Date: 02/24/09 11:19 am Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
“Bill,” Tom began. “Is there a method to your madness, or do you just like to fuck with my head?”
I'd like to fuck with more than that... Bill smiled placidly. “A little bit of both.”
“Was there any reasoning behind the stunt you pulled today?”
“There was reasoning.”
“Care to give an explanation?”
“An explanation? Sure.” – I like that he does explain it! That’s cute.
“Arg, don't you ever stop talking?”
“Of course I do.” Bill licked his lips, watching Tom. “I won't be able to talk when my mouth is wrapped around your-”
“Shut up, shut up, SHUT UP!” Tom shrieked, clapping his hands over his ears. “Stop talking!” - *giggles*
He silently rose from the bed and walked over to stand behind Tom, who was now wearing pants, but was still shirtless.
Tom gave a little gasp of surprise when he felt Bill's arms slipping around his waist. Bill pressed their bodies together and kissed Tom's shoulder. – awh fluffy bunny cute!
I don't even need to fuck him. Bill thought. I could just hold him like this, forever, and that would be enough. He smiled at the thought.
Wait a minute. What?! Bill's eyes snapped open. Since when do I have thoughts like that? Since when do I decide cuddling is better than fucking? What the hell is happening to me?! – ah ha ha ha poor Bill I could almost smell this one coming! Ha ha ha
No I don't think he'll be able to forget him either...he's putting too much effort, too much emotion, too much in general into Tom...and he knows he getting lost in it too. ha ha ha
Author's Response: I love fluff. I am a fluffwhore. But I hardly ever write it, because it doesn't mix well with most of my stories. ._.; It takes me a long time to build into fluff... Yep, Bill's putting too much into Tom (So NOT making a sexual joke about Tom putting anything into Bill! XD) and he's in too deep now. (NOT making a sexual joke about that either!) There is no escape, mwahahahaha!!!
Date: 02/24/09 10:58 am Title: Falsifying Evidence
Bruises? Bill thought with a smile. This could work to my advantage...
He thought for a moment, then ripped the sheets off of his bed. He then skipped over and ripped the sheets off of Tom's bed. Lucky we both have plain white sheets... He made up both beds again and exchanged the pillows. He stood back, admiring his handiwork, then collapsed onto his bed. – what the hell does he have planned?!
When Tom came back that night, he was disappointed to see Bill already asleep in bed. Tom was still angry about the phone call, but he felt bad about hurting Bill and wanted to apologize. – oh poor Tom he’s being so sweet.
Bill, in fact, was not asleep at all. He was very much awake, and listening to Tom. He bit his lip to keep from laughing as Tom went berserk trying to figure out what the smell on his bed was, before simply giving up to take care of himself. Bill smiled. It had not occurred to him that Tom would get so aroused, but it was definitely an added bonus. – ISA giggles too!!!
He waited until Tom's breathing slowed and leveled out and Bill was sure he was asleep. Then he silently climbed out of bed, snatched up the clothes that Tom had laid out for tomorrow, and pulled them on. Giggling, he climbed back into bed.
Bill couldn't wait until tomorrow. Roommates were so much fun. – OMG LOL
“Oh my God, Bill,” said the first person he walked passed. “What the hell happened to you?”
Bill glanced down at the very visible bruises on his bare shoulders.
“They're from Tomi. My roommate.” He winked at the other boy, who nodded knowingly. Bill bounced off, and the other boy scurried away to tell his friends what he had seen. - *slaps hands to face* OMG! He’s awful!!!!!!!!!!! LOL *giggles*
A little while later, Tom found Georg.
“Hey,” said Georg conversationally. “I heard you finally gave in.”
“What?” asked Tom, confused. - *giggles* awh poor Tomi!
Tom, seeing Bill, marched over to him and grabbed his bathrobe- clad arm. “Bill, “ he snarled quietly. “What have you been telling everybody?”
“Tomi,” Bill smiled sweetly, reaching over to entwine his fingers in Tom's dreadlocks. He leaned closer to him, nuzzling against him affectionately, suddenly happy just to be near Tom. Then Tom interrupted his momentary euphoria.
“Answer the fucking question, Bill! What the fuck have you been telling people?”
“Nothing that wasn't the truth.” Bill flashed Tom a mischievous smile before pulling him into a kiss.
In front of the entire class. – Oh god if they didn’t believe the rumors before they will now!!! OMG!
