Date: 04/10/12 06:40 am Title: scared
this was a really good story!
Date: 05/24/09 05:56 pm Title: scared
This story is really good. It is kind of 'sad' at the beginning, but later there is so much love and a really great, happy ending :-)
Author's Response: Awww thank you
Date: 01/19/09 02:37 pm Title: scared
Bleh, I don't like the Jonas Brothers XD
But anyway, great story! :D
Really, it's just too cute what Tom would do for Bill [and actually did]. ^^
You rock. :D
Author's Response:
i dont like j-bro either but i thought it would be funny if they had a incestous relationship
we all kno how much tomi loves his billa bear :PXD
thanks for reveiwing
Date: 01/17/09 11:12 am Title: scared
aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i luv it the nick and joe part was funni
Author's Response: thanks ryan :)♥
Date: 01/17/09 01:31 am Title: scared
i loved it so much it was really good but the nick and joe part kind of killed the mood for me lol and i'm not at all surprise that he was found not guilty it happens more then you know =
Author's Response: thanks im sorry the nick and joe part killed for you, yeah i need him not to be found guilty so tom could kill him
Date: 01/15/09 04:05 pm Title: scared
Really good =) Loved it!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much :)
Date: 01/14/09 11:16 pm Title: scared
You make me happy, nothing like a creative murder and some romance to get the night going XD And the end made me giggle a lot. this was an AMAZING one shot and i love you for writing it XD XD
Author's Response:
thank you so much for revewing ,im glad i made you happy,,,,hmmm i didnt think of my story as amazing till right now i just wrote it when i was depressed and decide to put my emotions on a peice of paper then the idea of this hit me the rape part happen to two of my bestest friends this story is dedicated to them the other things are all jus work of my mind
but anyways thanks for revewing i loved you story "Escape" it was amazing :)
Date: 01/14/09 10:57 pm Title: scared
I liked it until the part about Simone being totally calm even though you tried to defend (for lack of better words) what was going on at that time. I felt like you went too far, that it should have ended before the two months later part. It took away from the gravity and yet hopefulness of the story.
Author's Response:
omg thank you so much for reveiwing
ok now you think i should have end it before the two months i jus wanted the reader to know about bill and how he was doing ,and in my story incest is accepted anywhere so that why simone was clam about it.
i guess my writing isnt the best i just started writing and im only 14