Date: 03/04/09 11:41 am Title: Someone So Wonderful
*smiles* This chapter was great and I think it's my favorite.
Date: 03/04/09 11:36 am Title: Pretty, Little, Broken Puppet
His mom?
And I don't hate Bill.
Author's Response: No, not his mom, and I'm glad you don't hate Bill, because he's not really that bad. ^_^;
Date: 03/04/09 11:29 am Title: Game Over?
The sex scene was amazing. And then Bill had to hurt Tom. Everyone can see he loves Tom and yet the part that holds Bill won't let him. *reads on*
Author's Response: Yep, Bill's a little bitch like that. XD I'm glad you liked the sex scene, I get nervous writing stuff like that. XD
Date: 03/04/09 06:55 am Title: Someone So Wonderful
Hmmmmm. *taps chin*
So, Bill is agreeing to 'start something' with Tom, eh? O_O I can't wait to see how that works out ;)
Maybe Tom can help him a bit. I felt kinda sorry for him in this one =]
Date: 03/03/09 08:56 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
oh i just love this story. your writing style is fantastic, slutty bill is simply adictive and his nasty little games are simply tasty. i do hope you update soon. kisses xx
Date: 03/02/09 07:09 pm Title: Assumptions
huh....i knew something didnt look right XD oh and my computer screen says its ok XD
Author's Response: Good to know. XD
Date: 03/01/09 09:02 pm Title: You Might As Well Be Guilty
Awwww, SluttyBill has a cute side. :D
Author's Response: Indeed he does. ^_^
Date: 03/01/09 08:54 pm Title: Mama's Boy
OMG, jaw drop!!!
Author's Response: LOL, yay! XD
Date: 03/01/09 08:39 pm Title: You Can't Resist Me
lol, I LOVE SluttyBill! Can he come and stay with me? Just kidding, but I really like him. :D
Author's Response: XD Would you WANT him to come stay with you? He kinda has... empathy issues? Or something?
Date: 03/01/09 04:16 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
Awww.. I just love this
Date: 02/27/09 05:42 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
This story is so deceptive >_< I can't decide whether Tom actually meant what he said or it's somehow part of his revenge...hopefully not the latter, he has to be the sweet one :3
And I really like the twins personas in this story - your Tom is adorable and your Bill is fierce.
Date: 02/26/09 04:32 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
Aww, loved this chapter. :D Oh and I would have never guessed it was Tom thinking the last line, lol Awesome work, keep it up :) :P
Date: 02/26/09 10:41 am Title: Someone So Wonderful
Another good part! AAAAAAAHHH *moregasm* teheh x]
Date: 02/26/09 01:55 am Title: Someone So Wonderful
I'm actually really, really enjoying this. Sometimes I feel you might be overdramatizing Bill's dilemma but then you make it believable and I fall in love all over again. Great work!!
Date: 02/26/09 12:51 am Title: Everyone Does
omg I'm going to kill you!!!
(it's a joke DO NOT take it personally)
I love it, you were right - of course you wrote the damn story at first I didn't like Bill, but the last line of this chapter KILLED ME :p
Author's Response: It's okay, I get lots of death threats. XD And hehe, I make you hate Bill, then I make you like him, then hate, then like... Readers are fun. XD
Date: 02/25/09 10:35 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
I don't know but this question popped into my mind while reading (and it still remains an enigma): Is Tomi plotting revenge? *cue dramatic music*. Wow. Another great chapter. seriously can't wait for the next.
Date: 02/25/09 10:34 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
wow..this is really sad..but also amzingly written.
Date: 02/25/09 09:51 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
uhh they seemed a bit ooc O.O but whatever haha at least tom knows bill likes him a little XD
Date: 02/25/09 08:07 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
LOL...Its a good chapter can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: Neither can I! First I gotta write it, though... XD
Date: 02/25/09 07:03 pm Title: Someone So Wonderful
Awww. When Tom spoke I expected Bill to be all "*spazz* what are you doing here?"
lol
Oooh, just what is it that Bill thinks will make him happy?
Author's Response: He was more surprised in the original, but part of me has to wonder if maybe Bill knew Tom was there the whole time. So I left it up to the readers to decide.