Date: 11/13/14 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 25 & Epilogue
"Yeah. I like my girls to be flat-chested, have a dick, and look a lot like me," Tom answered, sitting on the bed next to Bill. "You wouldn't happen to know anybody like that, now would you?" LMFAO!!!!!!!
Date: 11/13/13 12:27 am Title: Chapter 25 & Epilogue
This was such a fun story to read! Very original and very wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to read! ^^
Date: 08/26/12 11:51 am Title: Chapter 25 & Epilogue
viofwbnrienbrnob MYEAHS!
Author's Response: asdfhjdlfj;; I don't understand your language! D: I'm GUESSING this is a good review, though xD
Date: 08/26/12 11:29 am Title: Chapter 19
I actually face palmed at that last line.
Author's Response: I'm a geek, what can I say?
Date: 08/26/12 11:18 am Title: Chapter 16
ERMAHGERD LOVEX!!! HAWWTT!
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT?!
Date: 08/26/12 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
ERMAHGERD!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :)
Date: 05/07/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 25 & Epilogue
I love the fairy tale aspect of this story.
Trading a baby for endless whipped cream? Such a great plot idea!
I really enjoyed this! :]
Author's Response: Thanks! It was actually taken from Rapunzel, if that helps. rn
Date: 02/17/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehehe the story is rather interesting so far...I like how you twisted and played on the original Rapunzel. One of my fav. stories...I can't wait to see what happens. *goes to read next chapter*
ohh, and there was a mistake I think you missed..."As son as Tom went to take a bite" 'son' is supposed to be soon :-P sorry for pointing that out :-(
Author's Response: lol Keep pointing them out! one day, I'll actually get around to editing them all xD
Date: 01/20/10 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
What I'm wondering is how Jörg remembers Bill and his birth? I'm just curious. It's probably that the only people who remember are his parents, but I thought that was a bit weird. Oh well, your amazing plotline makes up for it x]
I'm still not happy with Bill's "mom" >___> Tom is just trying to be friends with him and she doesn't need to send the hyter after him. Geez Louise.[/dork]
Date: 01/20/10 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Okay...I'm guessing you're not a girl, then," Tom joked, tickling the cat's belly, persuading it to turn over.
I'm surprised you didn't write something like "Tom looked over the cat's stomach, surprised to see HUGE BALLS hanging from it. 'Oh, I guess you're not a girl, then,' he said." I'm half-surprised you didn't do that, knowing you love smut so much xD
But anyway. I love how Bill turns back to human at midnight, that's so epic. I've always liked things that transform into other things for part of the day for some reason. It's just something I really like to read. And the note was great. If Tom hadn't gotten the pawprint I would have laughed.
Oh, and I forgot to mention that last chapter I think it's so sweet how Tom takes Bill in and like zips his hoodie over him to keep him dry and shit. It's so cute x]
I'm going to take a picture of my kitten and show you cuz now I look at him and think how cool it would be if he was actually Bill in disguise xD Then again, I'm always awake at midnight and he never transforms into Bill so that kind of throws that one right out the window >___> Such a cute kitten, though, even if he does use me as a litterbox and hates my very existence.
Author's Response: LOL My cat inspired this fic :) I always let her in at night (not supposed to, since she's a barn cat) and she seriously acts like Bill in this fic ^^ And I was gonna re-write this fic into an original fic, but...it was so freakin' cliched and horrible when I re-read it -.- I was like 'uh...maybe not' lol
Date: 01/20/10 03:31 pm Title: Prologue
So I'm reviewing all these chapters again because I decided my earlier reviews were inadequate and because I really feel like reading all the stories I first read when I came here again :]
I love the whipped cream idea. It was a great start to the story, really original. I wouldn't have thought of trading the whipped cream for Bill, that was great. I probably would just have had someone steal Bill because I'm so boring like that. And the whole thing with making the nurse say that Bill died in labor, that was neat. It's like it never even happened at all @___@
I love this story and I'm going to enjoy reading it again x]
Date: 01/14/10 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Teehee. Bill likes chicken and gravy. :D
Aha! Friskies!
WHAT was in that orange juice I had for breakfast? XD
Author's Response: We're having the FUNNIEST convo in the Schrei box about the Geo smiley and pot...only I couldn't figure out what plant they were talking about xDDD
Date: 01/14/10 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Psht! Who needs a normal cat? For really! I'd rather have one that's half boy anyway. More fun. XD
You'll have to excuse me. I'm hyper. :D
I don't know the original Rapunzel, and I barely know the story of Rumpelstiltskin.(sp?) =/ Time to google! :P
Author's Response: lol just look up the original versions of ALL the fairy tales LOL Like with Cinderella...her stepsisters cut off parts of their feet to fit into the slipper.
Date: 01/14/10 03:12 am Title: Prologue
Can you believe the site's back?! I'm so happy! I do believe I told you that I'd be reading this. I'm liking it so far, by the way. :)
*Tries not to fangirl.* XD
Author's Response: I honestly don't mind the fangirling lol :D
AND I KNOW!!
Date: 09/14/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 25 & Epilogue
ZAUBERMAUS!!! Oh mein gott. This was so sweet. I just read the entire thing in one sitting even though I was planning on working on a oneshot for a contest entry. It was amazing and I was addicted :]
I just...I adore this. I adore your writing. I'm off to read the sequels now.
Liebe, Savannah.
Author's Response: OMG...I now have 250 reviews for this fic O.O THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Yes, er, anyway >.> Thank you very, very much. Seriously. This has probably been one of my best stories, in my opinion.
Author's Response: OMG...I now have 250 reviews for this fic O.O THANK YOU SO MUCH!
Yes, er, anyway >.> Thank you very, very much. Seriously. This has probably been one of my best stories, in my opinion.
Date: 08/09/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 16
Im glad Bushido is nice in this one xD ever since i read THD i totally changed my outlook of Bushido :D Awesome chappy!!!
Author's Response: I'm gonna feel really stupid, because I have a feeling that I know the answer, but...what does THD stand for? XD
Date: 08/09/09 03:20 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG. this is TOO good. Bill loves Tom, not knowing they're twins. Anis thinks Bill loves Tom in a brotherly way, not knowing Bill doesnt know Tom's his twin... THIS IS AWESOME PLOTTING!!! COMPLETELY AMAZING!!
Date: 08/09/09 03:15 am Title: Chapter 14
OMGOMGOGMGOMGOGM
NO
BUSHIDO GO AWAY GO AWAY GO AWAYYY!! IM GONNA BAITCHA FAICE OFF!!! RWAWR!!
Date: 08/09/09 02:20 am Title: Chapter 12
DIE, BUSHIDO, DIE!!! And take the whipped cream with you!!!
Date: 08/09/09 02:15 am Title: Chapter 11
EEK
KISSES!!!! and poor Tomi... :'( Im glad hes not permanently damaged!!!!