Here is my hate mail: I love you! :D

You did a great job with this story and I was really confused about captors. I should listen what my mind first tells me ;) I'm happy to hear that my review was one of which gave you new ideas for the story.

Ok, there was no kittens, puppies or rainbows but I'm happy! Everything is fine in their world, and mine too ;)

Thank you! Can't wait for the oneshots!

xx

Author's Response: You love me! *frowns* that’s not hate mail at all *giggles* Confused? But that was the purpose, you were seeing this as an omni/Bill POV but I only told you what Bill saw so if he was confused then you were confused. Yes without your small guess I wouldn’t have been less inclined to confuse Bill more. Nope no kittens, puppies or rainbows but happy none the less. I have four oneshot requests, not sure which ones I’m going to do and I have one in a notebook which hasn’t been typed yet.

Dude...my initial reaction?Well,right now i'm fucking up and eating my hair,because there is really nothing left from my fingers :0
I can't believe there can be a story like this!It's so different....and so beautiful and soo interesting and i love it so much!It feels like i'm in some kind of another reality,nothing from the real world bothers me when i'm reading this shit..
You are a G-E-N-I-O-U-S!!!!
Now i finally understood why Tom and the third one cant rape Bill together :S
and oh,poor baby Bill ;(((

Author's Response: LOL Oh –no you’re down to your hair?! lol ha ha ha Different yes! Beautiful? I’m not sure it’s beautiful?! Interesting? Lovely! I suck you in enough that you can’t get out? Wow! That’s pretty awesome! I’m a genius? That’s pretty awesome too, thanks!!!! No Tom not raping Bill because it’s another way to break down his defenses. He expects to be hurt so, its part of doing exactly the opposite of what he expects. If he expects to be hurt you can’t hurt him. But hurting him is breaking him too! Everything they do is to break him down further.

I had a feeling. Though I still feel that Tom is the victim in a way. I mean look that the poor boys past. Dont blame him for being so fucked up. ~laugh~ a sick twisted part of me wants Bill to find Tom. I think Bill really truly helps him. Though Bill is going to have to hide Tom if that is the case. Cause Tom is wanted for murder and a shit load of other charges. Makes sences that he was in the U.S. Wait . . . . he was from germany before that means he knew what bill was saying all this tim and was just playing dumb. Smart man.

Author's Response: Tom was definitely a victim and he is still damaged from his amazing horrible past. I think that Bill really helps Tom too. *grins* Tom is wanted for murder and I would hide from Tom and Bill does hide but not as well as we could hope. LOL I confused you didn’t I? US no Germany. They were and are in Germany. Tom is very smart, VERY smart!

I hope that like Bill will be able to change Tom.
Like show him what its like to be loved and that the fic wont stop here lol

And im wondering why Tom wanted to learn German..and why they couldnt speak english?

Author's Response: Bill will not be able to change Tom. Tom does love Bill, very much! *smiles sweetly*

u cant do this 2 me=[=[ update soon

Author's Response: I already did it to you *grins* I'll update soon enough. Don't I always?!

i didnt "know" it, but i had an idea, a few times throughout the story when he would do things, and then like, the third one thing, and why hadnt tom checked the door before bill got there etc... but still you definitely thoroughly fucked my mind. i loved it!!! is there anything else coming on where the eff tom is??

Author's Response: I know he was just kind of...off, like it just didn't seem right. But every thing in that place was wrong so you just brushed it off as a weird factor of that place. *Grins* The door, haven't you stood outside of a class room waiting for someone to unlock a door but never checked it? It happens you assume it's locked but did you bother to check? Evil little twist I know! There are three more chapters, that's one chapter and two epilogues...maybe only one but I'm not 100%. And then a oneshot or so (one of the oneshots is where Tom is now).

I already posted my freak out as a comment on the one shot you wrote from the captors point of view. But I am going to say that this is an awesome story-you're definitely keeping it interesting

Author's Response: *grins* yea!

yeah sok, i just want them together...

Author's Response: you'll see

Hey ISA, long time no chat, my fault I know. I just wanted to let you know I'be been reading this and loving it. In the beginning it had a slightly dull pattern to it but it quickly lost that and drew me in and we have now reached the point where I'm at the edge of my seat. Your writing has also matured, I'd like to point out. Just comparing this chapter to the first one is amazing.

I really want Bill to be able to change Tom for the better but I know what you are/were planning and that when you have a plan you stick to it. It'll be an amazing ending, I just wish Bill could have a positive effect on Tom. Also, is Tom ever going to explain himself to Bill? I figure when they see each other again Bill will be angry at him.

Author's Response: The beginning was supposed to have a dull pattern; Bill is supposed to be lulled into boredom so that all changes are good, even when they're bad. Plus how much excitement can you get in a basement? You're on the edge of your seat? But you know what happens *grins* Thank you! I can feel a change in my writing. I feels better, it sounds better. I don't read it and think "YUCK" which is sooo nice that someone other then me noticed, thank you! I've got something planned it's a little different then from the last time that we spoke. I think the change is good. Bill will change Tom but it won't be in a way that we see. I'm still working out how to explain it. I'm sure it will just happen, like other bits of my writing. Bill's not going to be angry *grins* you'll see!

WTF?...pleeeeaaaassssee!!! update!!!

Author's Response: lol I'll update soon.