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Reviewer: kashpower Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you

OMG..!!! hehe...i so love this!!!

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you! Just wait it gets very wrong very quickly! *grins*

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

omg you're right haha

Author's Response: I'm twisted, I know XD

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 06:50 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

I really enjoyed the story. It is nothing how I imagined it would be, it was so much better.

I absolutely loved the twist, more like two twist because I didn't expect for Bill to suddenly take part in what Tom does.

Seriously, awesome story. I enjoyed every single part of it. I finished the story and I can't stop thinking of the twist, so awesome.

Author's Response: *smiles* thank you! It is nothing how I imagined it would be, it was so much better. - well thank you that's quite a complement! I was almost like two twists but more a follow though of the "damage" that Tom had already done to Bill. I'm so glad that you enjoyed every single part of it! That's really cool to hear it!

Reviewer: LYNgo85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/09 06:13 am Title: Chapter 21 Explanations

OMG what a twist. At first I had the thought that it might be Tom when Bill was describing the gentle touches but I quickly dismiss the thought. I am so shocked right now. I actually cried with this chapter because even though it is not an excuse Tom had a rough life. Being molested at the of six, poor Tom. So great chapter, I still can't believe it was Tom, I can't stop thinking about it. I am curious to see if Tom and Bill will meet again and if Bill will confront him.

Author's Response: *bows* Thank you, I'm very proud of my twist. That was the purpose to give you all ideas and make you question the story but you of course understood it from Bill's POV so you only understood it as far as Bill did. No it's not an excuse but it's a reason why he's the way he is. And you get it, just like Bill did.

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:49 pm Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

daaaamn :D this really was an awesome story. i cant believe tom did all of that crap haha im still grinning like an idiot though haha

Author's Response: I know it's all twisted right. And the best part, the part that proves how weird and twisted I am is that even at the end, even when you know everything that Tom has done you still love him and you still want Bill and Tom together. And you're happy when Tom comes to get him!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:44 pm Title: Epilogue part one - Please

nice, so is that how tom got gustav and georg to help him out?

Author's Response: *grins* yeah.

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime

omg omg :O you serious?! haha

Author's Response: yup I'm serious *grins* make sure you read the oneshots they add to the story!

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explanations

yep, i knew it! hahaha but damn, cant wait to read bill's reaction :D

Author's Response: You knew? Some people figure it out, most don't. His reaction is unexpected. *grins*

Reviewer: Yin8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

no i dont have any nails left! D: my god! lol

Author's Response: lol sorry! It just gets worse.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

It was good to...

Author's Response: *giggles* Well then thank you.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

actually it was really more captivating I think that is the word yeah CAPTIVATING!!I read because i have no life............. SERIOSLY!  right now I dont. uh.. your welcome.

Author's Response: Um...so you read it not because it was good but because you had nothing better to do...hum?! *winks* Captivating huh? well yes that was my goal. *giggles* Thanks again.

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/09 05:13 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

I finally finished reading it... I missed so much O.O and WOW I never saw that but yeah I like the ending its odd its creepy I dont even get why i read it but whatever I loved the story it was so creepy and fully catchyness. =D

Author's Response: It's not odd and creepy...it's just *shrugs* not a traditional "happy ending" but I never promised a happy ending. You're not sure why you read it? hum? I usually read stories that are good, are well written or interesting. Well either way I'm glad you read it to the end and were at least interested enough to finish it. Thanks for reading <3

Reviewer: anorexia_damn Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 07:25 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

oh mein Gott...it's brain washing...
You have my word-every next fan fiction you wright will be readen from me ^^
I secretly hope its something Bill/Jorg/Tom :::::::::::::)

Author's Response: Yes Stockholm’s Syndrome is basically brainwashing. I'm not sure Tom knows that's what it's called but he's a pretty smart cookie so he might know the name of it. Wow I have a stalker? Awh!! That's so cute! Are you French? I drive fast can you keep up with my car? Just try to not take too many bad pictures of me!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 09:01 pm Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

wow...wat a fucked up fic..but thx..it was good=]

