Date: 04/28/09 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 5 In the dark
ahh i kind of want to see them snuggled up like that O_O lol but i was cracking up when he suddenly remembered the ex's name. it was fucking sarah! hahah
Author's Response: lol I'd forgotten about that part...hey that was funny. yea me!
Date: 04/28/09 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 Reden
oh ok now i know why i got confused -_- its because when you wrote they couldnt speak english, when bill was talking you wrote it in german >.> so that got me confused lol
Author's Response: Yes well...it's backwards in this story.
Date: 04/28/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 2 Awake for good this time.
umm i got really confused about the langauge :(
Author's Response: What part? My use of words? or the German is English and English is German part?
Date: 04/28/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
Poor Bill. I love how Tom is to him afterwards, though. Gah, I want to know what's going on! Why does Tom have to learn German? Why did they capture those two? What's with the weird sexual things they do to them? Where are they? Oh well. That just means there will be lots more story! I love long stories! (Not long as in they drag on, but long as in there is quite the plot and relationship to be developed and hell if you're not making it totally satisfying.) :D
Author's Response: Tom has to learn German because he has to communicate with Bill (double meaning there). Who said there were two? Um well the sex stuff is fun and it breaks them. They are in either the US or Germany it doesn't really matter, but you’ll have an answer to that fairly soon. The rest of the answers will follow soon after that! Actually I'm trying to wind this story down...at the most there will be 20 chapters but I'm hoping for like 18. But there will be supplementary oneshots.
Date: 04/28/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
this chapter was great, especially the ending ^^ they kissed :D I'm happy ^^
and I love tom's broken german xd it reminds me of me speaking foreign languages XDD
and although we'll probably hate tom later (i think I've read it in a comment you made in a review) for now I luv him!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wasn't the kiss so soppy and fluffy?! *giggles* awh! I love writing Tom's broken German. I have to sound out words and still try and make them make sense. Well you'll hate Tom maybe? I'm not sure I like all of my characters even knowing what I know about the entire story. You'll see.
Date: 04/28/09 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
No, it was not Tom. I'm sure of it. Well almoust, at leat ;)
Can't wait to know what will happen!
xx
Author's Response: I think I need a little bit to regroup and write some hard core notes...the rest of the story is in my head but on outlined so I'll be spending the next couple of days outlining the bits in my head so it will work out the way I need and want it to. This next part of the story is very delicate so it has to be presented properly otherwise everyone will hate me for fucking up the delivery of the story.
Date: 04/28/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
This story is so awesome. I love it. XD
I don't think you dragged it out. That might just be because I like those kinds of scenes though (espescially this chapter)...
Author's Response: I'm thinking it's going to be the only scene in the story that lasts that long. I'm glad you think it worked out ok.
Date: 04/28/09 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I feel like my review what a bit confusing XDD
for "language thing" I meant the fact that bill is spanked when he speaks English because he should speak german and all the English-German thing we had even in previous chapters. sorry for the confusion but not being english my mother tongue it's quite difficult sometimes to speak properly XD
Author's Response: ok it's the English is German and German is English confusion thing...you're not the only one to have trouble with this, I've had a few native speakers who are all confused too. It's thankfully not so important that it will make or break the story so no worries on your part ok?!
Date: 04/27/09 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
Ok from this chapter their was definitely new clues. For instance I think that the three men were Tom, Georg and Gustav. The two men in the beginning were Georg and Gustav who were showing him the video of Tom in the cell. So they are the two constantly making out. And then they blindfolded Bill so he wouldn’t know that Tom is the third guy. And then the man who “raped” Bill was Tom because he was very attentive to Bill’s needs it just seemed to fit. And now from your clues you gave me earlier it seems like Tom is in on the kidnapping and the whole situation with these two. I still don’t think I know all the specifics but I’m dam close I think. They are screwing with Bill’s head and Tom’s technically one of the captures or something like that. Can’t wait tell you reveal more I just have to see how they all got Bill involved with their sick twisted fun.
I saw a show where this girl was kidnapped and put in a basement with another girl who she thought was kidnapped too but turns out the man and her were in on the kidnapping and they were convincing with him beating the “girl-friend” and raping her than “killing her” so he can rape the real victim and she didn’t know the whole time she was think that the girl was a victim like her but was just a sick person who did this with her boyfriend. And this just reminds me of this now. I think that Tom’s with Georg and Gustav sexually and they are playing with Bill.
but I can't put my finger on why they picked Bill yet and if Tom is really accepting of there plan or is he falling for his captive Bill.
Author's Response: *crosses arms over chest and pouts* I'm not talking to you. Can you hear me ignoring you? *shoves index fingers in ears* la~la~la~la~la
Date: 04/26/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
This was different. I have no idea what's going on! Where are Bill and Tom that this would be happening? I don't understand!
