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Reviewer: ShootingStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 06:12 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

He can deal with his mom leaving him, but he can't deal with Tom leaving him, too ;] I've solved it yay ;p

Author's Response: No, it's not his mom. XD So you haven't solved it, haha! Don't worry, Bill will explain later in the story...

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 06:08 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

omfg..plzplzplz update soon...thxxxxxxxxxxx=]

Author's Response: I already did update for that chapter, now I have to catch up on my reviews, lol. XD

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:44 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

wow. This is so good. I love it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! I do my best! ^_^

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:35 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

OHH THE DRAMAAAAA xD
love it! :D

Author's Response: I know, drama makes me dance~ XD

Reviewer: Twinsational Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:29 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

I think he's talking about his mommy. :P

 

good chappie. just a question, but how long do you think this story will be? =) just wondering.

 

continue writing! I love it. 



Author's Response: Nope, not his mom! And uhm... Lemme think about that. I have all the events planned out, but I don't have the chapters planned out. *checks her notebook* Maybe... 10 more chapters? Maybe more, maybe less, depending on how the events play out. So, around 25 chapters long. I hope to finish it before the end of March. But, with Vicious also laying claim to my time/creativity/soul, it may take longer than that.

Reviewer: sirpustophlese Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:23 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

XD Totes talking about Mom/Grandmom/Aunt/other female figure in his life.
Love it.

Author's Response: Well, obviously it's gonna be a female figure, or he wouldn't have said 'her' right? XP We'll find out who it is eventually.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:22 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

I loved this chapter... I really dont hate anyone I still love them both. :D I really dont get the ending it confused me. a random witch doctor xD I think is who Bill is talking about. But so much facking pain to last alife time. >.< 

Author's Response: I'm totally into those confusing chapter endings lately. XD And lolz for witch doctor. XD

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:18 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

Awww. I'm really feeling for Bill right now. Like, seriously. D:
I feel bad for Tom, too, but not nearly as bad as I do for Bill. *hugs the poor thing*

Author's Response: Yay for feeling Bill's pain, he needs some love too. *hugs Bill too*

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:14 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

his mom?
an ex?
did he have a partner and they both used to make bets with each other about the game?
his alter ego?

Author's Response: LOLZ, alter ego. No, none of those guesses is correct. ^_^;

Reviewer: billa_lewis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:12 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

oh..... my.... gosh..... who is bill talkign aboput? this is so not fair..... tell me? *uses cute almost bill eyes*

Author's Response: Nope, not telling! XP It shall be revealed in time~

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 05:09 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

see, i love this, and i dont hate bill at all. i see him as a very sad very hurt boy who is all bravado. what he really needs is someone to break through his mask and take care of him, make him believe he is worth anything. another great chapter, keep up the great work, i cannot wait for more!!

Author's Response: He IS a sad, hurt boy who is all bravado. He needs lots of Tomcuddles. XP

Reviewer: Karousel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:51 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

i cant really say i hate Bill since you did an amazing job at keeping him in the "Slutty Bill" character and of course he was gonna hurt Tom, it was basically predetermined since Bill isnt supposed to be attached to anyone...that being said...i agree with you with Bill loosing himself xP that was really...Ocsar worthy acting but holy shit he's crazy! Maybe he's talking about an old girlfriend....who knows....(you do) xP yet Tom's in love, he cant hurt Bill even if he was gonna die! xP yay youre doing an amazing job :)

Author's Response: Yep, anyone who really thought about it should have seen that coming. Nope, not an old girlfriend. XP And thank you, as always! ^_^

Reviewer: Roseii S Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:45 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

NOOOOOOOOO this is toooo good damnit....gahh i LOVE this Bill and i feel like im just gonna ramble on so i;ll shut up now

Author's Response: ^_^ I'm glad you enjoy it, I try~

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:41 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

make up, make up, maaaakkkke up!!!!

Author's Response: XP That's what the next chapter is for... XD

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:27 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

I got some sort of...sick, twisted pleasure from this chapter xD

I love that Tom got Bill to break. It was harsh, of course, but still. He got a taste of his own medicine >:)

I think...it's an ex-girlfriend. Who probably used Bill or something. If not an ex, then his mother. ((maybe)) It'd fit, since he said, 'I can deal with her.' Not 'I dealt with her.' So, that's assuming she's still around, I suppose.

Ah, either way this chapter was great :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Bill deserved it. XD Nope, not an ex or his mother. XP

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:21 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! IT"S MY FAVORITE STORY ON THE SITE AT THE MOMENT! AHHHHHH SPAZZ ATTACK!!!!!=D

Author's Response: YAAAAAAAY!!! *also spazz attacks*

Reviewer: MilesxofxHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:11 pm Title: Assumptions

Did. not. see. that. coming.
Poor Tom. Yah, I kinda despise Bill now.

Author's Response: Mwahahahaha, that's because Misa Sugar is evil and likes to make Bill evil too. >:D

Reviewer: Mashiitastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:11 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

Whoa, could "her" be Tom's mother? Like, convincing her that being gay wasn't so bad but it was hard.... but convincing Tom wouldn't have been so hard, but it really is. No, wait, I'm saying stupid nonsense. It's some woman/girl from Bill's past, right? Argh, nevermind. I would love you if you granted me the gift of another chapter. It was amazing!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, it is someone from Bill's past. Obviously, can't be from his future unless he can time-travel. XD

Reviewer: SongofFate Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 04:10 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

Shiiit. It certainly SEEMED he'd gone crazy for a second. o__O Sheesh. That was a lot of angst in that one chapter. Sucked me in though, it did. lol. As for the "her". Was he talking about when Tom said no one could love him? Was it Bill's mom? sister? friend? ex-girly-friend before he found out he liked men? o.O

Author's Response: I know, Misa can really pack in the angst. XD Yes, he was talking about when Tom said no one could love him. And one of those guesses is correct, but I won't tell which one! And as he mentioned in, I believe it is chapter 4, he is bisexual, soooo... XP It is convenient for Bill to be bisexual, so he is. XD

Reviewer: Jejje Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/09 03:52 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet

I don't even know what to say XD
Uhm. Let's see.
I love this story. So so much.
Good enough? ;-;

Author's Response: ^_^ I'm glad you love it, I do try!

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