Date: 04/19/09 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
i love, love, love, this
story! please upload another
chapter really soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you love this *smiles* that's great. I'll update soon I promise.
Date: 04/18/09 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
God damn, lol. This story is awesome.
Please update soon :3
Much, much love =].
Author's Response: WOW now that's a review! Thanks. I'll update as soon as I can. Glad you like it!
Date: 04/16/09 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
is there an answer as to why/where they are coming any time soon? or at all?
Author's Response: Yes there is an answer to your questions and no, I can’t answer both as it would ruin the plot. They will be coming for one of the boys soon as in chapter 11 or 12 I think. There is a reason why they are coming for them but I can’t tell you because it will ruin the surprise. Everything will be answered...eventually.
Date: 04/16/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
I like this story lots, lots, lots. Although, it is confusing that Bill is teaching Tom German and then you've switched German and English. It's hard to figure out sometimes. I want to know what's going on! It's all so mysterious...
Author's Response: Rule of thumb with this story German is English and English is German, that's it. *grins* very mysterious ooooohhh *giggles* give it a little more time and it will become more clear.
Date: 04/16/09 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I love this story! You're killing me with the suspense, but I love the story anyhow.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really honored to have readers such as yourself! Thanks so much for the note and the support!
Date: 04/16/09 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
This story is pretty cool. After seeing it here for a while, I've decided to give it a shot. I know I'm not caught up yet, but I have to go to drawing class! Seriously, though, who could NOT read a story considered a mindfuck?
Author's Response: hum? most people tend to get caught up almost immediately...if you aren't drawn in yet then you might not be at all. *Shrugs and nods* but that's ok you're trying. It won't fuck with your mind until later...the details won't be revealed until much later in the game...that's where the mind fuck comes in. Thanks for trying.
Date: 04/16/09 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
Aw. I'm dying to see what happens next. Poor Tom's accent. Wow. I can't wait to see how the awkwardness ends, or continues, or whatever!
Author's Response: *chuckles* Isn't he cute, he can't pronounce anything lol. The awkwardness will end...sometime soon. *grins*
Date: 04/14/09 12:03 am Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
damn. why are they being held captive???
I love this!
Hope you post more soon, love!
:DDD
Author's Response: lol!!!! Now that is something I'm not going to tell you! It's the whole purpose of the story *giggles* I promise that it will all come out in like six chapters. You will get an answer and as ImaginaryNumbers said it will be a "mindfuck." It will come! I'm glad you love this! I'm thinking there will be more by Wednesday? Not one hundred percent on that one but pretty sure.
Date: 04/13/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
noo fml i cought up to you! i love this story sooo much. Imaginary Numbers is one lucky person. :P poor tomi tho :(
Author's Response: lol That is awful! I hate that! Now you have to wait for me to post a new chapter! But on the other hand then you get the excitment of getting that email that says that "Captive has been updated." That's always fun. I all ways get excited when the stories that I'm watching get updated. Don't worry too much I've been pretty good about updating. I'm in a zone right now so I should likely get another chapter up by Wednesday maybe? Not a hundred percent sure.
Date: 04/13/09 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
You are a sadistic writer... but I love being tortured by a plot twist. ;) I'm dying to read more... Thanks for updating, and tantalizing me even more. ^_^
Author's Response: LOL this is soooooooooo tame in comparison to what I normally read. Just wait until Bill gets pulled upstairs and you get details of someone being beaten up and tortured *grins* Also you haven't even gotten to the twisted parts of my plot yet...it will come I promise! It depends on when I get back to writing...oh and you're welcome for the update!
Date: 04/13/09 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
i absolutely love it so far! i know im pretty far behind you but im readin away!! lol :P
Author's Response: You absolutely love it? wow that's so cool! Thanks!!!
Date: 04/13/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please?
Author's Response: lololololololololololololololzzzzzzzzzz!!!
