Date: 11/05/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
I'm sorry for you Bill (actually I'm not) but this situation between you and Tom won't disappear and I hope it will go further. No rush, no rush.
Author's Response: lol not to worry it will go much further!!! It will get very messy and naughty and then it will get worse.
Date: 11/05/09 12:50 am Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
I'm so glad Tom came back. Bill's thoughts are so well described that I actually feel like I'm him.
Author's Response: Thank you, that is a lovely complement!
Date: 11/05/09 12:30 am Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
You're lucky that your story is so captivating cus i usually can't stand abuse of any kind. I like the way Bill care about Tom.
Author's Response: *chuckles* It will only get worse. But it gets worse on both accounts, more violence and more love between Bill and Tom. *grins*
Date: 11/03/09 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I know but I hate when Bill is hurt, but i liked the thrill of the story.
Author's Response: There will be lots of hurt in this story! Just wait.
Date: 11/03/09 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I think i'm as stressed as Bill each time the trap opened.
Author's Response: Good you're supposed to be worried. But if you'll notice there is no major character death so you don't have to worry about Bill or Tom kicking the bucket. They'll make it out of the story alive.
Date: 11/02/09 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 6 Just another day
i'm sure this situation won't last.
Author's Response: Nope it gets more dramatic.
Date: 11/02/09 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
I like the way Bill analyse every single details.
Author's Response: What else can he do? All he has is time to think. And I think Bill is that kind of person he sees things and broods over them.
Date: 11/02/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
Thank you, I didn't know the amenagement of the room. I feel a bit silly right now.
Author's Response: It will be talked about later but I'm glad you asked.
Date: 11/02/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
Bill doesn't know where he is, he doesn't for how long he've been there but he knows where to pee.
Author's Response: Well there's a toilet in the room. They've got a bed, a sink, a toilet, and a mystery quarter circle and that's it. I think most people can tell a toilet when they see one.
Date: 11/02/09 12:19 am Title: Chapter 3 Reden
Is confusing but I like it. That's making me read the next chapter. Why Tom can talk English??
Author's Response: Oh good, it's supposed to be confusing. Good, I'm glad you're interested. He's not allowed to speak English.
Date: 11/02/09 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2 Awake for good this time.
Okay, if I understand well this story is Bill POV, so English is German.
Author's Response: You are right on both counts. English is German and German is English.
Date: 11/01/09 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
Ouch, what a beginning!! They are in pretty bad position, but who's who?
Author's Response: You'll find out. You're supposed to be confused in the beginning. You'll sort it out soon.
Date: 08/23/09 10:55 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…
Holy hell, this was...x__x this is one of the most unique stories i have ever read. great job
Author's Response: Wow Thank you! I'm very, very proud of Captive. At the moment it's my THFF opus! I loved writing it! I loved getting the reactions of my reader and friends. It was really fun to fuck with people's minds! Thanks so much for the comment!
Date: 07/16/09 01:51 pm Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…
i love this story to much for it to be a good thing...
Author's Response: *grins* well thank you!
Date: 07/16/09 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explanations
omfg wow that was...wow, i cant believe it! one question tho, sence what chappy have you been planing this!? you know whats really sad? even tho now i know this, i still want to see them together in the end. i guess im hopeing you'll make bill change him.
Author's Response: I told you it was going to get worse. *grins* I also had that warning from Koos and ImNu that it would be a mind fuck! *grins* I had been planning before I ever started the entire story! It was the master plan. It was also the master plan that you would want them to be together...*giggles* go read the companion oneshots that go with this story it will add to everything!
Date: 07/16/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter 20 Freedom
u r fucking with my mind!!! god were is he!!!!
Author's Response: *giggles* you'll see! It's only going to get worse!
Date: 06/30/09 02:26 am Title: Epilogue part two - The pattern continues…
that was...that was a MINDFUCK, THAT'S WHAT IT WAS.
MINDFUCK!
That being said, it was AMAZING and the mindfuckyness is a good thing. Although really, MY MIND HAS BEEN FUCKED OVER. SOOOOOOO MUCH.
In a good way, I believe. Really, I should have seen this coming! :) That's a compliment. You and ImNu have similar mindfuckyness abilities, which is SO why I should have seen it coming, and I didn't, for some reason.
AMAZING.
And if that made ANY sense, pat yourself on the back. Right now.
Author's Response: *giggles* everyone should have seen it coming! I totally warned everyone! I gave hints and everything. But I did the old: look at this hand I've got something shiny, but I'm doing something different with my other hand. IE the storyline, the building of the relationship between Bill and Tom, the big bad boys upstairs. The two big fucks were Tom and the door with the loud lock. Thanks sweets! I am very proud of Captive.
Date: 06/13/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 21 Explanations
omg...i knew it....awwwwwww but actually i feel o fucking sorry fot TOM...poor tommy!
Author's Response: *giggles* congratulations! Don't feel too bad for him. *bounces* now you can read the oneshots and find out more details. XD
Date: 06/12/09 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explanations
LOL, I was right! XD I win. I love the police reports, though, it makes reading this feel like I'm playing Silent Hill. And Silent Hill is awesome. XD
Author's Response: *giggles* I did my best to throw you off the trail! The police reports took weeks to write! *giggles* By proxy you just called my fic awesome *blushes* thank you!
Date: 06/12/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explanations
That is depressing :( it kinda makes me not want to read anymore, but I have to understand... So I shall continue . :)
Author's Response: Awh don't be depressed. It will get better! It's twisted and a little happy. It will end ok I promise!