Date: 04/08/09 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 Good morning
OMG that was wonderful. you should try that again...
Author's Response: Not to worry. I there will be more scenes in the future...I'm not sure on the details yet...I guess will both find out...but be sure that there will be at least one sex scene...*wicked grin* probably more.
Date: 04/05/09 03:39 am Title: Chapter 6 Just another day
Awww poor Bill. Ending up in such a horrible place. And Tom... Poor him for being there in the first place.
I am curious to see how this story enfolds. Hope you'll send me more soon!
Author's Response: Yea! I love my new beta!
Date: 04/05/09 03:30 am Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
I was just going to read one chapter, but here I am on chapter 4 already!
I wasn't going to review until the end, because I'm not very good with writing long reviews, as you know, but being a linguist something hit me in this chapter and I just had to point it out:
German is not a Latin-based language. It is a Germanic language, as is Dutch, and French, Italian and Spanish are Romanic (Latin-based). English is a mix of both, though mostly Romanic.
However, they all have the same root, which is Indo-European. That's why some words are similar in both Romanic and Germanic languages, because they have existed since before Romanic and Germanic languages came to be.
Haha it may seem like such a little thing to point out, but I love languages and I like knowing where they come from. Also, speaking a Germanic language natively myself, I feel it's important not to forget us! :P
Anyway, I am going to continue reading now, because your story is very exciting, and I look forward to betaing more!!
Author's Response: It's kind of amazing that I've made my own beta addicted to a story she's beta-ing *grins*
Date: 04/04/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 6 Just another day
like that you used pictures and words to start their communication skill. and I feel so heartbroken when Tom just gets excited over little things just makes you wonder what he has gone through the whole time he was there. I get an bad feeling whenever the door opens I'm just waiting for the captures to take one of them away and torture them they been silent too long it seems. and Bill brings up good points to way he's their with Tom, I always think that the captures are experimenting with how two people react and socialize with all the obstacles they have. And I also think that they are manipulating something big as well. It's like they want them to start a relationship with the bed and helping them communicated. oh well this is just all in my head but Tom is just full of mystery and so is this place.
Author's Response: I'm glad that I'm affecting you. That makes me very proud. I've never thought that I was really that effective...it's nice to get a review where someone explains their own feelings. I'm leading you in the right direction but is it the correct direction or misdirection?! You will see eventually *grins* No it is not in your head that Tom is full of mystery...he's supposed to be, he'll learn more language soon enough and you'll get some answers and then...we'll you'll see some twists are headed your way.
Date: 02/23/09 03:18 am Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
I'm reading this!!
I really, really like this!
It's so sweet.
:))
But poor them, still.
:((
Hope you update soon, love!
Author's Response: Yes LMCR I know you are *snickers* I'm glad you really love this, that's super cool. *nods* I know poor them...but then again I have no guilt for them as I'm the one doing this to them, oh and I connect more with Tom's character then Bill's *grins* despite it being Bill's POV. That's a hint for the future. *grins* I'll update when ImNu sends it over and not a minute later...and if you like this then have you read: anything that ImaginaryNumbers has written? she's more graphic then I am but she's way into torture and her stories are AMAZING!!!, also, Shackles & Chains by Drank-It-Up her is also a held captive story all be it more graphic then mine again.
Date: 02/21/09 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
keep it comin! i wanna know where this story is goin!?
Author's Response: It's still being beta-ed. I'll post it when it's ready, I always do.
Date: 02/20/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
like the enternal dialogue of bill's. the readers got to know more about his life and personality. I see that this situation is hard for him but he starting to think about tom as well. this was a informative chapter into bill. I would love to know more about tom too. but I think that will have to be later since the story is in bill's perspective.
Author's Response: You are awesome!!!! Thank you for the feed back! I really appreciate your honest comments!!!! Yes when Tom learns to speak German then we'll get more from him!
Date: 02/18/09 11:25 am Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
Sorry I couldn't send you any thoughts on this chapter! I was away w/o internet! Sorry. It's good though, informative and building on your idea.
Author's Response: Thanks for the thought! Now go and read the chaps I send you now that you clearly have internet.
Date: 02/16/09 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
keep it comin!
Author's Response: workin on it!
Date: 02/16/09 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
I never heard that reviews are never necessary that's a great thing to say not necessarily begging for reviews to finish but you still find them rewarding.
so the way you write this story reminds me of the two people locked in the room in SAW. and just like you do we get little clues to indicate why he woke up their and what they have to do with eachother. why were they picked. so I really like that you wrote this story like a suspense thriller. each time you wonder if they will ever escape their captivity.