Author's Response: Yup fucked up! *grins* glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: XRealityUnknownX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/09 05:37 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

and the pattern continues... all over again... *sigh* tomi is such a good actor. really. *g* i shall nao good read the one-shots cuz i haven;t read them yet... and finally, i must say...
CONGRATS! YOU MIND-FUCKED US WELL AND THROUOGH THE ENTIRE WAY THROUGH!
i do believe i needed crutches at one point. mind fuck...
*breaks into song* SHE IS THE MIND-FUCK, THERE IS NO REALITY, JUST THIS WORLD OF ILLUSION THAT KEEPS ON HAUNTING ME! MIND FUCK! MIND FUCK! MIND FUCK! i sure as hell wasn't ready...

wow... i had a moment... *smile*
and nao i shall go cry in a corner cuz there is no more *sobs*

byeee...
mind fuck...
god i love that word... and this fic... *favourites*

Author's Response: Yup all over but after they'll go to the Maldives and have fun in the sun. oh The oneshots are fun! Hope you had a good time there! *grins* Thanks I tried hard to fuck eveyone's minds, I think in general I was sucessful *grins* lol I get a song. What about a chorus line? lol Awh! Don't cry I might write a new oneshot here or there. And there will be other fics that you will love too!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 01:08 pm Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

Oh God. That is so wrong. This relationship is so wrong. But I loved the story. Oh dear, just...so wrong.

Author's Response: So wrong! But you still love Tom and Bill...and you're trying to love Kris, but it's just too early *grins* I'm glad you loved it! I loved getting your messages. *grins*

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 11:11 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

Wow. I do not usually like stories where Bill and Tom are bad guys, or whatever. But this was so well written, and I was already so in love with the characters, that even with how it turned out, I still love the story. I was totally shocked though. It never occurred to me that tom might be involved. great job, i cant wait to see what else you have written/ will write. keep up the great work! =)

Author's Response: They aren't bad guys...ok yeah they are but they aren't out to destroy the world just make it kink up a bit. I know *giggles* by the time the twist came around you loved Tom so much that you were confused instead of angry. *ducks* It was the point. I wanted an evil Tom but I wanted everyone to still love him even if he was evil. I made it very difficult to hate him. He was sweet to Bill, he had a tragic past, he wasn't evil to be evil it was because of his tragic past. And he really did love Bill which was the hardest part to convey. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SarahCupcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 03:32 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

This was such a good story, I wish I had followed it a bit more during your writing process. But I still felt the anticipation for a new chapter when I was getting closer to the end of one.

By the way, your story reminds me A LOT of the movie Captivity. but you put your own twist on it and I actually like it way better! :)
Flippin awesome!!!

Author's Response: Well you read it and enjoyed it never the less. I always find author notes intersting, to know what they were thinking at the time they wrote the story. It's like a time capsule. I've never seen the movie Captivity. If I mirrored the plot, no wonder you figured it out. You like mine better *grins* thank you! I like it too!

Reviewer: SarahCupcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/09 02:58 am Title: Chapter 21 Explanations

okay..I've been reading this story, like really reading it today, and I have to say, this is so awesome.
plus I also have to say I knew it. XP

Author's Response: You knew it?! What gave Tom away? Or did I try too hard make it so that he wasn't the bad guy that I made it obvious that he was the bad guy? I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/09 11:53 pm Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…

WOW. this was an amazing story, completely unique and has a very surprising, but somehow satisfying [barely x] ending LOL completely different from what i expected (ill be honest :D) cant wait for more stories!!

Author's Response: Amazing? *blushes* Thank you! I was hoping for unique and surprising. And a reasonably satisfying ending. Something that tied up loose ends and let you know that everything was all right. I'm glad I was able to surprise you.

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