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Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 20 Freedom

What??!?!! Well that defintely threw me off guard. Jeez this story keeps getting more and more interesting. And I'm loving the speedy updates. Great job

Author's Response: *giggles* awh well then you'll going to be totally thrown off for next chapter. More and more interesting, why thank you! I try. I'm very inspired so that helps a lot!

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 20 Freedom

NEIN!!!! bring tomi back to himm pleeeeaaaaaseee lol this chapter was good, i liked how sortof... realistic it was.. not just them wandering off into the sunset happy rainbow cupcake lalala.

loved the twist... sadly :P

Author's Response: *giggles* Not to worry things will work out as they should! Nope no sunsets for these two! Thank you for noticing my effort for realism and realistic outcomes for actions and events! I put a lot of effort into trying to make my stories seem like they really could happen. *giggles* what twist? You haven't seen twisted yet *grins and evil grin*

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 20 Freedom

how could u do that=[ update soon plz

Author's Response: *giggles* awh you're going to send me hate mail next chapter. *grins* It'll be ok! I promise!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

update soooonn plzplz thx=]

Author's Response: soon!

Reviewer: juzziiewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

OMFG!! finally!!!! i have been like dying reading this!!! i want them too get out soooo bad! :( ohh mein gott! please upload soon! i am dying thinking about what is hopefuly gonna happen! please upload another chapter this story is soooo great! xxxx

Author's Response: Yes they are finally free. What is it that you hoped would happen next? I'll be updating soon. I promise.

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

Well you can't just let them go without telling us why they were there in the first place! Aggggh! TELL ME!

Author's Response: Have I left any holes yet? No I don't think so! Not to worry. Everything will be explained eventually!

Reviewer: anorexia_damn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

um.. well,that's not what i wanted.I really want to tease them a bit more down there,ut free is free-there's no dealing in that.I still hope something more happens :)
and yeah,i have two more nails left-i just gott some black and whight nail polish and it's ruined beacause of you.You owe me a manicure :)

Author's Response: Have I really fucked with your mind yet?! No I don't think so! So just suck it up because the twist will come soon enough and then you will worship me! And by the end I won't owe you a manicure I'll owe you some fingers because you will bite them off and not even notice. Trust me it’s going to get a lot worse! *grins*

Reviewer: Kablatow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 07:29 am Title: Chapter 19 Hope

this is an amazing story. i couldnt stop reading it. you have some talent, brah.

Author's Response: *curtsies* thank you. That's a lovely complement.

Reviewer: bacettina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 19 Hope

Yeahh Bill you're my hero!!
Finally! but I guess something more is gonna happen.
Can't wait to find out what!
Great chapter!!

Author's Response: I know he was like so horror movie hardcore. Of course something more is going to happen! *grins* can't wait to share what happens. *giggles* Thanks.

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 06:01 am Title: Chapter 19 Hope

are they going to stay free or are they going to get thrown back in by the third one? thank you for letting them out btw

Author's Response: *grins* you'll see! It'll get messy soon. Yeah you're welcome!

Reviewer: Kiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 05:23 am Title: Chapter 19 Hope

OMG. i have one pinky left, everything else is magically gone LOL PLEASEEEE MOARRRRRR I NEEEED MOARRRR yesyesyes theyre finally out HURZAHHH!!

Author's Response: You're going to loose more of them soon! Sure I'll post more NOW! Poof!

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/09 12:57 am Title: Chapter 19 Hope

D:



they are freee!!!! WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY?!

geez i feel so happy for them >o

Author's Response: Sweet freedom!

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

no fingernails left at all! Fantastic chapter, poor Bill! Having to dispatch the Gs... ah, well. :) Keep writing and updating, please. :)

Author's Response: None no finger nails at all? Wow! I'm very proud. I know it was hard to want to kill them but really fun to write it! Not to worry chapter 20 is already at the beta's. *grins*

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

Yay! They're free! Now what happens? I really wanna know, please??

Author's Response: Yes they are free...you'll see. I'll post ASAP lol I rhymed the entire thing!

Reviewer: DaveyDel1Cious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

I have one. One finger nail left. ZOMG I cannot believe what happened. Hell, where do they go now? Is Tom going back home? SHoot, I'm just the question girl, aren't I? Maybe, for the first time, I will patiently await what is to come because I am so, so happy and no longer in panic mode.

Author's Response: lol one finger nail left! oh no! lol What happens next I'm sorry to say will put you back into panic mode. *cringes* sorry!

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

omg. mind blowing. pleeeaaaasseeee follow up-im glad theyre free but i love this story too much for it to be over!!

Author's Response: Not done yet! Not to worry, not enough closure yet. *grins*

Reviewer: Sionel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

ok wow, didn't see that one coming...

I gotta go recover now!

Author's Response: What the deaths? or them being free? *grins* ha ha got you! lol You won't see what's planned next either *grins*

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

I have doubts =__=; I doubt they are fully free yet... this gave me chillz.

Author's Response: *grins* good reader! Youre starting to learn. They aren't as free as they could be...yet. Chills?! AWESOME!!!! Thanks!

Reviewer: slicedtopieces Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 19 Hope

Ahhhhh yes! Keep going!! This has gotten so exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully they walk outside and get attacked by them and then everybody dies and then the end!! Or something like that... Great job as always

Author's Response: I have killed as many characters as I ever planned to do! The rest should just be a twisted mass of OMG WTF!

Reviewer: anorexia_damn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1 Wake up

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
ARGH...this is the story of my life!!It's even more twisted that i expected and i'm sure i've readed a better one only once :)
Please,more!

Author's Response: Wow that's a complement! Thank you! The twist is coming. I promise and you won’t be disappointed! It’s, well, twisted. *grins*

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