Author's Response: *smiles shyly* Thank you. I think that they aren’t necessary that if you really love a story you write it but comments are always good! But people who take the time to write them get love and cookies their way!***To be compared to saw is soooo cool! I’m definitely going for the suspense thing. I’m going for the comfort in routine and boredom and then wham! Shit’s going to happen…and then fun, you’re going to swear at me tiwsts will happen at the end! *crosses fingers* I just hope it all goes well and doesn’t suck! But ImNu and Hekki both like it and I trust them to tell me if I’m fucking it up…but if you see anything that raises a red flag you let me know!!!!
Date: 02/09/09 12:06 am Title: Chapter 3 Reden
Interesting, to say the least. Now I wanna know what the deal is...
Author's Response: *smiles* not going to know for a while!
Date: 02/08/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 3 Reden
I like it a lot, I wish I knew more though. Bill's important by default, he'll be missed eventually, they'll need to get him back. And Tom will be found after that. I don't understand though. The context, why this is happening. I want answers!
Author's Response: I'm proud that you like it a lot! ImNu likes it a lot too! So now I have two people who like it a lot! *grins* I know you want to know more that's kind of the point of a suspense story you want to know more but you don't get to know until later. *grins more* I'm sure that Bill will be missed but we won't find out until maybe later because this is of course from Bill's POV. I'm driving you nuts *puffs out chest* I'm so proud!
Date: 02/08/09 02:07 am Title: Chapter 3 Reden
wow forgot about this story been so long.
well glad that bill and tom are trying to communicate already there's progress. tom's already understanding bill's emotions.
reading this capter and reading bill's thoughts make me wonder too why they were choosen. and what will they do to bill as well. I hope they get better at communication so they can help eachother out.
more you got me thinking now.
Author's Response: *sighs* Oh my gosh it hasn't been that long! Yes communication is the key, Bill thinks he'll get answers if Tom can talk to him. That is part of the key, which we won't get until the end...why Bill and Tom were chosen. Wow I guess that's my theme with this story everyone is baffled. *smiles* This is more fun then I thought!
Date: 02/08/09 02:03 am Title: Chapter 2 Awake for good this time.
I've got no suggestions. Why are they here? Don't ppl know Bill's missing? He was kidnapped after all. Poor Tom, what's happening to him?
Author's Response: All questions in this chapter and no answers. The answers will come eventually. Don't worry. *grins* it's fun in the mean time though.
Date: 02/08/09 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
This is a really interesting beginning. I have so many questions. Who is he? Where is he? How'd he get there? What's happening to him? Who are those people? Does anyone know he's gone? Who is the other person?
Author's Response: Finally just decided to break down and read it? *chuckles* I have that kind of self control too! *nods sadly* *laughs more* That's a lot of questions! Don't you love that in the first chapter you don't know who's who! I thought that would be more fun.
Date: 02/08/09 12:34 am Title: Chapter 3 Reden
keep it comin!
Author's Response: *chuckles* Yes there will be more. But I have to reformat my stupid computer! I have chap 4 mostly written, it's just hand written *makes a face* I'll type it up and send it to my lovely beta asap! Glad you love it! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy!rn
Date: 01/16/09 08:12 am Title: Chapter 2 Awake for good this time.
Tom sounds like a retard..
xDD
He should, like, say that Bill's pretty or something..
xDDD
I'm bad at suggestions.
DD:
I like this though!!!
MORE MORE MORE??
Author's Response: *chuckles* I know he sounds retarded! *laughs more* But he’s not he just doesn’t speak German. Imagine if you were trying to communicate in a language you couldn’t really speak, when you do that you always sound retarded. Ha Ha Ha Yes there will be more.
Date: 01/15/09 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 Awake for good this time.
keep it comin!
Author's Response: I'm workin' on it.
Date: 01/14/09 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
You started you started you started (yay!!!) anywho you already know I love this and you Isa, for this you get Afeard update in one week you can hold me to it ^_^ LOVES!
Author's Response: *Squeeks and bounces* and *flutter claps* HOORAY!!!! Thank you ImNu!!!
Date: 01/14/09 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
oOoOoOoOhhh..
INTRIGUING.
This definitely caught my attention.
more soon, dear?((:
Author's Response: *grins* thanks...I haven't writen much beyond this...and ImNu is holding it hostage!