Date: 05/12/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
Excellent story. I like how no one really knows what's going on, but I am a little confused...are you using German words and accent for Tom to distinguish the fact that he's actually speaking English and Bill is speaking German since all these stories have to be in English?
Author's Response: Thank you I’m glad you’re enjoying the story and all of the twists that it presents! The language thing is complicated and odd. You are not the ONLY one who has had questions or been confused. Yes you are correct. In this story I switched German and English…this mean German is English and English is German. So Tom with his American accent is learning German. But because this story is in English it’s reversed.
Date: 05/11/09 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
Because Tom likes you! They mystery has yet to be revealed, I see. Well, I will keep waiting then.
Author's Response: There's more to tell! I have ch 15 ready and waiting to be published. And I'm in a sticky part of chapter 16. It's better then it was when I was writing chapter 14 but I'm still nervous.
Date: 05/11/09 09:46 am Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
Okay.
I totally love the Tom/Bill moments here.
Fo'srs.
Can't wait for the twist.
You should just take your time and gather your thoughts then put them into writing.
Then just edit the hell out of it.
I'll be waiting for your next update!
LOVVEEE.
Author's Response: *claps* just wait for chapter 15 *bites lip* There will be a LOVELY Bill/Tom moment there too. *flutter claps* I can't wait to share my twist. I have full notes on the rest of this story 8 pages of notes. Not to fear when I get nervous I plan. I'm set but still worried about the delivery. I'll keep writing though! Next update soon!
Date: 05/10/09 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
panic or not this chapter was wonderful. you are a very good writer so have some confidence! we all belive in you! keep up the good work! ciao!
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you. I'll keep working though it because this story can't die on in my computer it has to be told.
Date: 05/10/09 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
i hope it goes well too!! and i cant wait for said pieces... *bounces impatiently* and even if by some tiny little chance you did fuck it up, we would all read it any ways and still support you so no worries
Author's Response: I have three babysitters who are making sure that I don't mess it up. Which is very nice. They raise green, yellow or red flags if they see any issues so I'm fairly sure I won't but you know it still freaks me out to think that I might do it badly.
Date: 05/09/09 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
You're a good writer. If you screw it up I'm sure we'll tell you and you can fix it. :) That's beside the point, though. I loved this chapter. Poor Bill. ;_; Update soon, please???
Author's Response: Thanks for volunteering to make sure I don't fuck it up! I have three other full time baby sitters and one other part time one who are also making sure I don't fuck it up. *grins* just wait for next chapter and the chapter after that and aw! screw it this is totally the snow ball affect it's just going to get exciting for the rest of the story and way more twisted *giggles nervously*
Date: 05/09/09 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
i luvz this=]=] plzplz update sooooonnn..thx soso much=]
Author's Response: I'm working on it!
Date: 05/09/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
i doubt that you'll fuck it up, its an awesome story, i like your writing style, and pls keep the new chapters comin fast :D
Author's Response: It's just really intimidating having people reading this and telling me they love it because then I have to worry about letting people down. I'm not sure how fast I can write each chapter...shhh keep this on the down low but I'm writing companion pieces to this at the same time *grins* there will be about 3...maybe more oneshots which are associated with this which will be published before the end of this story when I publish the "twist" that's coming up...I'm nervous and excited. God I hope it goes well!
Date: 05/09/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 14 Time to wash up again.
Don't be down on yourself, you write very well. This is one of the stories that I get really excited about when I see an update cause I know whatever it is will be great.
Author's Response: Really? That's super sweet! Every update's going to be great? *grins* I really try to NOT do filler chapters. I want every chapter to move the story along even if YOU don't know that it is indeed moving. Thank you Ms. Yellow that is very kind.
Date: 04/29/09 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
whoa! sorry about that no idea what happened..O_O i wrote something after that but i kind of forgot...im sorry lol >.>
Author's Response: So you gave me this for a review? lol
Date: 04/29/09 06:47 am Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
All feelings in these past two chapters yeah. ~Laugh~ I agree with you that would be the scariest thing ever to have TH get there hands on any of the fanfictions.
Author's Response: *blinks confused* "All feelings in these past two chapters yeah"? *shifty eyes* Thanks I think?...Yeah I never ever want them to ever read this...unless they're into it I don't want them to be given this or find it or anything non voluntary!
Date: 04/29/09 02:21 am Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
Ok so the rape was just totally awesome. But then you had to ruin a good non-con -but enjoying it moment with all that violence. Tsk tsk. Great update. Can't wait to figure out what's going on exactly
Author's Response: *giggles and snorts* Lets think about this for a minute...I had to ruin a rape scene with violence...hum? lol Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying it! I hope it will be a fun crazy twist!
Date: 04/28/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
i like that the upstairs scene went on for a bit, it made getting back to tom much better. :) i love this story!!!
Author's Response: *shrugs* There was a lot to say. It was so new! Yea back to his Tom. *grins* I love that you love this story! Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside! *grins*
Date: 04/28/09 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 13 The worst is yet to come
haha i dont really care :D i think they're great XD
Author's Response: I assume you're talking about the one chapter that strected into three? well I'm glad you liked them if that's what you are talking about.
Date: 04/28/09 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 12 Play time
omg...i dont think i ever liked a rape scene like this one O__O
Author's Response: Does that make it better or worse?
Date: 04/28/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 11 From bad to worse
haha i get the joke now ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad people think my london bridge joke is funny.
Date: 04/28/09 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 10 Where are we?
“I can’t be with you because I’m not gay, and then like two chapters later it’s like woops and he slips on a condom wrapper and falls on the other’s dick over and over until he comes all over the other’s stomach.”
Author's Response: yes?! *shifty eyes and nods* I said that!
Date: 04/28/09 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 9 I miss you
this really is fucked :( i mean wtf? why do they have them there?
Author's Response: oh-no it's too late you are fully sucked into the story...*gasp* You can't stop reading and it's just getting worse and worse for them!!! *shakes head* NO!!!! *giggles* Well you did read my note that ImNu told me this story was a mind fuck...ImaginaryNumbers told ME this story was a mind fuck...do you have any idea how bad it has to be to have HER say that to me? *nods* It's only going to get worse! Enjoy.
Date: 04/28/09 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
D: the bastards!
Author's Response: *giggles* just wait it gets worse! *giggles*
Date: 04/28/09 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 Good morning
i just about squealed reading this hahaha
Author's Response: Wait until you get to chapter 12 called play time lol