Date: 05/15/09 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 17 and then…
This was so pleasent. wow... uh... OMG TOM POWER! xDDDD -frolics off with a lipplipop-
Author's Response: *grins* I'm proud! Worked out well didn't it?!
Date: 05/15/09 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
AY VANT MOARRRRRRR PULEASSSEEE PULEASSEEE PULEASSEE!! [aww comeon how can you resist this ADOORABLE accent??] xD
Author's Response: lol it's with my beta right now. I'll post it once it comes back even though I haven't written chapter 18 yet.
Date: 05/15/09 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
i dont even have one....>.<
Author's Response: Well you get one eventually!
Date: 05/15/09 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
you know,i would love this story more if they were twins ;] But it's still perv enough and i do love it :)
please,update as soon as you can!
Author's Response: It wouldn’t be possible if they were twins especially with ‘the twist’ I have coming up. I promise that you that this story WILL be very pervy very soon! I'll update soon, not to worry.
Date: 05/15/09 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
Woo! I hope this one doesn't get shrugged off as awkwardness, too. I'm so excited.
Author's Response: It would except for what will happen in chapter 18. I'm excited that you're excited. Oh and you are my 100th review.
Date: 05/15/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
I have a suspicion: do their captors want them to "get together"? Is that why they've been left alone for so long?
Author's Response: Yes that would be correct.
Date: 05/15/09 10:32 am Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
Cliffhangers are the worst! Update again! AAAGHH!!!! : )
Author's Response: Sorry it wasn't my intention to leave you guys with a cliffhanger...but at least it's semi satisfying?! You at least know they kiss. Didn't you love the food fight?! *flutter claps*
Date: 05/15/09 10:04 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
well both parse ... O_o wow... that is an intresting place Wow its on my "to Visit" list now for no reason LOL
Author's Response: *giggles and shakes head*
Date: 05/15/09 09:52 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
Well i have been following but I felt like commenting finally and yes that is basically it and No not really i was actually almost on the floor with the food fight. and those questions I want to know them ALLL. EVERY SINGAL ANSWER! =D
Author's Response: lol on the floor like you had to duck from getting hit or you were laughing so hard that you were on the floor? *grins* *giggles* everyone wants to know the answers to those questions. Here I'll give you one for free Ramm, Germany use Google maps it isn't really even a village it's like 7 houses at the end of a 2.7km drive way. They are in the last house in the main drive.
Date: 05/15/09 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I dont know ... it was just so much I dont know so is a i donno O.O
Author's Response: Ok so it’s overwhelming and different then what you normally read. But clearly it was interesting to read all the way though. Was it specifically the food fight that threw you for a loop? Or was it just the story in general? Do you have questions? You know other then the “why is this happening to them?, where are they?, what is the purpose?” questions? Feel free to ask I’ll answer it even if it’s leading.
Date: 05/15/09 05:25 am Title: Chapter 8 Vashing up
*sob* AWWWW!!! so sad *teary eyes*
Author's Response: I know poor Tom right?! And poor Bill for having to watch it happen. It'll be ok I promise.
Date: 05/15/09 03:38 am Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
Awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next. Every time I think I've read the best chapter, you write a NEW best chapter. XD Please keep updating!!!
Author's Response: That is an AWESOME complement! OMG! Well if you loved the food fights then you are going to LOVE the next chapter I’m really proud of it. It took me two days of staring at a blank word document and then sudden inspiration to write it in 2 hours. *grins* it’s a good one! The rest of the story is going to start moving fast are you read for it? Five more chapters to go.
Date: 05/15/09 02:44 am Title: Chapter 16 Seventeen days
O.O
Author's Response: is that a good O.O or a bad O.O? lol
Date: 05/15/09 12:52 am Title: Chapter 15 Küss
I'm defo enjoying this!
It's so *good*!
Idk why I put that in between asterisks. haha. sorry.
That was sah-weeeeet.
I love love love it!
Can't wait for the onseshots and the twist!!!!!!!
DAMMIT!!!
LOVE~
Author's Response: I'm really enjoying writing it so it's just this HUGE bonus that other's like it too! I'm glad that you love it! *snuggles you* I'm really pleased with the response I've gotten from the related oneshots. I've got a little bit more to do when it comes to writing them but they should be very illuminating.
Date: 05/13/09 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 15 Küss
Oh you know, just like...where they are, why they were captured and why the stuff that is happening to them is happening to them. Poor guys...they deserve to know.
Author's Response: I promise that will all be answered fairly quickly! Most of it will be in the "reveal chapter" which is coming up.
Date: 05/13/09 12:59 am Title: Chapter 15 Küss
This chapter was excellent. Oh wow, Tom is getting so good at German. I hope they can find out more soon. And feel less uncomfortable around each other.
Author's Response: Aren’t you just so proud of Tom like he’s actually improving or something? *giggles* what is it that you would like them to find out? I only have so much longer until I can answer questions within the story because once the beginning of the end starts it’s going to be moving too quickly to add anything.
Date: 05/13/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 15 Küss
Oh you have a surprise for us. yea! I have faith in you that you wont mess up. This chapter was sweet. I would say more but I am useing my cell to readand review this.
Author's Response: Yes I have 3 of the 5 oneshots written. Thank you for having faith in me. It's so nice to hear kind words! It does help to have nice things said to me it boosts my ego and makes it easier to write. That is dedication reading and reviewing this chapter on a phone?! Wow!
Date: 05/12/09 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 15 Küss
plz update soon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: I'm working on it!
Date: 05/12/09 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 15 Küss
Great chapter. Love where this is going. And now I'm really excited about the one shots!
Author's Response: Thank you! If you love where this is going your going to love the next few chapters. *flutter claps* I'm really excited about my oneshots too! And I'm so glad that other's are also excited.
Date: 05/12/09 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 15 Küss
I'm LOVING this journey. :) Just please make sure you put links or the titles of the one-shots in your notes so I make sure not to miss them, okay? I love Tom's accent. :) It's great that Bill started the kiss, too. Ah, I just love this story, so I'm of course going to love everything about it. XD Keep writing and updating, please!!!!
Author's Response: I’m so glad that you are loving it! *nods* I will make sure that all of the captive oneshots are tied to Captive. Most definitely in a series and perhaps a link at the end when I post them? Don’t you love that Bill who’s totally freaked out by “going gay” is the one who started it?! I’m pushing through and trying to write I got to a sticky chapter so it’s slowed down but once this chapter is over it should go smoothly?!