Author's Response: Wow well I’ve thoroughly confused you haven’t I? They’re in the basement of three guys who are holding them captive, who pull them up for some unknown reason to beat them up and fuck them. That’s not really the question you wanted to ask you can figure that much out for yourself. What you wanted to ask was why. And that’s not something I can answer yet…but there will be an answer eventually.
Date: 04/25/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
I was also thinking that maybe it was Tom, the third one? But I'm not sure.
You really got me hooked. I just want to know what and why, this is very interesting story.
xx
Author's Response: We’ll I’m glad you’re hooked! That’s awesome! Tom could be ‘the third one’ couldn’t he…? Hum?
Date: 04/25/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
I liked the chapter despite the rape and again the language thing..mmm
for a second a thought crossed my mind.. could it be that tom is the third one?!?? I don't think so though.. it's more probable that tom is being brought in the room now that the door is being opened, who knows what twisted fantasy these men are trying to put into life..
I can't wait for 13!!
Author's Response: Yeah you liked my chapter. And language thing? What language thing? *looks around confused* What language thing? Now I’m totally confused. ‘The third one’ could be Tom couldn’t it but…? Hum? Tom could be brought into the room…oh oh *gets all excited* maybe Tom is the third and did rape him but maybe they MADE Tom do it? O_O *gasp* hum? Well anyway thirteen should be up soon.
Date: 04/25/09 09:25 am Title: Chapter 12 Play time
Holy Hell, lol. That was very.. vivid, haha.
good job XD XD XD
Author's Response: Vivid huh? Are you blushing? You're totally blushing aren't you? lol Glad you "enjoyed" it.
Date: 04/25/09 07:35 am Title: Chapter 12 Play time
Okay Cliff hangers are a necessary evil has us all coming back for more.
Author's Response: I hate cliff hangers...I had no intention of making one I just ran out of time to finish the third part of "upstairs" before I left for the weekend because I really wanted to post what I had.
Date: 04/25/09 06:17 am Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
OKay we are indeed crazy for reading your stuff, but we are just not as crazy as the one that comes up with all this crazy stuff in the first place ~Laugh~ The messed up thing is we know we all love them and would never harm them in the real world. It is just in our messed up fantasy world we do.
Author's Response: Oh yeah I know! No I don’t want any of this stuff to really happen to them…except maybe the sex…but then we really wouldn’t know which would be disappointing. But I wouldn’t really want this stuff to happen to them, that would be way too disturbing. I also would never ever EVER want them to ever get their hands on any fanfiction, now that is more disturbing then anything else I could imagine for them.
Date: 04/25/09 05:17 am Title: Chapter 4 Dinner
Such a lot confusing world they live day to day in. Also I LOVE imaginarynumbers work, she is such a Tom abuser. ~Laugh~ I am liking your work so far as well.
Author's Response: It is a confusing world for them! It’s supposed to be *grins* ImNu is like my best friend and I fangirl all over her all the time! She is a well publicized Tom abuser. If you haven’t yet you should read her best friend TokioHotelGirl she’s a Bill abuser. They write a lot of stuff together. Although THG tents to be fluffier then ImNu. And InNu tends to be more violent and graphic. I prefer violent and graphic *grins*
Date: 04/25/09 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
Wow I feel so confused while reading this. Not the kind of confused that the writing and grammar are off, it is because you feel lost. In a world that is dark and sickening. I am always one for the mindfuck fanfictions.
Author's Response: *grins* Really? That’s so awesome! I’m glad you’re enjoying this and that the tone and feel of the story is affecting you.
Date: 04/24/09 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
weird, amazing, interesting, fascinating: I still love the fic. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you still love this fic. I haven't gotten any hate mail for the sneak attack rape scene but I still feel guilty that I didn't warn you guys better.
Date: 04/24/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
ahhhh *flails* even though I read unbeta'd, I had to read this again and OMG... it's better than I though it would it be *hugs* I can't wait for the next chapter :DDD
Author's Response: You are a huge dork and I totally love you! The next chapter should be up soon like tomorrow?
Date: 04/24/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 11 From bad to worse
AHHHHH *flails* I was on edge the whole time even though I know what happens!! D"X well ._. sort of..... but really? O_o Die Magdeburger Brück? I'd think they would use Berlin or something cuz it's a bigger city xD but I've heard that Magdeburg, along with Leipzig are actually pretty famous towns. BUT OMG O_________O nnnngghhhhh... must read more *dashes away*
Author's Response: How can you be on the edge of your seat you know exactly what happens? Lol you are too funny. I think the German version of the song is as old as the English version of the song which means that Magdenburger could have been either a large town or could have merely been an important town.