Jesus girl! I don't know how you didn't confuse the hell out of yourself with the languages! that was truly smart. I only speak two languages and I feel so confused sometimes.

Let's start! first, when I saw this story and the summary I was like "Wow, nice, I've got to read this" But I made the stupid mistake of reading some of the reviews just out of curiosity of what people was saying and for my bad luck I found out what the 'Twist' was so I was like "Fuuuck" But well. Also this story sounded somewhat familiar to me, when I saw that review and all I saw clearly, I'm not sure if you know what I'm talking about, but there's already a movie with almost the same plot, so I was like "I'm reading it, but I know what would happen..." So here I am, it took me two days to finish it, and even when I thought what it was going to happen, it still surprised me. I read everything, even the one-shots. So the only thing left I want to say is conratulations, it was so exciting to read this, I woulnd't share Bill or Tom haha but if the story is that way, that's it. :D Thank you!

Author's Response: The language thing wasn't meant to trip people up but some how it did more then it was supposed to. *shakes head* Naughty girl you found out the twist and ruined it for yourself...*shakes head and sighs* I'm glad you read it any way and I'm a very pleased that you liked it. I've been told that there's a movie much like the plotline I wrote but I've never been able to find it. Is it as good or better then what I wrote? I'd like to own it if I could. This story was loads of fun to write and I learned how to write a sex scene from it, which was a very nice skill to have. Thanks again for reading and thanks for letting me know your thoughts.

This story is like an enigma to me. I don't know if I like it or not, and I don't mean in a bad way. It makes me think and I put it in my favorites but I don't know if I can read it again. Hard to explain what I mean, you know?

I have a problem with Kris. I think Tom should be only with Bill. But it's your story and I can only whine ;) He is not a bad guy but Bill and Tom, Tom and Bill.

xx

Author's Response: I love this story and I like it all very much. But I know what you mean about liking a story but not being able to reread it. I have stories like that in my favorites too, ones that were very powerful but I'm not sure I can relive the emotions. I can understand getting attached to the idea of just Bill and Tom. But if you remember it was Tom/Gus/Geo before and Bill was the intruder in their world. I don't think that Tom can be satisfied with just one. That it just isn't enough for him. That he needs more, that once he feels safe the power dynamic that he feels isn't there for him. That he can love Bill but he needs to feel more powerless and more people, strange people, new people makes him feel more powerless. He's this mess of a human that needs to be powerless to feel powerful. You read the psychologist report, there's a lot that explained in it. - Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and favoriting it does mean a lot to me.

I still can't believe that Tom does that on purpose and enjoying it, but it's all he knows how could he act differently.

Author's Response: He's broken but he doesn't know he is. So instead he gets others to fit into his broken world because that's the only thing that makes sense to him. I recommend reading the oneshots. There's a section that is all from Tom's perspective. He's not an awful guy he's just more twisted and broken then the average person. But he really and truely loves Bill!

First, I thought it was impossible, there have to be a mistake somewhere, that can't be Tom. If I think of it, that make sense, I understand the bath now. That mean he's "the third one".

Author's Response: *giggles* yes well there you go there's the amazing twist...well most of it. If you think about it a lot more makes sense too. Yup Tom is "the third one".

Good, they reached the outside!! That was thrilling!!

Author's Response: Thank you! That was the only action scene I've ever written. ha ha I think someone is totally addicted!

That's a good scene, I hope the one upstrairs will agree with me, maybe it was their goal.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. And yes it was part of their goal, but it's not just as it seems.

Yeah, they kissed!! It's good to have a fluff chapter.

Author's Response: Got to have a little fluff here and there, but only a little!

Wow, you're fast!!!

Author's Response: Is that a complement or an insult? *winks*

And he had been used by Tom too.

Author's Response: Yes you are very right *grins*

I know you do that on purpose but this is really confusing. Why they "gently" bath Bill but beat up Tom.

Author's Response: lol Your confusion is adorable! Yes it is all on purpose, yes it is meant to confuse you, yes it is a mess! lol