Author's Response: Yep, Bill is a sneaky bastard. XD Poor Tom...
Date: 02/24/09 10:39 am Title: Mama's Boy
“Oh, I'm sorry, Tomi,” Bill cooed. “I got it all over you face. Do you want me to help you clean up?” She probably didn't get that, I'll make it more obvious... “With my tongue?” - *giggles* not jaw dropping yet but seriously funny!!!!
A few minutes later, Tom walked in. He'd been thinking about what had occurred earlier, and wanted to apologize for hitting Bill. He was still convinced that he wasn't gay, but maybe Bill was an exception to the rule, as he seemed to be to a lot of rules, and that wasn't either of their faults, really. – Bill just keeps pushing and pushing and he’s just pushing Tom away!
“Fine. You want to know the truth?” Bill looked straight at Tom and grinned wickedly. “I think your son is the best fuck I've ever had.”
Tom's jaw dropped, and the color drained out of his face.
Bill stared at the phone, evidently surprised. “Ah. She hung up on me...” - *sad face* awh Billa that wasn’t very nice. *sighs* that’s not going to get you what you want. *sigh* that’s no good!
*sad face and pouts still left over from Bill talking to Tom’s mum* yeah too much build up. *sigh* what Bill did was NOT very nice in a not cute way at all! I’m very disappointed in his behavior! THAT was crossing the line!
Author's Response: Er, sorry about the build up. It wasn't intended, it just kinda happened. ^_^; And you should realize by now, SluttyBill will ALWAYS cross the line. XD
Date: 02/24/09 10:08 am Title: Fighting It
The upsetting part was, while Tom was driving Bill quietly insane, he didn’t even realize he was doing it. There was no control over the situation, Tom didn’t have control, Bill didn’t have control, no one had control. There were no rules to it. Bill always followed rules. True, he never followed other people’s rules, only his own, but rules were rules, rules made order. The situation was too disorderly for his liking. He had to stop it, lest it get out of hand. –I really like getting a glimpse into Bill’s soul it’s nice! A good view.
As Tom had expected, chewing Bill out did absolutely no good. Bill completely denied having any prior knowledge of Tom’s being in the class, and Tom had nothing to prove him wrong. Worse yet, the instructor’s words only helped to confirm Bill’s story. Tom had nothing to get him on. – awh poor Tom all angry and no evidence in is favor! Bill’s good!
“That’s…” Tom lifted his head and glared at Bill. “That’s not true. That’s not true, you lying little whore! You little fucker!” He curled his hands into fists. “This started with you! This is all your fault!” Bill was staring at him calmly, and his calm incited Tom’s rage all the more. “I’m not like you! I’m not fucking gay!” he screamed, slamming his fist into Bill’s face.
Bill stumbled back, hand to his cheek He winced, feeling the damage, but everything felt intact. Then he smiled coldly at Tom.
“That was good, Tom. I wasn’t expecting that.” He laughed harshly. “But it makes no difference. You are what you are. Just. Like. Me.” – dude I want to smack Bill around a little too and I love him!!!
These chapter feel soooooooooooo short! They aren't but they feel that way!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I can't write long chapters. And when I DO write a long chapter, I cut it in half to make it shorter! XD
Date: 02/24/09 09:54 am Title: Better (Or Worse) Than Pornography
Not only was Bill there. He was wearing one of the bathrobes worn by the models between classes.
“Shit,” swore Tom. Bill, a nude model? This wasn't happening. – ah ha ha ha
Hearing him, Bill turned, smiling at Tom. “Tomi,” he purred. “I didn't know you took this class.”
Like hell you didn't. Tom thought. This was beyond coincidence. If it had been anyone other than Bill, he might have believed it. But not Bill. When it came to Bill, there were no coincidences. - *giggles*
Bill had removed the bathrobe and was getting into position. Tom watched him. He hated to admit it, but God, Bill was beautiful. His black tattoos stood out starkly against his pale skin, and Tom wondered if they were supposed to draw those as well. He decided he would; it was the constant art- teacher mantra drilled into him from high school, “Draw what you see.” - *snickers*
Tom glanced up at Bill's face. He saw the tiniest flicker of a smirk, then it was gone.
Fuck. He knew. Bill knew exactly what he was doing to Tom. Of course he knew; he'd probably been watching for it, the little fucker. Worse than that, he wanted Tom to realize that he knew. He was pointing out the obvious fact that Tom had been trying to prove wrong: Tom was no match for Bill. – nope!
