Date: 05/26/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
Aw. it's over. it's really over. :( Can't wait to read the epilogue. :) It's sweet that Tom's back!
Author's Response: Yup it's really over. I love that Tom's back too. I'll post the epilogues and the companion onshots soon.
Date: 05/26/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
a-frickin-mazing. this is exactly how i hoped you would end it. :D not that i wanted it to end, whenever i would see this story updated i did a lil happy dance, thanks youuu soo much for writing it!
Author's Response: a-frickin-mazing. Well that's fan-fuckin-tastic! lol Thanks!!!! Really that was your perfect ending to this twisted tail? I get happy dances?! *giggles* you'll have to send me video lol! Yeah I've got all sorts of stories in my head it's nice to get them put on paper every once in a while. Glad you love it!
Date: 05/26/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
...*wide eyes* you have GOT to be joking me!!!!! its over??? ALREADY???? omg!!!!!!!! NOOOOO *screams 'NO' 99090927373 times* PLEASE NO!!!!!!! I VANT MOOOOOARRRRRRRRRRRRR!!! *collapses in sobs of pain and grief and anxiety* nononono... *whimpers* D-D-Don't y-you wuv meh??
Author's Response: I knew I'd get a few screamers! Yes it's really over. Did you have a heart attack? Do you want me to call the emergency line and get you an ambulance? There will be a few more oneshots in the captive world that will add more to the story…I might write a future oneshot with Tom, Bill and *coughs* having a hot threesome or something along those lines but I’m not sure?!
Date: 05/26/09 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
OH I LOVED IT.... that was such a twisted version of Stockholm Syndrome!! Perfection! You did SUCH A FANTASTIC JOB!
I'm sad that it's over but can't wait to see whether Bill is forced to do the same to others, of if Tom actually fell for Bill..
Author's Response: Yes twisted stockholm syndrome that was my goal! *nods* really a fantastic job? wow! Thank you! *shifty eyes* can't they do both?! *grins*
Date: 05/26/09 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
This line: "The kiss is more like coming home than being in his flat or hugging his mother."
I'm curious to see what you do with the epilogue; hopefully you bring some closure to two disturbed people, but I've enjoyed the journey.
Author's Response: What about that line? I assume that it is a very powerful line for you. That's good I guess if I guessed right? It's not exactly closure I have planned...more an explination of where they are going now. I'm going to double check it with ImNu and then we'll see.
Date: 05/26/09 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
I think it was around... chapter 12. For some reason, I allllways kind of had this thought in the back of my mind that the third was Tom, but you did such a great job with the twist that I could have gone either way! Really, you must understand how impressed I am with this story - it's truly an exciting piece of literature, despite it being fanfiction, and I'm so anxious to see how Bill copes now.
Author's Response: I did try to leave a trail of bread crumbs but I made sure that they animals of the forrest got most of them so my readers couldn't find their way back *grins* A truely exciting piece of literature? wow that's so cool thank you!
Date: 05/26/09 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
aww update soon plz thx
Author's Response: Soon!
Date: 05/26/09 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
*Bawls eyes out* NOOO! It can't be over!
Author's Response: awh it has to end sometime...all good things come to an end. I glad you love it though!
Date: 05/26/09 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 Wake up
This story is a total mind-fuck, in the best possible way. Amazing job really.
Author's Response: *giggles and covers smile with hands* thank you! *blushes*
Date: 05/26/09 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
woahhhh!!!!!! that was unexpected. but still really good (Y) such a great story.
Author's Response: *grins* isn't that like a generalization for my story.
Date: 05/26/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
Interesting. Ah! Bill was brainwashed, kind of. I dunno what to make of this. This is clearly not a healthy way to start a relationship...you know, making them think they've been captured and gaining their trust through lies. But the damage is already done so all I can say is that I hope they go forth and...not rape anyone else. Yes, I would like Tom to stop raping people. That would be nice. And for Bill to never start. Oh man. What to say...oh man.
Author's Response: It’s called Stockholm syndrome “is a psychological sometimes seen in abducted hostages, in which the hostage shows signs of loyalty to the hostage-taker, regardless of the danger or risk in which they have been placed.” (Wikipedia) *coughs and looks around* Rape is such a strong word…ooh look over there something shiny!!!
