Date: 06/24/10 07:57 am Title: The weather's changing
Aww you promised you'd finish this! this is great please update and don't be late that's something I hate
Date: 01/22/09 12:55 pm Title: The weather's changing
Aww, hell, you can't just leave it like that!!! *pout* I need to know what happens next... update soon please?
Date: 12/02/08 01:32 am Title: The weather's changing
i hope you didnt abandone this, because i would love to read more. its so interesting so far, please update again soon.
Date: 05/21/08 10:20 am Title: The weather's changing
please continue already
Date: 12/15/07 08:42 am Title: The weather's changing
plllsss write some more=)
Date: 12/14/07 11:09 am Title: The weather's changing
more
but i don't get it
they are not brothers?
Date: 12/14/07 08:46 am Title: How it became
omg you should definitely keep going on please write new chapter asap!!!
Date: 12/12/07 06:11 pm Title: The weather's changing
Yay!..Cant wait for the next chapter =DDD
Date: 12/12/07 07:56 am Title: How it became
i love it please write new chapter asap
Date: 12/11/07 06:59 am Title: How it became
Tom is Bills friend or Bills brother i got a bit mixed up...
nice story though..i liked it..
Author's Response: im sorry this isnt clear.. Bill and Tom are friends, i shall make it mmore obvious in the next chapter. though thanx for the rreview graace xrn
Date: 12/11/07 02:02 am Title: The difference between a Lover and Jake
Oh poor Bill!! This is good, please update soon I want to know what happens!
Author's Response: i shall update tommorow promise x
Date: 12/11/07 01:19 am Title: The difference between a Lover and Jake
*cries* my poor baby
*hugs Bill* i'm here now.... *glares at Jake* you are one dead man when i find you that's for sure! or if Tom finishes you off, either way you're dead
but i love the story i really do, please update soon... *stares at screen till you update*
::cookie::
Author's Response: aww cute name can i say? erm promise the update tommorow night.. and shall make it longer too x
Date: 12/11/07 12:04 am Title: The difference between a Lover and Jake
Okay, I'm confused but I'm hooked. What is Tom doing? And who is Tom to Bill in this story? I NEED TO KNOW!!!! *sigh* great job by the way. I gotta know... *mutters to herself crazily*
Author's Response: ermm Tom's coming into Bills house everynight and sleeping with him because he knows somethings up (as friends) but Bill likes him more then just friends the rest shall be explained later on.rngraace xrn
Date: 12/09/07 07:28 pm Title: How it became
Okay, I don't quite get it, but I'm sure that the next chapter will shed some light on the situation. It was very descriptive and you had a lot of british idioms, so I'm going to guess that you're british. ;P
Author's Response: well hopefully it'll be clearer in the next chapter, this was kinda like a prelude. And oui je suis Anglais (thats about all the french i know) thanx
Date: 12/09/07 05:24 pm Title: How it became
It's different, I like it!
Author's Response: thankx
Date: 12/09/07 03:42 pm Title: How it became
Tom is his brother here right??
This is pretty sweet...so keep going please! ;)
Author's Response: no, there friends sorry if i didnt explain it right, but shall update tonight x
Date: 12/09/07 03:14 pm Title: How it became
Aww, this is really sweet. Please update soon!
Author's Response: wow thankyou i shall update tonight x
Date: 12/09/07 03:08 pm Title: How it became
Awh. For some reason, at the start i thought it would be bill crawling on the window ledge. This was cute, update soon yeah?
Author's Response: wow thats really odd 'cus it was going to be Bill, phycik mind. (cant spell) i shall update tonight xrn