Suddenly, the meaning of his professor's words fully hit him. Favorite model? All the time?! Tom stopped dead.
This wasn't just a one- time deal. This was something Bill did regularly. Tom paled as the realization dawned on him.
He had just realized that he was going to have to draw a lot of nude pictures of Bill Kaulitz. – awh poor tomi!!!!
No you didn't describe his equipment *snakes head* Was there an easel? What was he sitting on? lol Well I think I'm funny!
Author's Response: XD I didn't even think of it that way. I suck at describing surroundings anyway, I always feel like they're extraneous unless relevant to the scene. So, no equipment was described at all. XD
Date: 02/24/09 09:42 am Title: Swirling Out Of Control
Fortunately for Tom, he soon discovered that Bill would not touch a sleeping body. Whether this was part of some honor code for sluts, or sleeping victims were simply no fun, made little difference to Tom. He soon became quite proficient at feigning sleep. – well that’s nice atleast!
He found himself returning more frequently to the dorm as the days passed, and it seemed to him that Bill was almost never there during the day. Tom viewed this as a very fortunate discovery, but in truth it was not, as it caused him to let his guard down. He began to expect to find the place empty, and it was this dangerous assumption that led to their next encounter. – dun-dun-ddduuuunnnnn!
“Hello, Mrs. Trümper? This is Tom's roommate, Bill. I'm sorry for the interruption, but Tom and I have to do naughty things together now. I'll have him call you back later, okay?” Before waiting for an answer, he hung up, smiling widely. Tom stared at him, utterly horrified. “Is that better? Now we can be alone.”
“Are you out of your fucking mind?” Tom whispered, still staring at Bill, wide- eyed. “You can't say shit like that to my mother!” – *covers face with hand* OMG!
“I...” Tom faltered, realizing that Bill was actually upset about the whole thing. “I'm sorry, Bill. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings.” - *confused expression* weird!
“Do you want some?” Bill whispered, running his fingers through the whipped cream again. Tom watched him, unable to respond, and Bill gently pressed his middle and ring fingers to Tom's lips. After a moment's hesitation, Tom took him in, his arguments and inhibitions fading as he lost himself in Bill's smoldering gaze.
The sweet of the cream mixed with the salt of Bill's skin, and Tom couldn't get enough of it. He sucked the fingers hungrily, hardly caring as he felt the pinkie and index swipe cream across his cheeks. The taste of Bill was intoxicating, and Tom felt a twinge of disappointment when the fingers were pulled away.
But then Bill was breathing in his ear and his tongue was on Tom's cheek, lapping up the excess cream there. Tom turned his head slightly, trying to lick the whipped cream left on Bill's face, wanting to taste the cream, wanting to taste Bill...
Their tongues met, and suddenly their lips were locked together again. There was a swirl of exciting flavors: the metallic tongue stud, the sweet cream, and the underlying taste that was simply Bill. There was a part of Tom that had wanted this, had longed for this again, and it took over with a ferocity that left him dizzy with desire. He slid his tongue over the tongue stud, finally able to feel it with his own tongue. He felt the tip of Bill's tongue flick his lip ring with curiosity. Tom ran his tongue over Bill's lower lip; God he wanted this so much, he wanted Bill so much... – OMG ok just so you know I haven’t been this affected/effected (I can never fucking remember but I’m pretty sure it both at this point!!!) by a kiss like EVER, you do understand I’m a prolific review which means I’ve read a shit ton!!! And reviewed a shit ton more!!! This kiss was SO FUCKING HOT!!! OMG OH MY GOD!!!
“I can't do this.” Tom gasped. “This is just wrong, I can't do it.”
Bill wiped the rest of the whipped cream off his midriff and licked it off his hand lazily.
“I didn't think you were ready yet.” He said nonchalantly.
Tom glared at him. “There is no 'yet'. I'm never going to be 'ready', because I'm not going to do this. I'm never going to do this.”
Bill looked up at him from under his heavily made- up lids.
“You will, Tomi.” he whispered. “You will.” – Bill’s words are very powerful here.