Date: 04/13/09 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
lol I can see you're enjoying driving us crazy XD every passing chapter I understand less than before. and what with the tubes ?!?!? why aren't they beating bill? btw poor tomi :'(
I need a new chappie now ^^ pleaseee
Author's Response: oh no! I’m confusing you more and more with each chapter? O_O Well lets see if I can do a recap that is less confusing…Tom speaks English no German, Bill speaks German and crappy English but isn’t allowed to speak English. He is told he’s there to teach Tom English. Tom get’s beat up…we don’t know why, because they aren’t doing anything they can think of to get the beatings. Bill hasn’t left the room since he was brought to it but is worried that he will get pulled out. Bill has been getting more and more attached to Tom over time and it seems that Tom is also getting attached to Bill. – The tubes will be explained, it’s too dark to read them right now. – Well maybe Bill hasn’t done anything to get beaten for yet?! Or more likely it’s because they are breaking Bill. Sometimes we are hurt more by watching someone else suffer…they could be softening him up and then they’ll pull him out for his turn. – I’m working on chapter 10 I have extensive notes but haven’t written it just yet.
Date: 04/12/09 11:36 am Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
your fic is so interesting. I like the fact that it's different from others. mm I'm curious to find out where they are, why they're there and why do they keep beating tom. I need looots of answers.
Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: *grins* I’m glad that you like it! It’s different then the others? Really? It’s all suspensie but it doesn’t feel very original yet. – I’m not sure it matters where they are. I have a town picked out but it’s not an key fact or part to the story. Why they keep beating on Tom is a key point to the story but it won’t be explained for a long while. Answers will come but not for a while. Hang in there, the story has to develop and then answers will come! Keep enjoying!
Date: 04/10/09 04:13 am Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
is *favoriting* this story enough for review?
xDD
more please?
Author's Response: *muwah* big kiss OMG you are so cute! And BTW totally awesome!
Date: 04/09/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
from what you said to me earlier and what happened with the water maybe Tom is setting Bill up for something big. seems like the captives want Bill and Tom to get close and that they used Tom to get Bill in the water but I still don't know why. maybe Tom can replace his spot with Bill if he cooperates with them. I don't know but Tom seems really hurt but can't shake that their orchestrating something between the two boys. like Bill is feeding into their plan somehow. well knew they were going to take someone because it's been too quiet for too long. and I'm also suspicious of why they want Bill in the shower some sort of voyeuristic sickness they have. well love that you always keep me in suspense but give little clues. just don't know what they mean yet paper, crayons, drawings, beatings, showers, just don't get the game yet or maybe I'm close. well I'll wait to see what you do next and how Tom's not the victom I set him out to be.
Author's Response: The shower, the crayons, the paper, the beatings, the drawing, Tom, Bill, the two captors; these are all pieces that fit together. You are very close to seeing that picture but all the pieces aren’t yet laid out on the table. Hold all of this information and in a few chapters take a look at what you have. You get part of the picture; you ARE on the right track. But there are twists yet to be even alluded to yet. As ImaginaryNumbers said today when she pried the full plot out of me… “it’s a mind fuck.” So just be prepared to be fuck by me *grins*
Date: 04/09/09 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
I'm tracking this. It's a fascinatingly horrible tale so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: *flutter claps and giggles* It's only going to get worse *grins* and I can't wait to tell you...
Date: 04/09/09 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
Hmm, this is interesting and...touching--the way the forced intimacy is making the two rely on each other and start to bond. I want to see where you go with this. I hope you continue to update regularly--it's been nice to see frequent updates lately. :)
Author's Response: There have been a lot of updates hasn't there? Well the story seems to be flowing fairly smoothly as well as my beta has amazing turn around time! Oh and I just discovered today you also have a story called captive...*blushes* I guess I didn't double check about the title did I? oh well!
Date: 04/08/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 Good morning
WOW LOL thats awkward! lol poor tom!
will tom ever get his revenge?
Author's Response: *grins* well yes...
Date: 04/08/09 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 7 Good morning
ok unusual Bill thing in the story to do with Tom but your explaination of wanting to be able to control something in this place was understandable. I wonder if Tom will be acting funny around Bill now because of the exposed situation. Bill needs to confess if this makes things weird from now on or just say that it's ok nothing to be scared about. but great wake up scene by the way gosh I so wish I knew what's going on in Toms head so much but I guess I just have to wait but great chapter but sorry for Tom because he so embaressed.
Author's Response: *giggles* I don't think you should feel as bad for "poor Tom" as you do *grins* there will be some twists...if I do it right, that will make you feel very differently about him...but it won't be for a while *grins* I just gave away a BIG secret right there.