Holy

fucking

shit

That was actually hard to read, lol. God damn, anonymous... you're talented as hell lol. And I only figured out Tom was a bad guy when the officer told Bill they had some "news" about Tom. Bill thought he was dead, but I didn't >:D!

Anyway. That was a very... "affecting" chapter, lol. Good job.

Author's Response: L*O*L* ha ha ha ha ha Now that was more of the type of response I was hoping for *grins* Hard to read? Nah it was interesting. It was like wow that happened to Tom? whoa?! News about Tom, that was your clue? hum? I tried to give clues along the way but as subtle at possible. This of course was omni/Bill POV so we only understood what he saw and nothing more so if Bill didn't see it then neither would the readers. *grins* I affected you, awesome!!!!!

let me see.. I don't know why I can't hate tom..
maybe that's because he was so sweet and loving to bill.. well at least when they where in the bunk.. upstairs I guess he was the "third one", wasn't he??
all of this would explain why he ran away.
But what shocked me were the reports of all of those boys' deaths.. so now our sweet and caring dreadlocked boy is a brutal murderer o.O
I can't believe it, for me there's somebody putting false evidence on the murder scenes , who is trying to have tom thrown to jail.
and after all tom didn't manage to have the control he longed for if those other men raped and beated him (well.. thinking about it, it could be some sadistic fantasy of his..)
I don't know what to think anymore, I'd better shut up and wait for the next chapter now xd

Author's Response: I know it's hard to hate him even though you know what he's done. Yes Tom was 'the third one'. But even as the third one Tom was sweet to Bill. Yes Tom ran away not to get caught. I know the deaths are hard to swallow but they will be explained in a little bit! Nope not false evidence those boys are dead because of Tom. Nope Tom really did do it! Your very close with the sadistic fantasy. Awh I made you all dizzy with worry and mind fucking. *pouts* hope it gets better soon!

I was like O_O 'Huh?! No, no, I don't believe it... OMK, nOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!'

Go on!!!!

Author's Response: *giggles* I would have loved to see your face! Yes there will be more. I'm working on it.

im sure that tom is the captor isnt he?

Author's Response: ttttbbbbpppphhh!!!

omg!! what a horrible cliffie!! I jsut found this story and read it all in one go and i love it!! I'm so glad they are free now! they went through such awful awful things! But I really really hope you update soon because i want to know what happened to tom and want him and bill back together!!!! as for a scene from tom's point of veiw--though i havent looked at your other one shots yet so you may have done this--but the morning bill wakes up aroused and tom is all guilty. or when tom first sees bill. okay, i'm off to see what else you have written. i'm going to track this story, i cant wait for more!! keep up the great work!!

Author's Response: Horrible cliffhanger? Really I thought it was kind of a nice one considering all the information I have in my brain it could have been a lot worse. =P Yes well they’re free well one of them is free anyway. *grins* That was mean because you’ll think I meant one think and I really meant another. *grins* I update very regularly. You missed it but last week I posted *scratches head* four chapters I think. I’ll get on those oneshots. You’re going to check out what else I’ve written. Well then I hope you stay away from my het story. Some people love it but I don’t…not any more it was a good idea but meah I don’t think the writing is very good anymore. Thanks I will keep writing. :)

LMAO Mmmmm ^-^ Reading everybody's reviews from this chapter makes me giggle!!! xD You really are an evil mindfucker!!! But I know that you're about to mindfuck them more! ;D And yes... I can expect the hate mail from them all once you do what you're going to do. *giggle* xDDD This is really amazing, by the way!!! *-* I actually O_o had a... dream about it last night? I think >.> I can't remember very well lol.

Author's Response: They are going to shit bricks lol!!! The hate mail is going to be glorious! Amazing?! Thank you Fishie!!! That's so cool a dream. If you remember it let me know.

That was evil...purely evil...but good.

Author's Response: You haven't even begun to see evil yet!!!

*scowls* you evil evil midfucker, you!
and here i was all happy they got out... though i was kinda expecting that to happen, seeing as how if tom hadn't disappeared, the story would have had nowhere else to go and would have ended. And judging by the not completed indicator imma guessing your gonna be evil, drag this out and get more tomi abuse... am i right?
or more billa killin' the bad motherfuckers. no, to the first, yes to the second, throw in some more billa-tomi sex and your readers shall be happy. but judging by this sudden twist, meesi think not. anyhoo, fucking epic love it, so on, so forth, and yeah, congrats, you successfully fucked my mind. yay you! half serious, half sarcastic.
*bowes out from this epic review* see ya next time!

Author's Response: *coughs* sweetheart want to know the best part about your assumption...it's wrong it's all basically wrong! I was going to tell you more but it will be more fun to get the hate mail when you see what I really have planned!

lol. Darn. I tried! Great chapter. :) I re-read the entire fic. Again. :p

Author's Response: I know you tried! lol And again thanks for the help! Yes there might be secrets in there?!

Ah! I had a feeling something shitty was gonna happen when Tom was being led away.

Author's Response: Good guess. *grins* I'll tell you a secret now it's only going to get worse!