So OMG! @_@
Author's Response: Tom's mother and Bill do not mix. At all. XD 'affected' is the one you want. XD And my eyes are going to drop out of my skull at that comment. A good kind of eye-dropping, of course. Wow, I feel special for writing a kiss that could have such an effect on someone so well-read in such things! ^_^ Yeah, I like that line of Bill's. He's just so sure of himself, it's like, 'wow.' Glad you liked it! ^_^
Date: 02/24/09 09:21 am Title: In Hot Water
Have you ever seen him asleep?”
Georg thought a moment. “No, not that I can think of.”
“You slept with him, but you never saw him asleep?”
“I never said we did it in a bed.”
Tom was silent for a moment, trying to erase that image from his mind. – ha ha
“That's what I'm afraid of. I don't want to give him any encouragement. I don't want him to know I have pictures of him, that would just make things worse.”
Georg snickered. “So you wouldn't mind having them as long as he didn't know you had them?” - *gales of laughter*
“Why is it you always tell me 'No,' ” Whispered Bill. “Yet you never try to stop me?”
“I...” Tom faltered, he had no answer. No answer that he could admit to himself. – because logically he doesn’t want it but physically he can’t stop himself!
He considered using mouthwash; unsure of which he would rather give up: His dignity, or the taste of that silver tongue stud. – ha ah
Author's Response: Seems I made you laugh a lot with this chapter. XD
Date: 02/24/09 09:13 am Title: You Can't Resist Me
Well at this point we have potential SluttyBill and although he’s only made a brief appearance he’s been talked about for an entire chapter!
actions, ignoring Tom the entire time, because he knew the other boy wouldn't watch him unless he thought Bill didn't see him doing so. – ha ha clever bill
“I'm sorry, Tomi.” Bill moaned. Tom raised an eyebrow at his new nickname. “But those jeans were so tight, I had to get them off.” – OMG slutty slutty bill!!!!!!
“Tomi,” Bill breathed. “I love it when I touch myself...” He stroked his stomach again. “But I think I'd love it even more if you touched me.” - *grins*
“And remember, Tomi- For you to win, you have to resist me for the entire year. For me to win, I just have to fuck you once.” Bill smiled at Tom, and waltzed off to the bathroom. – yes very true!
He glanced over at his sleeping roommate. Even while asleep, Bill was incredibly sexy. His legs were tangled alluringly in the bedclothes, and his hand was resting on his stomach again. He was breathing evenly through slightly parted lips, and his long dark hair has sliding gently over his face. – nice you even get sleeping bill all sexy!
Fuck me, Tomi.” Bill hooked one of his legs around Tom's. “Fuck me, the way you know you want to.” He bit the side of Tom's neck and sucked gently. Tom let out a hiss, wishing this wasn't so pleasurable.
“No, Bill. For the last time, I am not going to fuck you. Now get off of me.”
Bill ran his tongue over the mark he had just made. “You don't sound terribly convincing.” Tom shivered as he felt the smooth metal of what was apparently a tongue stud. – I like this bit the control and the power play *shudders* delicious!
Author's Response: Yay for sexy sleeping SluttyBill. XD And power play, hehe... XD Makes it interesting.
Date: 02/24/09 09:01 am Title: Assumptions
“He’s a fucking little slut, that’s the problem.” – isn’t that the point of a slut to fuck? LOL
Tom laughed. “That doesn’t really bother me, Georg. I’m not gay.”
“You think that now. Wait until you meet him.” - *snorts* Bill Kaulitz confusing straight men and lesbians since 2001 ha ha ha
“In case you’ve forgotten, Georg, I’m not attracted to guys.”
“Neither am I.”
“Could have fooled me.” Tom laughed, and asked jokingly: “You didn’t sleep with this guy, did you?”
There was silence on the other end of the phone.
“I’ll see you in a week, Tom.” Georg said, and hung up. - *reels with laughter*
As his mother complained about the decline of the mail system – is this your mum or your dad?
“Of course, Mom.” Tom was glad that it took nearly a day to drive between the college and their house; it meant he wouldn’t be obligated to visit that often. Not that he didn’t love his mother, but sometimes she was easier at a distance. “I have to go now, okay?” – is this what you’re aiming for with college too??? lol
“You- you’re a boy?” – nice very SUBTLE!!!!