Date: 05/26/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
Ah-haaaa, he' taking Billa, lol!! Tomi got him after all!
Author's Response: *giggles* yes *grins* that's how I felt about it too! *giggles*
Date: 05/26/09 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
Awwww yay! I loved the whole story
Author's Response: *blushes* thank you!!! That's a very nice to say! Thank you!
Date: 05/26/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
O_O I totally forgot about this "ending" xDDD I don't know why I forgot!!! I almost squealed with glee when they kissed xDDDDD *wiggles around in chair* :DDD
Author's Response: *giggles* you are sooo cute! I glad you loved it!
Date: 05/26/09 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
:( but tom is bad :(
I wanted him to get to be nice.
But awww I love this fic, its adddictive
Author's Response: Nope Tom is an evil villain and you still love him, don't you hate that ;) *grins* I’m glad you love this fic and that it’s addictive! I was addictive to write too!
Date: 05/26/09 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
no no no no nonononono!!!!!!!!! You can't be serious!!! You're just fucking with our heads!!!
*small voice* aren't you...?
pwease pwease pwease!!! continue it!
oh, and i read you're oneshots, made the whole things a lot more clearer and everything made perfectly sence. <3
Author's Response: *ducks* I’m serious. *smiles* I’m not *shakes* I’ve been evasive and avoided the truth but I’ve never lied to anyone about this fic. I wouldn’t know where to keep it going?! I’ve had this story planned out for five months you don’t change direction mid stream it’s just wrong. I’ll write a few more oneshots and that will have to be enough of the captive world to satisfy you. I'm glad the oneshots helped that's their purpose. This fic was so complicated I have to write stories that help explain everything.
Date: 05/26/09 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
-shudders- i was sad for Bill the last chapter but this chapter I was kinda scared when he saw Tom
Author's Response: Don't be sad Bill's happy. I like to think he got what he wanted, Tom!
Date: 05/26/09 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 21 Explanations
HOLY FUCK! I didn't know at all that Tom was the bad guy! FUCK FUCK FUCK! I just want to -headdesk- forever! How come I didn't see that coming?!? Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmm
Author's Response: *giggles* *dances around* I got you, I got you, I got you! *grins* I did a good job of distraction and confusion!
Date: 05/26/09 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
With this last chapter I was able to sense how much tom has hurt Bill.
but it was nice to have them reunited even if I couldn't look at tom the same way I did before knowing he was one of the captors.
I must admit I though bill would have freaked out seeing tom, instead you surprised me, once more^^
Needless to say I'm too sad this has come to an end, though..I'll watch out for the one-shots.
u sure no sequel could come out of this? maybe with the two of them touring around the world doing what tom and the g's did before XD
btw congratulations for this brilliant fic!
I loved every chapter of it!!
much love
Author's Response: Yes Tom has twisted Bill and broken him in ways he didn’t know he was broken. I love the oatmeal part *giggles* it’s the epitome of how broken he is, he tries to replicate what he’s been though even when he’s as out of that basement as he can physically be. The first time seeing Tom is supposed to worry you. Bill really knows nothing about Tom and what happened to the boys before him. He is terrified and at first really doesn’t think its Tom. But then…well you know. I’ll be posting the oneshots as I write them. I’m still not sure how many I’ll write. I guess it depends on how into them people are and if I get burnt out on writing them. No no sequel not unless something really great inspires me to create a great storyline. At this point it would just be sooooooo boring. Brilliant? Thanks!
Date: 05/26/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 22 Scene of the crime
Awwwww it's over v.v. A part of me was hoping Tom would find his way to the loony bin to get the help that he needs, but a bigger part was hoping he'd come back =]. Which he did ^^. I'm just wondering now how they are going to live together o.O
God damn, this was a good story lol. I'll be looking forward to the epilogues and one shots.
Author's Response: Yes officially it’s over. Nope no looney bin for sweet Tom. Yes he came back and got Bill. *smiles* Living together will be different and not as different then how he’s lived with Tom before. *grins*