his brain, that is :P
Author's Response: Yeah, he kinda did deserve it, but getting hit didn't really seem to bother him, did it?. XD And haha, for a second I thought you meant make Bill get neutered. XD Which I actually considered making Tom threaten to do later in the story, but I changed my mind... XD
Date: 02/18/09 11:58 am Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
I'm thinking maybe his mother or something. Who maybe hurt him or something. Ugh, I'm adding you to my favorite author :3
Author's Response: Hehe, but I'm not gonna tell you if you're right or not! XD I'm thinking everyone is going to guess 'mother' 'cause that's the obvious choice... And thank you for the fav! ^_^ Makes me very happy~
Date: 02/18/09 11:50 am Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
AND THERE IT WAS! THE UPDATE!
I wrote that last review when you were updating, lol XD
Author's Response: XD Yep, it's here! XP
Date: 02/18/09 11:49 am Title: Assumptions
When I saw you responded I hurried to see if you had updated something, but you hadn't :(
(oh I have to much to do XD)
I was just wondering, since you said you were gonna make it work out in the end, but neither would give in, whats gonna happen? A drunk night? Bill confessing his feelings in his diary and Tom finding it? I NEED TO KNOW D:
*insane*
Author's Response: Yes, I did! I just posted it! XD Well... I don't want to spoil the ending... ><
Date: 02/18/09 05:11 am Title: Game Over?
Q_Q Oh my god! I feel like crying!! This was oh, so sexy ;D but oh the end was so sad Q_Q
Author's Response: 'Twas sad indeed, but I'm glad you liked the sexy part! XD
Date: 02/18/09 04:19 am Title: Game Over?
ha ha this is a good story =) i was going to write a review for every chapter but i thought i'd wait til the end not tht this is but its the last chapter for now lol. It's good and im glad its only half way thru lol its interesting lol
Author's Response: Well, the next chapter is going to be posted today, so I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^_^