Two days - *breaks into snickers and then all out laughter*
Author's Response: lol, no, the college I'll be going to is only like 45 minutes away. So I can come home on weekends to use the washing machine and steal my parents' food... XD Teehee, glad I made you laugh! XP I try~
Date: 02/23/09 10:55 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
WHAT!? WHERE THE HECK IS THE NEXT BUTTON WOMAN?! Giiiiiirrrrrrl you better update soooooon! :P I'm thinking the lady is his mother, sister, aunt, or ex girlfriend. |nods| oh my,you should totally make it some random chick from like 711 or something! XD like him not even like her but her words just hurt him. |shrugs| I seriously can't wait for the next chapter, this is getting GOOOOOOD! ^^v
Author's Response: XP Next buttons are for noobs and people who actually update on time... >.> XD Chick from 7eleven, that would be hysterical, and I think would end up forcing SMRM into the realm of crackfic. XD Because no way could I write that seriously. But one of your other guesses was correct, just so you know. XP
Date: 02/23/09 02:55 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Wow, this story is addicting. I mean, I thought I'd read the first couple of chapters since I'd heard it was so good, but no way was I expecting this. This is just.. wow. It's so real, it's not just about the sex but your character's have actual emotions and feelings and the way Tom treats Bill just forces you to want to read more. This fic definitely does deserve a feature, rarely do I read a fic where I get so hooked so soon. This is brilliant, I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: Your review makes me super-happy. I can't even describe it. ^_^ I'm always really happy when people read this after hearing about it, and they're all like, "Okay, I'll try it..." kinda skeptical, you know? And then they're surprised to find that it's actually worth reading, and I'm like, "Yay!" XD
Date: 02/22/09 10:36 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
omg! that was fucking amazing!! (excuse my language, it was for lack of a better word) i almost cried after reading this chapter...it was sooo real.
Author's Response: That's okay, 'fucking' works, especially when talking about a story like this. XD I almost made you cry! Yay! XP
Date: 02/22/09 08:45 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
ahhh i wanna know who SHE is! hope u upload soon
Author's Response: Well, I'm keeping that secret for another few chapters... >.> XD
Date: 02/22/09 02:52 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Oh my GOD!! I want more soon! I'm really gona rip my pants off!! Oh shit oh GOD! I love this I mean really, this is so great! (:
Author's Response: Oh noes, a no- pants party? And I wasn't invited??? XD I'm glad you love it! ^_^
Date: 02/21/09 10:52 am Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Seduce Me, Resist Me has kept me hooked for weeks. This had got to be the best slash story I have ever read, EVER. You're writing technique is genius, you put so much passion and energy into the chapters. I really hope you get featured/get some kind of award because it's the least you deserve for providing this site with something which is worth reading. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I'm getting excited just thinking about it. I love the way you portray your characters in this fic. Slutty!Bill is my favourite, it makes me wish he was like that in real life ;) I hope you continue your great work in the future. Thank you for providing me a story which is so amazing!
Author's Response: Best EVER? Oh my God, thank you. On a site where almost everything is slash, that's a HUGE compliment, seriously. Well, no feature yet, but as of this response, SMRM is #5 on the Top Ten Tracked Stories list. They can't ignore me forever! XD No, kidding, they probably could. ._.; Oh well. ^_^;
Date: 02/20/09 02:16 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Loved it :D I didn't hate Bill last chapter at all O_O does that make me nutas xD I think Bill was soooooo REAl xD Well, because we could look into his head :P I really hope you continue soon!!!!!!!!!! And Tomi is the biggest sweetheart ^^
xx Chi!!!
btw-sorry for the late review :P
Author's Response: LOL, sorry for the late RESPONSE!!! And by the way, you can totally put that oneshot in DLS, I meant to email you before, but I kept forgetting. >< Yeah, Tomi is a sweetie, and he needs hugs. *hugs Tomi for being a sweetie*
Date: 02/19/09 08:40 pm Title: Mama's Boy
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *dead*
Author's Response: lol, oh noes, did I kill you? XD
Date: 02/19/09 05:19 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Heeeeeeeey :D
Sorry I didn’t come sooner but my computer was stupid so it went to fix. Anyway, I’m here now *-*
Chapter 13:
OMG Bill won! And they’ll have seeex (well, duuh –‘)
*keeps reading*
Uhm…Bill…you don’t need to hide your feelings goddamit. You don’t ewant Tom to only fuck you senseless –‘ You ant him to fuck you senseless, ok. But I know you want to cuddle and stay like that F-O-R-E-V-E-R 8D
*keeps reading*
Bill is impatient and I’m getting impatient too. I know, Tom, you want to kiss him and blablabla but honey, FUCK HIIIM ._.
‘’did you have a dick transplant with an elephant?’’ OMG I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS XD
Bill.is.stupid. if you don’t want newbs don’t let tom fuck you and go to someone you already fucked .|.
Ok, I love Bill now xD Bill is such a tease x’D
And wants Tom to beg (wooow) And Tom, woow, he really screamed Bill’s name *-* That makes me think of the origin of their song, scream *angel face* it really seems the song xD Like, Scream, till you feel it (…) yeah, that’s it.
OMG THAT’S SOMETHING I DIDN’T EXPECTED O.O Tom giving Bill a blowjob. WOOOOOOOW, he’s amazing. I bet it was Bill’s best fuck 8D
Ok, this: Bill did not cuddle, especially after sex.
Bill can start cuddling, because we are talking about TOM for god’s sake o.o
BILL, GO BACK TO BED AND CUDDLE WITH TOM OR EITHER I’LL KILL YOU SOOOO SLOWLY AND PAINTFULLY “.” Instead or waisting time being stupid and cruel with Tom and then cry in the shower (nice place o cry btw xD) you could go CUDDLE with the guy you fell in love *-* But you are stupid –‘
OMG BILL KAULITZ STP BEING A JEEEEEEEERK GOD DAMIT YOU ARE GETTING ON MY NERVES “.” STOP LYING TO YOURSELF AND TO TOOOOM ;______________;
That’s it, iĞm gonna kill Bill ò.ó You are the most jerk peson I’ve ever ‘’known’’
IT’S NOT BETTER THAT WAY YOU BITCH ._. GO AND TELL HIM WHAT YOU FEEL AND STOP BEING A FUCKEEEER T__T
Ok, after all this frustration,
Chapter 14 (I really hope I don’t scream as much as I screamed in the end of 13th ._.)
OH GOD TOM WILL GET REVENGE! I’M SO FUCKIN’ HAPPY RIGHT NOW! (i just read the author’s note and I’m happy, I guess in this one iĞll scream from happiness *-*)
Hey, Bill don’t die ok? I hate you but I still love you (weird, but it’s like those love-hate relationships ^^)
And yes, you are really alive and I want you to tell Tom you love him T___T (I don’t know why, but today I feel very romantic –‘)
Tom, of course Bill loves somebody. He loves you *-* you need to tell him too ;_;
OMG Bill fuck you. You are such a fucking bitch you jerk, I’m so hating you right now o.o a puppy? Who the hell you think you are? God? Fuck you –‘
WAAAAAAAAAAAIT A MINUTEEEEEEEEEEE. BOOOOY TOM SLAPPED HIM? OMFG I SO LOVE HIM RIGHT NOW *-* Tom’s the best 8D How can Bil laugh at this point? He really is insane.
Wait, what? That sentence didn’t make sense and I’m confused as fuck. What or who is her? Pain? He can deal with pain, and Tom can, too? Ooook, you need to explain this.
And yeah, this is it.
See yaaa**
Author's Response: Yep, no cuddling, sorry. I'll make them cuddle eventually... >.> "instead or waisting time being stupid and cruel with Tom and then cry in the shower (nice place o cry btw xD) you could go CUDDLE with the guy you fell in love *-* But you are stupid " I love that line, that makes me giggle and squee. XD And yeah, I am totally not making them admit they love each other, mwahahahaha! 'Cause then the story would be over... ._.; No, it's not pain, it's an actual person. XP
Date: 02/19/09 04:24 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
Wow... I haven't reviewed for a while, I'm so SO monumentally sorry! I LOVE this! It's so brilliantly written, and there are twists and turns everywhere you look!
My guess is that "she" is a former girlfriend, or a verbally abusive mother? Hm. I really can't wait to find out, though. This is outstanding!
Author's Response: Haha, it's okay, I'm totally behind on my review responses! XD And yay for twists and turns! Nope, not a former girlfriend or verbally abusive mother. And yay! It's outstanding! *dances*
Date: 02/19/09 03:17 pm Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
hmmmmm okay lol NOW im really hooked. let me see.. . old girlfriend? Mother figuer? sister? some one who betrayed him and ruined his trust in u know, commiting?
Author's Response: Crap, it took me 14 chapters to get you *really* hooked? Must be losing my touch... XD One of your guesses was correct, not gonna tell you which one, nyah~! XD